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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin

for chubbunny

+first impression; 16'20

the first thing i noticed were the boxes. i'm not quite... amazed with them. and i have an advice. if you put a shadow on baekhyun's first box, put another shadow on the second box, so they're going to be fair. do you get what i mean? and the typography is pretty for a cute themed poster. it's just a little little, you know? the poster looks a little empty, too.
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 15'15
good choice of colors. it matches the theme!
+picture usage; 1215
i like chanyeol's picture. he looks cute my only problem with it, is the emptiness of the picture. why don't you put a shadow or for him? it would have been cute like this ( the  shadow of the girl ) it has two colors right? why don't you use yellow for the peach part, and peach for the yellow part? simply like that. and the boxes... i'm not really sure about that.
+typography; 22'25
the font for the title is cute! good job for that! i have another problem though... ( forgive me lol ) one font for the quote and credit...? no no, hon. it should have been a better font, and the other part of the quote on the right side... can you put them a little closer so that there's no big space?
+attractivity; 21'25
cute poster!

+overall; 86100


jinjinjin says:
i hope i could help. i had so many to complain about~ sorry, and fighting for you future works!
 

 

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unknownUserwhat
#1
username: unknownUserwhat
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/RA794fC.png
theme: romance
password: itismine
jreboron
#2
username: jreboron

graphic link: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/stepsister_zps04b1e218.jpg

background: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/background01_zps1f0b3e1c.jpg

theme: Angst

password: itismine
kariwinn
#3
Username: kariwinn
graphic link: http://kariwinn.deviantart.com/art/Trouble-371344645
theme: romantic, cute
password: itismine

I've only been doing graphics for around a month, so I hope that you'll help me improve. Thanks!! ^^
LinhGerly
#4
username: LinhGerly
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/3rgtBBu.png
theme: romantic, light fantasy
password: itismine
fationist
#5
Chapter 45: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! *o*
I see what you mean when you said the picture(yes it's Yuri) is too big and the text is too big ><
well I put angst and romance because that's what the story is about >< But I guess that means the poster doesn't quite fit with the story. hmm.. maybe i'll replace on of the Yuris with the male character! owo anyway thank you for the review and sorry for commenting late x_x <33
khlozzer
#6
Chapter 46: Thank you for the review! <3
lol brown.
I'm kinda low on color usage otl.
Thank you again!
star_x #7
I want to send in a request too but i think i will wait for you to complete the requests first. Hwaiting! ^^
proximaC #8
Thank you so much for your time to write the review. Appreciate it very much, darling. ^^