Our Secret

Description

 

I know it's wrong.

But even when I know it's forbidden, it won't stop me from wanting this.

My desire is dangerous to you and your family and I'm aware that if people found out they would hate and despise me.

I know that I'm commiting a sin.

But sadly I carve it so much that I can't seem to care.

So please let me be beside you even if it could hurt us.

We will be alright as long as no one discovers us.

So don't tell anyone about us and permit me to continue our transgression.

Lets just keep it our secret~

Foreword

Characters:

 

 

 

Kwon Hyori

Age: 23

-smart
-beautiful
-nice and calm
-hard-working

She still loves LuHan and because of that she was never in a relationship before. Lost her parents early and was devasted by it until she meet LuHan who pulled her out of her misery. After LuHan got married she tried to erase her feeling with no avail.

 

Xi LuHan

Age: 24

-nice and outgoing
 -calm won't get angry easily

Lives with his wife and daughter in a big house. Is a responisble father and loves his daughter a lot. Still doesn't know about the feelings Hyori harbours for him.

 

Lee Yuri

Age: 24

-kind but hot-tempered
-beautiful

She is the mother of Eunji and Luhan's wife. Lives happily with her family and is a good mother.

 

Lee Eunji

Age: 4

-cute and bubbly
-nice and respectful

She loves her parents and Hyori a lot. A good child who doesn't cause a lot of problems and is understanding.

 

 

Hello ^_^

So I decided to write a Sequel to my Oneshot " Best Friend
 Please don't expect to much as I'm not used to writing stories. I won't be updating a lot as the story is still in process and I need to work it out.

I hope you can still enjoy it.

I don't intend to steal any ideas. If this resembles any other stories then it's pure coincidence.

Smilone
I'm on Hiatus =(

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yeobeo
#1
Chapter 23: I actually have mixed emotions for this story. I was actually pretty affected because of their situation because I'm from a broken family, and as I was reading, I'll be honest and say that I was really hoping they wouldn't be together at the end. I know it would have probably what other's wanted, but coming from a person who had to experience what Eunji might have gone through, if they did end up together, I was happy with what happened. ^^
Sparkling_Genie
#2
Chapter 23: Dont mind the hate comments. I like it that there are some stories here that has a grasp of reality. Nothing in reality will have a happy fairytale ending.
But Yuri is magnimous too, she forgive Hyorin. And laid down her pride to save her family.
At least Hyorin got her closure with Luhan. :)
Thank you for writing this!
Banging_bangtan #3
Chapter 23: Excuse me but who called you jerk????? Authornim has mindset of reality that relationship didn't last long forever.... Because at the very beggining it was wrong so wrong,,,,,, and there was a happy ending indeed because she's free and happy because she found a right man who loves her complety no more no less.
Kahanbo123 #4
Chapter 23: Eeeeeehh?!?!
Kahanbo123 #5
Chapter 18: Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? WHY?!?!!! I'm tearing author-nim! Wae?
bunny5760 #6
Chapter 23: THIS IS A HORRIBLE STORY YOU.ARE.SO.MEAN. I HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY ISNT THERE A HAPPY ENDING FOR HER AND LUHAN YOU ARE SO HEARTLESS I WAS WAITING THROUGHOUT THE WHOLE STORY FOR IT YOU JERK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Farralisa
#7
Chapter 23: ouhhhhhhhhhh okayyyyyyy, i get it now. Hmmm at least she got the eyeliner hottie. Huhuhuhuh ^^ But but... Luhan... i wish Yuri would get sick or something then Hyori would get Luhan. Muahahaha i'm so evil. But since she's happy with Baekhyun then I don't mind. Hehehe, anyway its a great story. hahaha. made me all pumped up. XD
Farralisa
#8
Chapter 22: What?! It's over? Noooo! Luhan! Take her back dangit. I wanna punch him again. -.-' Hyori, how can you just let go your freakin luhan that you loved from i-don't-know-how-long-but-i-know-it's-a-long-time. Be selfish and fight for him, aiyo making me frustrated.
Farralisa
#9
Chapter 21: What?!! Nooooooo, dang Hyori just be selfish and make eunji your child! Aiyaaa
Farralisa
#10
Chapter 9: Okay... I take back about punching Luhan... glad he finally realized his feelings, god, the suspense. Huhuhu