14. HERE'S the Real Fire

Because of Our Dads [Edited]
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mi_HYU [block]  on 11-27-2011 17:09:18 says: x
smoke...smoke...smoke...
nothing bad will happen..right,,?!

@mi_HYU: well, it's definitely smoke compared to this fire. But it's up to you to decide if this is fire or not. Looking at the drama that other fanfics had, this is just smoke to me now.

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HyeoEun’s POV

What’s that smell? Oh I’m so tired. The medicine really knocked me out. Why’s everybody out at the car park? What’s- IS THAT SMOKE? BBAM! “Ma’am follow me.” My door!

 

“Is there a fire?”

 

“There is a fire on the eighth floor. Couldn’t you hear the alarm? Follow me quickly.”

 

We got to the ground floor. I looked around and saw Ryeowook. “HyeoEun!” I went over to him and hugged him.

 

“What were you doing in the building? Didn’t you hear the alarm? Didn’t you see the fire? Wait. Why are you here in the first place? It’s Friday.”

 

“I know it’s Friday. I was sick so I thought I would come over and sleep over. My medicine knocked me out and when I woke up I smelled the smoke.”

 

Oppa looked around and said, “Follow me to the van.” With his arm around my shoulders, he walked me to their van. I entered into the van before Oppa did and saw that Kyuhyun was seating in the back. He rushed over to me and was crippling me in a hug. “Oh my gosh. Thank God you’re ok.” “I’m okay. Now let me go before I’m not,” I said with a slight laugh.

 

“I’m so sorry I wasn’t here with you. If I were this wouldn’t have happened. You wouldn’t have been left in the building.”

 

“It’s okay, really. It was the medicine’s fault.”

 

Kyuhyun’s POV

I’m super relieved that she’s okay. I don’t know what I’ll do if the whole building was on fir

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lee-chelle #1
Chapter 51: Yay! Everything has cleared up and my ranting down below helped me calm down lol! I was bottling up how I felt about the whole situation till it exploded lol!! ^^'
lee-chelle #2
Chapter 48: I feel like I'm missing something here... Why is she so bent in breaking up with him? It wasn't his fault that he couldn't be there that night it happened. It's not like he chose not to be there. Tbh the way I see it she's over reacting. I'm more upset at her than I am with Kyu for not understanding his side. Even after forgiving him I don't understand her motives.
darknesslovee
#3
I hate ending but this ending really make me smile.
thank you for writing this story, unnie! :)
artsiedartsie #4
Thanks to all!
mi_HYU #5
sweet....after all..they had rina..




chukkae authornim...!!
winterflowr #6
That was very sweet! They were able to have a child T_T
mi_HYU #7
aaww.............
i hate endings......

but....i love the story....really...it's great...
darknesslovee
#8
omo, I'm tricked xD
more! more!
--venissa #9
update soon:)
darknesslovee
#10
yeayy! propose already! update soon! :D