▬it's yours❞┇ChibiMusicStar

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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin

for ChibiMusicStar

+first impression; 17'20

i thought this is happy themed. on my first look, i thought the colorful colors below didn't suit the upper part. the ripped texture you used was my sister's right? good effect.
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 12'15
colorful colors, or more specifically- blue, pink and yellow DOESN'T suit the part above. i honestly thought it would all be their pictures, and to be honest, my impression wasn't really good. the color black doesn't suit the fonts, honestly.
+picture usage; 1415
the pictures are well done. just that they didn't suit each other ( the colors and the infinite pics ).
+typography; 22'25
i think the font you used is pretty. it really suited the poster, despite the font's colors.
+attractivity; 20'25
pretty. once again- the colors and the pics do not match.

+overall; 85'100


jinjinjin says:
please take in my tips~ sorry for the rudeness. but i stated that you needed to be strong. so you need to be. fighting!
 

 

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unknownUserwhat
#1
username: unknownUserwhat
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/RA794fC.png
theme: romance
password: itismine
jreboron
#2
username: jreboron

graphic link: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/stepsister_zps04b1e218.jpg

background: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/background01_zps1f0b3e1c.jpg

theme: Angst

password: itismine
kariwinn
#3
Username: kariwinn
graphic link: http://kariwinn.deviantart.com/art/Trouble-371344645
theme: romantic, cute
password: itismine

I've only been doing graphics for around a month, so I hope that you'll help me improve. Thanks!! ^^
LinhGerly
#4
username: LinhGerly
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/3rgtBBu.png
theme: romantic, light fantasy
password: itismine
fationist
#5
Chapter 45: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! *o*
I see what you mean when you said the picture(yes it's Yuri) is too big and the text is too big ><
well I put angst and romance because that's what the story is about >< But I guess that means the poster doesn't quite fit with the story. hmm.. maybe i'll replace on of the Yuris with the male character! owo anyway thank you for the review and sorry for commenting late x_x <33
khlozzer
#6
Chapter 46: Thank you for the review! <3
lol brown.
I'm kinda low on color usage otl.
Thank you again!
star_x #7
I want to send in a request too but i think i will wait for you to complete the requests first. Hwaiting! ^^
proximaC #8
Thank you so much for your time to write the review. Appreciate it very much, darling. ^^