Try Smiling For Me

My Date's The Beginning~ [APPLY CLOSED!]

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I decided to apply again cuz your writing style is FRAKEN AWESOME!!!!

Song: Try Smiling by Daesung
 

Joo, HyunJin
Age: 18
Kwon 'G-Dragon' Jiyong
Age: 18
 

Setting: YG Entertainment building and Big Bang's house.

Genre: Sad but happy at the end, if you want you can add some comedy.

Plot: So basically this revolves around the Big Bang Documentary. Except there is a girl competing. The girl is HyunJin. She's been training for 4 years(Meaning she started when she was 12, the documentary was made in 2006.). She was the group's triple threat(She excelled in singing, dancing, and rapping. As the only girl in the hostel(Where Big Bang lived.) of course she was nervous but soon got comfortable with the help of Top's humor, Daesung's friendly personality, Seungri cuteness, Taeyang's kindness, and finally Jiyong's responsibleness. (Let's just say SO-1 was never here kay? ^__^) But she still had her silent, fiery, and unique personality. Sadly her grandfather died of severe burns. None of the boys knew her grandfather was in such a critical condition. They started noticing something was wrong when they see her avoiding people, always staring at the ground in a daze, and frightenly she not yelling at Seungri when he 'tries to' do his aegyo on her. (Which he does EVERYDAY). One day when everyone left the practice studio, except 2 people. HyunJin said she was going to practice alone. An hour later of trying to forget the incident, she broke down crying. She didn't notice someone walking over to her. It was Jiyong.
And I'll leave the rest to ya! 

Part 2:
Other: HyunJin's Personality: Hyun Jin is a TOTAL tomboy. Doesn't exactly show it but cares for her friends....ALOT(meaning her friends are her world.). Seems very cold,quiet,and reserved but is actualy really nice if she opens up to you. Hasn't smiled or laugh in 13 years. Not very trusting to people(especially to guys). If you made her smile now your probably very important to her. 90's music genius(K-pop and American music). Very athletic. Hyun Jin is the type that will break your arm if you mess with her. Is not a moring person at all. Gets grumpy if she doesn't get enough of sleep. I don't like people seeing me weak(like if i was crying i would run away so no one would see me.). She doesn't care about what people think about her. If she's mad at you she will put on the scariest glare you have ever seen everytime you walk in the same room as her. Is really good at lying but never lies(only lies when needed). Always has a emotionless face so its hard to find out what she's thinking. If she wants to she can put on the cutest aegyo. She's always the person in the room that distances herself from others by sitting in the back corner. Can do any famous boy group dance(Like Sorry Sorry, Ring Ding Dong, Lucifer.). Almost never falls for aegyos(There was one time when Sungmin of SuJu did an aegyo, she giggled like crazy!). Has actually got drunk once, well accidently. She acts very unlike her when she is drunk. Like she keeps saying secrets, I Love You, and stuff like that. Has a tendency to say "What do you want!?!?" if someone says her name, sometimes people think it's funny. A lot of girls respect her cuz she refuses to dance
proactivilly, she believes attraction is not a talent. Very blunt. People think she is cocky but it's actually confidence. Feels very awkward around kids. May seem strong mentally and physically but she's actually one of the most sensitve one in the group.

HWAITING!!! 

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Song for story: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d3uuzY76o2M 

HyunJin's POV~

"Annaseyo~ I'm Joo HyunJin nice to meet you." I say greeting my new group members.

"Annaseyo, I'm Daesung. Nice to meet you too." Daesung said giving me his famous eye smile.

"Hey, I'm Taeyang. Do you need help with that luggage?" taeyang asks noticing my giant suitcase. I nod shyly not wanting to impose on him.

"Don't worry, Taeyang always helps the cute girls. He's wierd like that." T.O.P comments and I giggle.

"Ne Ne hyung, where is Jiyong-appa?" A boy comments trying to act aegyo.

"Oh noona, I'm Seungri. Nice to meet you." I nod.

"Yah how old are you? You act like a little kid." I tel lSeungri. He cowers behind Daesung and says,

"Noona's scary." I roll my eyes at his failed aegyo. Suddenly a man walking in catches my attention. He carries himself with confedence yet he has a baby face.

"Welcome to Big Bang, I'm Jiyong, the leader. I hope we can all get along from now on." He says and I nod, not knowing how to react. But, being my cocky and blunt self, I say,

"You look like a 5-year-old." Everyone in the room begins laughing and I soon join in. I think I'm gonna like it here.

"Yah HyunJin! Focus on the dance!" My choreographer yells noticing how I spaced out. I bow and apologize promising to do better.

"Let's just finish for today." He says and heads out. I sit on the bench when I hear Daesung ask,

"Hey you ok?"

Jiyong's POV~

I was wondering what was going on with HyunJin lately. I look over and see her near Daesung. She seems so tense around everyone now, like she's on defense. I can see her trying to move away from Daesung, as if not wanting anybody to be too close to her.

"Worried about our HyunJin?" Our manager asks putting an arm aorund my shoulder.

"Yeah, know what happened?" Seungri asks. The manager sighs and says,

"Her grandfather died apparently." You can feel the awkwardness around us.

"H-how?" T.O.P asks.

"Severe burns." I look over and see HuynJin in a daze yet again. How can she go through something at such a young age?

"I think I have an idea." Taeyang says smiling.

"We're in if it helps HyunJin-noona." Seungri says. I slap the back of his head saying,

"Now's not the time to act aegyo Seungri." He rubs his head and says,

"Sorry."

HyunJin's POV~

I dont' want to bother Daesung or anybody with my problems.

