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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin and rxsberry

for rxsberry

+first impression; 16'20

at first when i saw the poster, i was a little freaked out because of the size of his head. like when you click this poster you get surprised to find a big [but cute] head looking at you. i don't think the title is appropriate for the poster either. this is supposed to be like a happy and simple theme, right? but the title seems angst-y.  the font is simple, too.
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 14'15
the color pink suits the theme simple and light, so good job. but everything's a little too pink, i was hoping you would change the color of the font.
+picture usage; 13'15
again, his picture is a little too big for the poster. chanyeol and the title doesn't match. he's all happy and then the title seems a little alarming. i also notice something on his face. when you look close it kind of looks like an article in a magazine, why is that there?
+typography; 22'25
the title, once again, doesn't seem matching to the theme and to the picture. i was hoping you'd change the font as well. it seems a little simple and not eye-catching. the credit is a little out of place, too, i'm hoping you'd put it at the bottom left corner, because credits don't really matter in a poster.
+attractivity; 23'25
the pink effect seems pretty, and even with the mistakes, you still managed to make it look presentable.

+overall; 88'100


jinjinjin says:
sorry for the long wait once again, i hope i taught you well. good luck. fighting!
 

 

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unknownUserwhat
#1
username: unknownUserwhat
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/RA794fC.png
theme: romance
password: itismine
jreboron
#2
username: jreboron

graphic link: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/stepsister_zps04b1e218.jpg

background: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/background01_zps1f0b3e1c.jpg

theme: Angst

password: itismine
kariwinn
#3
Username: kariwinn
graphic link: http://kariwinn.deviantart.com/art/Trouble-371344645
theme: romantic, cute
password: itismine

I've only been doing graphics for around a month, so I hope that you'll help me improve. Thanks!! ^^
LinhGerly
#4
username: LinhGerly
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/3rgtBBu.png
theme: romantic, light fantasy
password: itismine
fationist
#5
Chapter 45: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! *o*
I see what you mean when you said the picture(yes it's Yuri) is too big and the text is too big ><
well I put angst and romance because that's what the story is about >< But I guess that means the poster doesn't quite fit with the story. hmm.. maybe i'll replace on of the Yuris with the male character! owo anyway thank you for the review and sorry for commenting late x_x <33
khlozzer
#6
Chapter 46: Thank you for the review! <3
lol brown.
I'm kinda low on color usage otl.
Thank you again!
star_x #7
I want to send in a request too but i think i will wait for you to complete the requests first. Hwaiting! ^^
proximaC #8
Thank you so much for your time to write the review. Appreciate it very much, darling. ^^