Surprise

Tragedy

NOTICE!!!

UPDATE 01/23/17 ::  This story started and was written around 4 YEARS AGO. 

I was so young and an amateur. Later on I will be  in the process of editing it and making it more appealing. (Without changing the plot of course)

For now I hope you enjoy the story. So Feel free to read!!

This is just an explanation  :) 

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" Can I open my eyes now?" You ask, excited.

Your Boyfriend, Kim Hyun Joong, had been leading you by the hand for what seemed to be forever. 

He claimed to have a surprise for you, and every minute made you grow more impatient.

"No. We're not there yet." Kim Hyun Joong answered. You can hear him smiling by his voice.

He stopped and you abruptly stopped as well.

You felt something waving in front of your face.

"Yah. You're not peeking are you?" Kim Hyun joong asks, suspicious.

"Haha no." You reply.

You could feel him looking at you carefully.

"Promise?" He asks, unsure.

You laugh lightly.

"Yes, I promise. Even if I'm dying of curiosity, I'm not going to peek." You reassure him, sincerely.

"Good." Kim Hyun Joong says, relieved.

He then continues to lead you towards the unknown place.

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After another few minutes, he stops again.

You felt him turn around to face you.

"We're here. You can open your eyes now." He tells you.

You open your eyes slowly, uncertain of what the surprise may be.

The first thing you see is the bright charming eyes of Your beloved boyfriend.

He had a wide dashing smile on his face.

And it only grows wider as He steps to the side to let you fully see his surprise.

You see a huge open shelter decorated with different types of bright vibrant flowers and white hanging ribbons.

In the middle was a beautiful fountain which glowed a luminous white in the dark. An elegant picnic was set up on the smooth floor; a small cake  layed beside it. At the very top of the shelter was a giant banner.

"Happy Birthday. I Love you."  written in large font.

You were speachless.

You turn to look at Kim Hyun Joong.

He was now holding a bouquet of red roses in his hands.

"Happy Birthday." He says with a grin and hands you the roses.

You take them from him, unable to respond.

Kim Hyun Joong's smile vanishes.

"What is it? You didn't like?" He asks, disappointed.

"N-No. It's not that." You manage to say, your voice barely audible.

Kim Hyun Joong tilts his head to the side, confused.

"It's just.... This is the best surprise I could have ever gotten." You reply overwhelmed.

"I love it." You say with a tender smile.

Kim Hyun Joong smiles, pleased.

"I'm glad." He responds.

He then holds out his hand for you.

You grab it and link fingers with him.

"Let's celebrate then." He says and leads you towards the shelter. 

You both sit down and begin to eat the elegant dinner. 

Once you finished eating, you both gaze at the stars, hand in hand.

You lay your head against his shoulder.

"Did you really like the surprise?" Kim Hyun Joong asks.

You nod.

"I'm glad to spend any moment with you." You admit with a smile.

Kim Hyun Joong faces you.

He reaches out and caresses your face tenderly.

" Every time I look at you, you grow more and beautiful." Kim Hyun Joong says sweetly.

You can't help but laugh a bit at his cheesy line.

He kissses you softly on the lips. Sending a light shock thoughout your body.

He then pulls away.

"That's your birthday present." Kim Hyun Joong says with a grin.

His lips met yours again. This time the kiss was more tender yet still soft. You shivered a bit.

You both pull away and then embrace each other in a hug. You both continue to quietly gaze at the stars, which seemed to be shining brighter today.

 

 

 

 

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Jmjkjin #1
Chapter 33: Hi authornim, this is the first time i read this story of yours. I love this story. I hope you would update this story soon !
hyunjaelove #2
Chapter 32: Thank you for coming back
seamusmommy #3
Chapter 33: Welcome back!!! Well, it's been a year since my last comment, so I guess that's when you last updated. I haven't gone through my bookmarks list or else I would have sent you a message, asking for an update. Anyway...please HJ, don't listen to ChoHee's lies. She's a liar, you've proven this. ChoHee and Jaejoong just need to go away so that HJ and me can start continue our relationship.
seamusmommy #4
Chapter 31: Yesssss!!! Jumping up and down. Haha... But what did Jaejoong do? Did he tip off HJ that ChoHee was lying? I can't wait for the next chapter!!! I love to be the one to say Update soon!!!
Shain44
#5
Chapter 31: HJ is getting smarter..detecting Cho Hee's lies..and getting jealous of JJ!Guess his mind and heart tells him who he really loves even with out memories..
seamusmommy #6
Chapter 30: Your killing me! But I'll wait...again! I wish HJ would have gotten out of his car and gone to her.
Shain44
#7
Chapter 30: Thank you for the update! Means a lot..
Hope you continue with your updates soon..
DaphieJune #8
Chapter 29: update soon unnie
hyunjaelove #9
Chapter 29: poor jaejoong T__T .. am happy that hyun joong remembred her .. pleaaaaase update soon