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Enigma ﴾¿﴿ Story Arc: Revelation ﴾?﴿
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“Chess is the struggle against the error.”

Johannes Zukertort

Urgh I'm so mad it's literally 35 degrees here and this stupid app kept messing up and I can't. Copy. Image. Addresses. Online. Asianfanfics is literally so user friendly on mobile and I only have my phone rn. So here you go. Have a blank thing in place of my anger. Btw just to fulfill curiosities his face claim is Zuho from SF9

(Also official chapters will probably start tomorrow :)

the story

author's corner

Gemini headquarters

—  2010; 19:30

  Tap. Tap. 

  Heels. Plastic - or maybe faery wood? - echoing against the monochrome marble floors, ringing in his ears. Not too closely though; the woman in front of him was steering clear of him from at least a two meter radius. 

  Aha. So these people have done their research. A small smirk curved the corner of his mouth. He was fully aware of his own actions, even the tiniest; the casual and nonchalant 'habits' of adjusting his cuffs, the formal clasp of hands behind one's back, himself standing straighter than a wooden board. All was simply under calculation.

  "In here, please. Sir." The woman's tone was curt, formal, business-like. Such a pity. The stone-hearted ones were usually the hardest to break. Buttoning his suit jacket in one swift exchange of the fingers, he was prepared to step through the double wooden doors held open for him, when he stole a glance at the faery woman standing guard on the other side of it, remaining a stoic front.

  "Yes, of course. Agent Chess." Letting a charming smile grace his face, he put one step in front of another, before reaching the front of the enormous desk looming in front of him.

  "You may leave, Chess." The man sitting atop of that suddenly spoke. Shortly, he heard the characteristic tap-tap-tapping of the heels down the hall again, which only made the smile on his face grow larger.

  "So. It's you." 

  As he spoke, the King leaned forward, letting his features show in the dim light that the study offered. Taking it as a silent invitation, the man himself obligingly took a seat on the armchair situated opposite of it, and made himself comfortable.

  "To think the great King of Gemini would know of someone like me. It's really an honour. Your Majesty," He added, just for the effect.

  "Save it. I would hardly think there's anyone in the Underworlder circle who doesn't know you." Sungjong sighed, lacing his fingers together, before speaking again after a pause. "I knew something was off the moment I was handed the profiles." A pause. "You are their trump card, aren't you?"

  "I beg your pardon?" Polite contempt. 

  "Never mind." Shuffling. In the window of time it took him to blink, the King had already reached under his desk and pulled out something. A wooden box embossed with gold designs that he recognized were Elven wards against the evil. "I had questioned their credibility when they asked me to make this." There was another pause as Sungjong rolled it around between his hands, as if contemplating whether or not to hand the box over. "Apparently the rumours are true." 

  "Hmm," He acknowledged absent-mindedly. At that, Sungjong pushed the box forward. A silent offer. "Are you sure about this, Your Majesty?" Another grin on his features. There was no need for concealed and subtle hints; not now.

  In response, the King merely nudged it forward with the tips of his fingers, and sat back. In one graceful movement, the man stood, walking slowly towards his prize while keeping his eyes fixated on Sungjong, whose gaze betrayed nothing but boredom. As he reached the edge of the desk, he leaned forward so that their faces were parallel to one another, and murmured, "Is it really alright to leave yourself so vulnerable like this, Your Majesty? I think we both know my powers. It would be such a shame...ah, if something was to happen, don't you think so?"

  "The only thing that would happen," To his surprise, the King's eyes weren't glazed over as he would have expected. Instead, they were boring into his, as if staring straight through him. "Would be you being kicked out if you even attempt treason. Now open the box and stop your nonsense." 

  Facade broken, the man stepped back slightly, though his confident demeanor never wavered. Prying open the box with the tips of his fingers, he peered inside, and drew a bracelet out with slight confusion. "Might I ask what this is, Your Majesty? If you are attempting to court me - of which I would be utmost grateful - there are other more convenient ways - "

  "Oh, be quiet." Sungjong's fingers found the sore spot on the side of his head, and started preparing himself for the headache to come. "This is a control device. We can't have you charming everyone within a certain radius, can we? Now put it on and follow Chess to the dining room." 

