Received Applications

World Domination / JYP Entertainment New Girl Group (Closed)

EverLasting_Cloud | Sung Snow Kyo | 21 years old

Main Dancer | Lead Rapper | Choreographer

Link

My comments:

LOL still a little over-powered but much better anyway. Thank you.

 

LeeMinhosbaby | Ayako Wood | 19 years old

Main Dancer | Lead Dancer

Link

My comments:

Thanks for fixing that up! Good job.

 

SaphirE | Rosa Rio Song | 23 Years Old

Lead Rapper| Face of the Group| Gymnast

Link

My comments:

Perfect now, thanks.

 

SooJung | Park Soojung | 22 years old

Main Dancer | Composer | Gymnast

Link

My comments:

Everything's perfect now! Thank you.

 

 

Twiillia | Nam Lihua | 21 years old

Main Vocalist | Lead Vocalist | Composer

Link

My comments:

Perfect application. Good length and amazing detail. Your links are perfect as well. Thank you.

 

 

darayanglove5623 | Arianna Jang | 18 years old

Main Dancer | Main Vocalist | Main Rapper

Link

My comments:

Your application is much too short. Not enough is written about her likes, dislikes, hobbies, personality, family and friends. You need to describe as much as you can about them, like your relationship with them. Your character is a little over-powered talent wise. You dance like Hyoyeon, rap like Tiffany and sing like Taeyeon. It needs to be a little bit more realistic. If you could please fix those!

 

Mayvin | Mayvin Hanbyul Park | 20 years old

Lead Dancer | Main Dancer |  Body of the Group

Link

My comments: 

I love your links. THIS application is the perfect example for links. However, your background and family descriptions are so long, but the personality is so short! I need much more for personality please.

 

Giruff | Jung Eun Rae | 23 years old

Lead Vocalist | Face of the Group | Composer

Link

Unnie applied! Me so happy! ~ *_*

 

heeyoungie | Jung Ai | 21 years old

Lead Vocalist | Lead Dancer | Composer

Link

My comments:

Your application is a little on the shorter side! :( Could you fix that please?

 

 

 

 

Problem #1 Your links to your talents. You can't be an amazing singer like Hyorin, dance like Min and rap like Miryo. On top of that, have a gorgeous beautiful model as your ulzzang. It's unrealistic. Please! If you're an average dancer send me the link of how... a dance coverist dances. If you're an okay singer, send me the link of how Yoona or Sohee sings. Please be fair.

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Mayvin
#1
Chapter 43: Hello everyone!
Minntx
#2
Chapter 43: I read all the chapters again, i hope you will update in some time because it is really good.
Mayvin
#3
Chapter 43: Hey guys. I just and won't have internet until the 21st, so if there is an update and I don't reply that is why. Hopefully I'll be able to check with my phone, but some times I can't get signal or I might use up all my data before the 21st. >.<
CloudUnknown
#4
Chapter 43: Hmm...things seem to be heating up between the girls and their love interests..can't wait to read more! :)
Mayvin
#5
Chapter 43: Updates always happen when I am away from home. It is nice to see the girls getting out more.
Giruff
#6
Chapter 43: crossing my fingers on Taec and Yana! :D Ai and JB next perhaps? :)
Twiillaa
#7
Chapter 43: It looks like Ai likes JB? I wonder what is up with JR and Yana. I am gald that things have died down with Snow. Taekyeon and Yana dating, well hope it doesn't turn out like Wooyoung and Snow. Anyway thanks for the update. I can't wait to read what is next.
Minntx
#8
Chapter 42: i have a few songs for the 2nd album..i will put it here later~~