3: The pub (II)

A Beautiful Mistake

As he ran out from the bar to find Jihyo, he started to feel anxious when she's nowhere in his sight. As anxiety started to eat him more while he is searching around, a beer can drop from a building and hit his shoulder. When he looks up, he saw a kinda familiar woman figure. And when he looks at her closely, he saw a drunk Jihyo was standing on the top of the building shaggily.

*surprised* "What are she doing at there? Don't tell me... She must have gone crazy!" as he is thinking that Jihyo may want to suicide, he sprung speedily to the top of the building without thinking twice. Although he is not very fit like his buddy Kim Jongkook, but his stamina is strong enough for him to run to the rooftop without stopping. Given the building is only three-storey high too.

When he reached the top, he looked at the spot where he saw Jihyo was standing earlier but she was not there anymore. As he rushed to the spot and look down, he accidentally stepped on one of the beer cans and almost fall down. Luckily, two hands were grabbing his collar quick enough and pull him up with all the strength. Due to the pulling force, Jaesuk falls to the ground and he accidentally pulls her hand makes both of them lie flat on the ground with Jihyo on the top of him. It seems like Jihyo are not sober enough so she went blank at the moment. But the sober Jaesuk feels the other way. He can feel the body warmth of Jihyo on the top of him. Just then, Jihyo suddenly puts her head at Jaesuk chest and makes his heart beats even crazier.

*shaggy* "Ahjussi..you should... take off your shirt.." said Jihyo. Jihyo's sudden statement makes Jaesuk feels so suddenly.

"The animal ..wants to take a walk.." said Jihyo again. 

"What animal?" Jaesuk looks at her strangely. As a response, Jihyo pointed at Jaesuk's heart.

"This animal.."

Hearing her reply makes he feels embarrassed by his own thought. He started to shrug it off by laughing loudly. He accidentally pushed Jihyo from him and keep laughing.

"Oh, my stomach !! Hahahahahahaha!!!" he pressed his stomach since his stomach started to feel pain due to laughing too much.

*scream* "Ya! Ahjussi! Shut up!! I'm trying to sleep here.." Jihyo shouted and fix her position. 

"Hahahaha!! Song Ji Hyo!! You' could be a comedian you know!! Hahahahaha!!"Jaesuk keeps laughing and laughing. Whenever he thinks about the accident, he can't stop laughing. And the situation remains for a few minutes until it cools down.

Jihyo is obviously not sober and she felt really sleepy. She curls herself up in the opposite side and tried to sleep. Her position did make her looked like a fragile little girl. Which that gains pity from him.

Just then, Jaesuk heard a sobbing sound. He looks at Jihyo again and tried to console her but Jihyo pushed his hand away.

"I'm okay. Don't pity me. It hurts my pride." Jihyo said in her low voice yet it's still clear enough from him to hear what she said.

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Shermina #1
Chapter 40: Im crying when they break up. So sad and hurt! But I still like ur fanfic. Great job on describing it very detail. The candy alliance moments are just so sweet! They were like real close siblings in real life. Can u write if Jihyo chose to run away with Jaesuk? Hahaha. Just curious. Its really a beautiful story and mistake. Hope u can write other candy alliance fanfic with happy ending.
sakura199907 #2
Chapter 40: I don't usually comment on stories but this one needs to be appreciated. Yes, there are some grammar mistakes but the plot and essence of the story made it worthwhile to keep reading it. I was afraid that you will end it in the cliche'd 'love conquers all' way but you made the story realistic. The final chapter is sweet because you gave them closure. I could go on all day hahahahaha. Thanks for this story and I hope you write more.
RMudo7 #3
Chapter 40: Awww, what a beautiful story.. Your story is really awesome!!
Tirison #4
Chapter 40: ♡♡♡♡ YooMong candy alliance ♡♡♡
r0ckiebubugs
#5
I hope you write more Candy Alliance fanfic! This was beautiful and I'm about to read it again! You did an amazing job! Thank you for sharing.
FrenzyWhiskers
#6
Chapter 25: Your story is awesome!!! It's really are beautiful. I hope your making more candy alliance fanfics. Really love it~ hope for more ^_^
jeamiegerie #7
Chapter 39: I cried too. Thank You authornim it's a really beautiful mistake.
tomhiddleston
#8
Chapter 40: Alright i'm crying right now. Their love is forbidden but beautiful
izkadewi #9
Chapter 40: Good ending btw, keep it up with another story about jihyo
imsmlee86 #10
Chapter 40: Actually I'm a bit shocked when I saw the stat 'complete' but when i think over, it will be hard to make them be together as lover so yeah, i think this is a good ending, it's wise but somehow I think it's too fast~ but overall it's an interesting story~ ^^