  A prompt pressing of a button led to a prompt throwing open of the study's doors. The man gave a short glance at the...developing situation around him, and sighed, before attaching the thing around the curve of his wrist. Just before he left, however, he turned around, facing the King once more.

  "I think you missed my name, sir.'

  "I would hardly have missed any part of you," Sungjong replied in a mocking tone.

  "Nam Minwoo."

 
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hzhfobsessed
#1
Chapter 81: GASDHAHAH NOT THE CHOIS ING UPPPPP

i was not actually expecting minhwan to cameo LOL it's so funny and hOLY the siblings meet ;))))))

i gotta wonder whose side mother is on :eyes: because i don't remember if i ever said that in the app LOL

but yeah 's heating UP
jxxkwx
#2
Chapter 80: not me not remembering Alex’s past- oof. I gotta read back his history >< it was a nice gateway to reveal more of CARDS and Gemini’s past, I think it flowed perfectly. I think it’s interesting how they use to be allies and now are enemies.

also, I don’t know if I missed this completely from previous chapters but Helena towards Daehyun? I didn’t know she had such feelings, oof. I kinda like the drama LMAO

ALSO ALSO CARDS LET MY BBY REST ;-; he needs rest- look at his eyes! D;
imjaebeoms
#3
Chapter 79: i understand where you're coming from and I hope that you'll do what you want and go for it! in the end, this is your story - you get to decide what you should do with it :D

ps: pls add me to the list of future buyers of this book once it's published o.o the whole plot is too cool to NOT be an actual book

i too hope that in the future I'll be more active with feedbacks since I get how discouraging it is when you're writing but you get nothing back in return ;-; hope everything works out for you <3 sending headpats and hugs
jxxkwx
#4
Chapter 79: hello, author-nim!

it’s been awhile >< also, I do understand your feelings towards the ocs and your plot. it is up to you, as you’re the author. I’m sorry that you felt that way, and I hope that you’re able to write the future chapters with more positive feelings.

I would also like a copy of the book as well, so I can buy it and support you!

I hope all is well for you, and I will try to be more active. ♡
hzhfobsessed
#5
Chapter 79: that sounds good

i think the problem with applyfics (and why most ppl never finish writing them) is because it's annoying to make sure every character gets equal screentime while still keeping track of the plot

and then you get the ppl who don't keep up, which adds a whole nother layer of bothersome lol

but yeah mini revelation over, you do you!!!! it'll be fine either way (and i demand a copy once you publish ;))
wonpilist
#6
Chapter 79: yeet ig
i've just been: deceased
hzhfobsessed
#7
Chapter 78: ahhhhhhhhh that's a hard choice :(( i'd say go to school 2 since it sounds like a big hotshot (also because if you decide that you don't like your major, you can change and it seems like all the programs will be good!) but school 1 sounds really nice if you're DEAD set on your major. i'd say don't let the living situation influence you too much but actually ik those things can make or break a decision so i will simply not comment on it anymore.

also, 2hyun 4 lyfe ;)
hzhfobsessed
#8
Chapter 77: heeeheheheheheheheeeeee wucasi uwuu

no i'm not okay thank you for asking
hzhfobsessed
#9
Chapter 76: DUN DUN IN DUNNNNNNN

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW??? INTERNAL STRIFE????? BREAKING THE CYCLE OF HISTORY??????? STAY TUNED TO FIND THE OUT!!!!!!!!!!

if you are open to constructive criticism i'd say split up some of the bigger paragraphs; with this small of a font (yes i know i can turn off some sort of view but i'm old and dumb)it makes me eyes hurt to read so much compact text in one big long paragraph ;;;
jxxkwx
#10
Chapter 75: aww daehyun and hyunnie ♡ they’re so cute

I think spreading every now and then is good but you should also limit it >< I hope you rest even more )): I get what you mean by Asian parents comparing you to others ugh I’ve learned to ignore it tbh sigh I hope you feel better! ♡