7: Mister M

A Beautiful Mistake

His heart skips a beat. He doesn't know why. The moment Jihyo confess about having a boyfriend, he feels ..jealous. Jaesuk tries to ignore the weird feeling and try to change the topic.

"Ya! You all should congrats her you know!" 'then you should congrats her first.' His inner voice said. Jaesuk wants to but he couldn't bring himself to say those words. 'what happen to me?'

"Who's that guy? an entertainer?? actor??" - Kwangsoo

"M. His name start with M" -Jihyo

Looking at her smiling expression when Jihyo talk about that guy make Jaesuk heart feel being stung. 'she must be happy with him. Ya! Yoo Jaesuk! you have a family remember!'

"Pretty women always taken!! Stress!!"-Gary

"Gary yah, even when they are not taken, you just don't stand a chance." -Jaesuk jokes.

"Aishh! Stresss!!" -Gary

And finally the mood improve and the members laugh at Gary as he make a gloomy but stress face.

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He was going home when he saw her waiting outside, shivering. Indded, tonight's weather are slightly colder since it's going to rain soon.

"Why aren't you going home yet?" - Jaesuk

"My van was supposed to come and fetch me but since the driver was sick I'll have to fetch a cab." - Jihyo

"Let me send you home then."

"It's okay, ahju..oppa. I think the cab will pass soon"

"Jihyo yah, the weather is cold and it's going to rain soon. This area is dark, how do you expect me to leave you. Get in"

"But I'm really oka.." Just when Jihyo about to finish her words, Jaesuk come out from the car and grab her in. He helps her wear her seatbelt and close the door. Then he goes to the driver seat.

"Hachooh!" Jihyo sneeze.

"See? Told you the weather is cold." he reaches his jacket at the backseat and covers her with it.

"Don't worry, as far as I remember, I don't eat human flesh yet." Jihyo awkward face turn into a smile when Jaesuk said that.

"Let's go." Jaesuk starts the car engine and drive.
 

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Shermina #1
Chapter 40: Im crying when they break up. So sad and hurt! But I still like ur fanfic. Great job on describing it very detail. The candy alliance moments are just so sweet! They were like real close siblings in real life. Can u write if Jihyo chose to run away with Jaesuk? Hahaha. Just curious. Its really a beautiful story and mistake. Hope u can write other candy alliance fanfic with happy ending.
sakura199907 #2
Chapter 40: I don't usually comment on stories but this one needs to be appreciated. Yes, there are some grammar mistakes but the plot and essence of the story made it worthwhile to keep reading it. I was afraid that you will end it in the cliche'd 'love conquers all' way but you made the story realistic. The final chapter is sweet because you gave them closure. I could go on all day hahahahaha. Thanks for this story and I hope you write more.
RMudo7 #3
Chapter 40: Awww, what a beautiful story.. Your story is really awesome!!
Tirison #4
Chapter 40: ♡♡♡♡ YooMong candy alliance ♡♡♡
r0ckiebubugs
#5
I hope you write more Candy Alliance fanfic! This was beautiful and I'm about to read it again! You did an amazing job! Thank you for sharing.
FrenzyWhiskers
#6
Chapter 25: Your story is awesome!!! It's really are beautiful. I hope your making more candy alliance fanfics. Really love it~ hope for more ^_^
jeamiegerie #7
Chapter 39: I cried too. Thank You authornim it's a really beautiful mistake.
tomhiddleston
#8
Chapter 40: Alright i'm crying right now. Their love is forbidden but beautiful
izkadewi #9
Chapter 40: Good ending btw, keep it up with another story about jihyo
imsmlee86 #10
Chapter 40: Actually I'm a bit shocked when I saw the stat 'complete' but when i think over, it will be hard to make them be together as lover so yeah, i think this is a good ending, it's wise but somehow I think it's too fast~ but overall it's an interesting story~ ^^