I Don't Like Your Girlfriend

My Date's The Beginning~ [APPLY CLOSED!]

Seunii

Heehee~ ^^ Wondering if I could apply over here :3

Song: 5Dolls - I Mean You | http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J_nQZ27eD2s

Name:
Tinnie: 16
Niel: 16 |3 months older then Tinnie

Title: 'I Don't Like Your Girlfriend'

Setting/Type of story: Romantic/Fluff/Drama

Plot/Summary: Niel and Tinnie have been the best of friends. Tinnie loved Niel more than anything in the world but there is two problems. Niel is really clueless of it and doesn't see that Tinnie loves him. Another problem is that Niel has a girlfriend. No, his girlfriend isn't most like others who are sweet and loving. His girlfriend is two-faced, sweet when Niel is around but mean when he isn't. Will Tinnie be able to show Niel his girlfriend's true colors and capture his heart?  

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Song for story:  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J_nQZ27eD2s

Tinnie's POV~"" 

"Tinnie~" I hear Niel calling my name.

"Wake up Tinnie~" he asys. I cover my face with my bed covers and mumble,

"Ten more minutes." I hear him sigh and I thought he would leave.

"Ok ten minutes passed." He says.

"No they didn't." I mumble.

"How would you know?"

"I just do."

"Ok you leave me no choice." I thought he would fart in my face, but he instead kisses me on the cheek?!?!

"Yah! What was that for?!" I yell out of bed. He winks and says,

"Well that worked since you're up. Come on lets go."

"You have a girlfriend!" I yell out once he leaves my room. I throw my pillow across the room.

"How can you kiss me so carelessly and not know my feelings for you?" I mumble to myself.

Niel's POV~

Once I came out of Tinnie's house, I was greeted by EunKyo. She gives me a peck on the lips and says,

"I saw your scooter parked outside. What are you doing here around my house?" She asks me. I smile and reply,

"Just giving Tinnie a ride to school." She puffs out her cheeks and says,

"Oh ok. When is she coming out?" I shrug.

Tinnie's POV~

I just exited my house and see EunKyo waiting by Niel's scooter.

"Can I help you?" I ask in a monotone. She rolls her eyes at me and jabs a finger at my chest.

"Stay away from Niel, got it? I'm his girlfriend and if I were you, I'd stay out of my way." I look her dead in the eyes and reply,

"Well you're not me so you have no control, now do you?" She turns a slight red and smirks.

"I'm his girlfriend though, aren't I?" Tch.

"Hey sorry to make you guys wait, my old man called to ask about something. So you ready Tinnie?" He asks me. EunKyo wraps her arms around him and I reply,

"Nah I'm good. You can ride with EunKyo. I think I'm gonna walk." I start running before Niel and EunKyo can see my tears.

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I was half asleep in class when some paper hit me square in the jaw. I looks around and see Niel chuckling.

Don't fall asleep :p

~N

I couldn't help but smile. I look at him and give him a merong sign. I look over at EunKyo and see her glaring at me. I flinch a little, she was right before, I'm not Niel's girlfriend. She is.

Niel's POV~

I look over to where Tinnie's looking at and see EunKyo smiling at me. I wave at her and continue with the rest of the day.

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Once class ends I try to get to Tinnie, to apologize for this morning but she just walks by me.

"Niel wanna have lunch together?" EunKyo asks me. I look back where Tinnie left yet she's gone. I tell EunKyo,

"I think I'm gonna go see where Tinnie ran off to. I wanna apologize about this morning."

EunKyo's POV~

Tch. Fine Tinnie, you wanna play hard? I'll play hard ball too. I know where you hide during lunch to avoid Niel.

I walked up to the rooftop and, sure enough, she was there.

"What do you want?" She asks in a tired voice. I simply walk up to her and pull her by her hair up against the brick wall.

Tinnie's POV~

Aish, she has a good grip on my arms and hair. I can't break lose since she's actually stronger than me.

"Listen here Tinnie, I don't like it when there's someone standing in the way of something I want. Point is, don't come near Niel or your not-so-pretty little face won't like the outcome." Even though I'm in a bad position to be cocky, I smirk and reply,

"You're just jealous Niel thinks of us equally. He likes you and me both." She squints her eyes at me and slaps me across the face. I saw her hand go up again, yet someone stopped her before it came down.

Niel's POV~

"Stop EunKyo. That's enough." I say when she looks at me with seemingly innocent eyes. Yet, I now see things behind them, how dark and blurry they really are.

"N-Niel, you don't understand. Tinnie she was-" She begins to whine but I interrupt her by saying,

"Tinnie was being a better friend than you were a girlfriend. I'm sorry but let's break up." I heard myself say. EunKyo slaps me across the face and says,

"Tch. You and Tinnie aren't worth my time." Once she leaves, I help Tinnie get back up her feet.

"You ok?" I ask her. She nods and begins to walk away but I garb her tight by the arm.

"Wait Tinnie.'' I begin but see her cringe. I look down at her arm and see mupltiple bruises.

Tinnie's POV~

He pulls up my shirt sleeves revealing some old and fresh cuts and bruises.

"Did EunKyo do this to you?" I look away not wanting to answer that.

"Did she?" I felt some tears at the corners of my eyes and nod. He wraps his arms around me and I whisper,

"She put me through so much pain." He tries to calm me down.

"It's ok, the bruises and cuts will heal over time."

"That's not the pain I was talking about."

I look up into his understanding eyes and tell him,

"You hurt me more than she did."

Niel's POV~

"H-how?" I ask worrying. She gives me such a sad laugh and replies,

"Never mind, I don't know what I'm even saying. You wouldn't get it." She begins but I take her face into my hands so she'll face me.

"I wanna try to understand. Tinnie, please tell me." She sighs and says,

"I like you Niel, I even think I might love you. Yet everytime you tease me and never take me seriously as a girl. Why did you take EunKyo seriously yet you treat me as nothing more than a buddy?" My heart began racing and I blushed. She laughed quietly and replied,

"I told you, you wouldn't understand." She began walking away but I pulled her back and kissed her.

Tinnie's POV~

His lips were touching my forehead and I thought my heart would burst out of my chest. He looks at me with those eyes and replies,

"You're too special for me to treat like EunKyo. You mean so much to me Tinnie, more than you think." I felt my ears turn red.

"By the way, I'm sorry about this morning." He said. I look up and flick his forehead,

"Pabo, it wasn't your fault. You owe me a ride tomorrow though." He chuckles and ruffles my hair.

"Deal."

"Niel?"

"Yeha Tinnie?"

"I never did like your girlfriend." He chuckles and replies,

"I kinda figured."

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radiant #1
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kitten83
#3
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kitten83
#4
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OneOfAKindBich
#5
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#8
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nothings-over
#10
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