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Enigma ﴾¿﴿ Story Arc: Revelation ﴾?﴿
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Alice: “How long is forever?"
White Rabbit: “Sometimes, just one second.

- Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland

the story

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TSINGHUA UNIVERSITY, CAMPUS 

—  beijing, china; 21.7, 17:45 

  A paper cup filled with latte, the coffee beans grinded to perfection and just the enough amount of cream and milk mixed within. As Daehyun chatted up the barista behind the counter, a student one year below him with tussled brown hair streaked with pink hiding the tip of his pointed ears - a young and inexperienced member of the Seelie - he could feel the scent of newly ground coffee beans tickling his nostrils, and let out a sigh of relief as old memories re-surfaced and submerged him.

  A slight turn of his wrist, barely flicking to reveal 17:45 blaring in green. Slipping a quick and apologetic grin to the young boy, Daehyun grabbed his paper cup, mouthing the words see you later over the commotion gathering in the small coffee shop, and side-stepped a young woman hustling in with papers in her hand to the exit.

  As Daehyun hurried across the campus to get back to his dorm - three miles away from the tiny coffee shop tucked away just beside the library - he passed several girls, all of whom had gazes flitted towards him and quickly away, gigglings accompanied, and sighed in response, wishing he could get rid of the unwanted attention. 

  Nearing his dormitory building though, his spirits began to lift at the prospect of seeing Hyunwook. Daehyun chuckled quietly at the complaints and hell he'd likely to raise at smelling the coffee, and strode to his room as soon as he entered the building. When he raised his knuckles to knock at Hyunwook's door, Daehyun knew something was amiss when Zhengting opened it with Persephone napping in his arms. 

  "Looking for Hyun?" The Chinese boy cocked his head, with the older nodding. "He just ran out like hellfire was on his heels after this got delivered." Zhengting's slim fingers held up a piece of parchment, a red flower slipped between his fingers. He shrugged, and continued, "He took the jacket."

  Well, that explained a lot. The General took the paper silently, before reading the single line scrawled upon it. Somehow, in that window of time, Zhengting had acquired a mug of god-knows-what and sipped from it, waiting for a response. Looking up, Daehyun allowed his lips to fold into a thin line before muttering thanks, and heading back to his room.

  As he prepared to open the door though, his neighbour next door, who was leaning against his doorframe, toasted him with another mug of his own. "You got another admirer." The Chinese nodded towards the scroll he knew would be there. "Nice girl too, at the looks of it. Gave you a red rose." He chuckled, and took a swig of what Daehyun suspected strongly now to be alcohol. "Good luck on Friday night!" 

  Giving a friendly wave back as the guy headed back to the comfort of his own room instead of a response, Daehyun stooped and picked up the parchment while muttering words that the guy next door probably didn't need to hear. Knowing better to actually smell the rose, or indeed, even touch it, Daehyun nudged the blossom through the door while balancing the piece of paper and his cup of coffee.

  Collapsing on a chair just beside his desk, the General broke the seal and unfurled the paper, rubbing a thumb against the tension spreading through his forehead as his eyes scanned the scrawl so characterstic of his superior, before sighing in exasperation.

  General Jung, urgent summons to Diamantes by order of Carroll.

 
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hzhfobsessed
#1
Chapter 81: GASDHAHAH NOT THE CHOIS ING UPPPPP

i was not actually expecting minhwan to cameo LOL it's so funny and hOLY the siblings meet ;))))))

i gotta wonder whose side mother is on :eyes: because i don't remember if i ever said that in the app LOL

but yeah 's heating UP
jxxkwx
#2
Chapter 80: not me not remembering Alex’s past- oof. I gotta read back his history >< it was a nice gateway to reveal more of CARDS and Gemini’s past, I think it flowed perfectly. I think it’s interesting how they use to be allies and now are enemies.

also, I don’t know if I missed this completely from previous chapters but Helena towards Daehyun? I didn’t know she had such feelings, oof. I kinda like the drama LMAO

ALSO ALSO CARDS LET MY BBY REST ;-; he needs rest- look at his eyes! D;
imjaebeoms
#3
Chapter 79: i understand where you're coming from and I hope that you'll do what you want and go for it! in the end, this is your story - you get to decide what you should do with it :D

ps: pls add me to the list of future buyers of this book once it's published o.o the whole plot is too cool to NOT be an actual book

i too hope that in the future I'll be more active with feedbacks since I get how discouraging it is when you're writing but you get nothing back in return ;-; hope everything works out for you <3 sending headpats and hugs
jxxkwx
#4
Chapter 79: hello, author-nim!

it’s been awhile >< also, I do understand your feelings towards the ocs and your plot. it is up to you, as you’re the author. I’m sorry that you felt that way, and I hope that you’re able to write the future chapters with more positive feelings.

I would also like a copy of the book as well, so I can buy it and support you!

I hope all is well for you, and I will try to be more active. ♡
hzhfobsessed
#5
Chapter 79: that sounds good

i think the problem with applyfics (and why most ppl never finish writing them) is because it's annoying to make sure every character gets equal screentime while still keeping track of the plot

and then you get the ppl who don't keep up, which adds a whole nother layer of bothersome lol

but yeah mini revelation over, you do you!!!! it'll be fine either way (and i demand a copy once you publish ;))
wonpilist
#6
Chapter 79: yeet ig
i've just been: deceased
hzhfobsessed
#7
Chapter 78: ahhhhhhhhh that's a hard choice :(( i'd say go to school 2 since it sounds like a big hotshot (also because if you decide that you don't like your major, you can change and it seems like all the programs will be good!) but school 1 sounds really nice if you're DEAD set on your major. i'd say don't let the living situation influence you too much but actually ik those things can make or break a decision so i will simply not comment on it anymore.

also, 2hyun 4 lyfe ;)
hzhfobsessed
#8
Chapter 77: heeeheheheheheheheeeeee wucasi uwuu

no i'm not okay thank you for asking
hzhfobsessed
#9
Chapter 76: DUN DUN IN DUNNNNNNN

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW??? INTERNAL STRIFE????? BREAKING THE CYCLE OF HISTORY??????? STAY TUNED TO FIND THE OUT!!!!!!!!!!

if you are open to constructive criticism i'd say split up some of the bigger paragraphs; with this small of a font (yes i know i can turn off some sort of view but i'm old and dumb)it makes me eyes hurt to read so much compact text in one big long paragraph ;;;
jxxkwx
#10
Chapter 75: aww daehyun and hyunnie ♡ they’re so cute

I think spreading every now and then is good but you should also limit it >< I hope you rest even more )): I get what you mean by Asian parents comparing you to others ugh I’ve learned to ignore it tbh sigh I hope you feel better! ♡