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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin

for zillionpies

+first impression; 18'20

i like your colors! i like how you blended them as well. the pictures look a little low quality, though. the bird textures were a great touch. it makes up the emptiness of the poster. good! i also like the brush you did at kris' side.
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 15'15
for a romance poster, i really like your colors!
+picture usage; 14'15
the pictures are a little low quality, especially lay's. but it still looks pretty. i like the bird textures, once again.
+typography; 22'25
even though your fonts are a little simple... it matches with the poster. your title is a little too little, don't you think? but i guess it's alright since you emphasized it by putting a white rectangle behind it. you just used one font, am i right? i bet it would look better if you used another font for the title or the quotes. and the font size for the credits and the other quote at the bottom are in the same size. it would look better if you minimized ( i don't know what other word i can put ) the credits. as you know, people don't focus on the credits.
+attractivity; 24'25
the poster is very pretty. keep it up.

+overall; 93'100


jinjinjin says:
just because she's my sister it doesn't mean i'll give her a high score. she deserves it for this poster. anyways, jie jie... keep it up. fighting!
 

 

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unknownUserwhat
#1
username: unknownUserwhat
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/RA794fC.png
theme: romance
password: itismine
jreboron
#2
username: jreboron

graphic link: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/stepsister_zps04b1e218.jpg

background: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/background01_zps1f0b3e1c.jpg

theme: Angst

password: itismine
kariwinn
#3
Username: kariwinn
graphic link: http://kariwinn.deviantart.com/art/Trouble-371344645
theme: romantic, cute
password: itismine

I've only been doing graphics for around a month, so I hope that you'll help me improve. Thanks!! ^^
LinhGerly
#4
username: LinhGerly
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/3rgtBBu.png
theme: romantic, light fantasy
password: itismine
fationist
#5
Chapter 45: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! *o*
I see what you mean when you said the picture(yes it's Yuri) is too big and the text is too big ><
well I put angst and romance because that's what the story is about >< But I guess that means the poster doesn't quite fit with the story. hmm.. maybe i'll replace on of the Yuris with the male character! owo anyway thank you for the review and sorry for commenting late x_x <33
khlozzer
#6
Chapter 46: Thank you for the review! <3
lol brown.
I'm kinda low on color usage otl.
Thank you again!
star_x #7
I want to send in a request too but i think i will wait for you to complete the requests first. Hwaiting! ^^
proximaC #8
Thank you so much for your time to write the review. Appreciate it very much, darling. ^^