"It's nothing you have to worry about." I say giving Daesung, what I think to be, a convincing look. He gives me one last glance before mumbling,

"Yup, that's our fiery and unique HyunJin for ya."

HyunJin?" I hear someone call me.

"What do you want?!?!" I ask annoyed of everyone being on my back. Suddenly Daesung gets pulled away by the members and they yell,

"HyunJin, we have to go somewhere ok? Meet us back at the dorm later." I raise and eyebrow and ask,

"Why can't I come along with you guys?" They exchange glances and say,

"Well, the kid trainees need someone to play with." Ehh?!?! Suddenly a group of kids (well not kids really, just people around 7-13 years old) come running in jumping around me. Some even have th nerve to grab onto my legs like I'm some sort of jungle gym!

"Have fun! We'll see you soon Noona!" Seungri says and they all run away. I'll kill them for sure.

"Ne ne unnie, what are we going to play today?" They begin pestering me. I throw some of them off of my legs and yell,

"Yah! Settle down!" They don't listen. Aish.

"H-hey, I'm pretty sure you're not supposed to do that!" I yell seeing two kids pulling on another girl's arms.

Jiyong's POV~

"ok, everything's set. I'll go get HyunJin." I say and head back into the dance studio. Should I bring a helmet just in case she attacks me? Nahhh. I walk back to the dance room and hear music playing from the rehearsal room. The door's left ajar just a bit, enough for me to see through it. The stereo's are blasting background music, but the voice coming from them is completely live. I look inside and see HyunJin holding a microphone and dancing to the beat of the music.

HyunJin's POV~

Those demon's disquised as trainees almost killed me today -.- once they finally left, I decided to let out my emotions with some training. I sang and rapped till I was in the mood for dancing. I put on BoA's "Eat You Up" and began dancing my heart out. I was so lost in my own dancing that I forgot that I wasn't escaping reality. I suddenly remembered my grandfather and lost my balance, falling on the group during the chorus. I didn't even want to get up. I just began crying, still so upset over losing my grandfather. My mind was so stuck on my emotions that I didnt realize that someone walked into the room hugging me. I look up and see Jiyong.

Jiyong's POV~

"Wanna tell me what happened?" I said, trying to comfort HyunJin. I never saw her this broken before. She never shows her emotions, usually she has a face on that no one can tell what's going through her mind. She simply hugs me back and continues sobbing.

"I miss my grandfather so much." She whispers. I her head and try to calm her down.

HyunJin's POV~

His gentle touch left such a warm impression on my head, I didn't want to let go. I don't rememebr the last time I showed so much feelings to someone. I would usually hide from people if I ever felt like crying. I looked up at Jiyong and he said,

"When was the last time you smiled?" I shrugged and he chuckled.

"You should try smiling for yourself sometimes. A smile would make you look a million times more beautiful." I pout and yell,

"Yah! Are you telling me I look ugly then?"

Jiyong's POV~

When she pouted, she would've put Seungri's aegyo to shame. She looked so innocent...that is until she yelled at me,

"Yah! Are you telling me I look ugly then?" I chuckle and bring her up to the dance mirror walls.

"Look how pretty you look when you smile." I say pulling up her cheeks. She slaps my arms away and says,

"You're so gay sometimes." I take her hand and say,

"Come on, the Big Bang members have a surprise for you." She lets me drag her to our nearby dorm room.

HyunJin's POV~

"Surprise! Hope you feel better HyunJin!" The memebrs yell once I entered the room. I didn't know what to say, I saw a cake at the coffee table and the place decorated with balloons and streamers.

"HyunJin~" I hear Seungri sing.

"What do you want?!?!" Everyone chuckles knowing how I respond to people when they call my name.

"We heard you were down in the dumps, so we thought you could use some cheering up." Taeyang says giving me a playful punch. I glare at him and, the mighty and strong Taeyang cowers behind Jiyong.

"Thanks guys. Really." I say.

Jiyong's POV~

"I saw HyunJin-noona smile!" Seungri yells pointing to HyunJin. She glares at Seungri and says,

"Yah who would smile?' But I see it too, her frown disappeared and I saw a small smile form.

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Once the mini celebration ended, I was left to clean the dishes -.- Yes, how ironic that the leader cleans the dishes. I suddenly found a pair of plates plop down into teh sink and see HyunJin standing there, helping me clean.

"Thanks for today." She said standing next to me. She began drying the dishes and I kissed the top of her forehead.

HyunJin's POV~

"Y-yah what was that for?" I asked confused. He leaned his forehead on mine and said,

"If you need someone, I'll be there for you. If you need someone to lean on every once in a while. Ok? Everyone is here for ya, especially that Seungri -.-" I shake my head and I hear Jiyong chuckle next to me.

"Ne, will you smile for me?" He asked. I gave him a small smile and he chuckled.

"There, are you happy now?' I asked sacrastically. He kissed me on the cheek and replied,

"Very." I wanna tell him how grateful I am for him and Big Bang, but the words got stuck in my throat. Oh well, I'll open up to them someday, when that time comes, I'll show them how much they mean to me. Especially Jiyong.

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radiant #1
OMG. I ENJOYED IT. >:D~! SDNF<SANDFKASDR THAT WAS LIKE GREAT. SO ADORABLE >:O
LoveLikeChocolate #2
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kitten83
#3
oh i enjoyed my time here...all 3 of my requested were done greatly n i adored it...XDD...thanx..
kitten83
#4
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OneOfAKindBich
#5
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kitten83
#6
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nothings-over
#7
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Soonyangel
#8
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sujujasmine13 #9
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nothings-over
#10
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