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It's Yours {graphic reviews
by jinjinjin

for proximaC

+first impression; 15'20

the first thing i noticed were the fonts. i wasn't much of a big fan of them, especially the quotes. it'd be a miracle if you'd understand them. the poster is a little low quality, but i like the smoke from the poster.
+color usage ( remember it depends on the theme ); 15'15
the colors are great! it's angst, after all.
+picture usage; 13'15
the pictures weren't much high quality. it'd improve if you used high quality pictures and sharpened them. the other textures were good, so good job!
+typography; 20'25
the fonts, especially the title's fonts, are a little too big and unpretty, don't you think? i think it'd be better if it's another font. the quote's font isn't readable, to be honest. i didn't like it. i hope you use something readable and simple, but beautiful next time.
+attractivity; 21'25
this angst poster seems cool, though. good job.

+overall; 84'100


jinjinjin says:
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unknownUserwhat
#1
username: unknownUserwhat
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/RA794fC.png
theme: romance
password: itismine
jreboron
#2
username: jreboron

graphic link: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/stepsister_zps04b1e218.jpg

background: http://i1345.photobucket.com/albums/p667/jreboron/background01_zps1f0b3e1c.jpg

theme: Angst

password: itismine
kariwinn
#3
Username: kariwinn
graphic link: http://kariwinn.deviantart.com/art/Trouble-371344645
theme: romantic, cute
password: itismine

I've only been doing graphics for around a month, so I hope that you'll help me improve. Thanks!! ^^
LinhGerly
#4
username: LinhGerly
graphic link: http://i.imgur.com/3rgtBBu.png
theme: romantic, light fantasy
password: itismine
fationist
#5
Chapter 45: THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW! *o*
I see what you mean when you said the picture(yes it's Yuri) is too big and the text is too big ><
well I put angst and romance because that's what the story is about >< But I guess that means the poster doesn't quite fit with the story. hmm.. maybe i'll replace on of the Yuris with the male character! owo anyway thank you for the review and sorry for commenting late x_x <33
khlozzer
#6
Chapter 46: Thank you for the review! <3
lol brown.
I'm kinda low on color usage otl.
Thank you again!
star_x #7
I want to send in a request too but i think i will wait for you to complete the requests first. Hwaiting! ^^
proximaC #8
Thank you so much for your time to write the review. Appreciate it very much, darling. ^^