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Enigma ﴾¿﴿ Story Arc: Revelation ﴾?﴿
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““It’s always better to sacrifice your opponent’s men.”

– Savielly Tartakower

For her I decided to have a different approach because it's probably kind of repetitive to see Sungjong react blandly to everyone; and yes, there's foreshadowing involved here! 

 

the story

author's corner

gemini headquarters

—  2010; 19:30

  Seoah wasn't really annoyed that no one was there when she arrived, not really. The thing about keeping faery time was that, no matter how early you were, the other party would always arrive five minutes late. And since whomever that was that asked for her - she forgot about their name - was apparently fey as well, she would believe that rule applied too.

  ...or whatever it was. Honestly, Seoah couldn't really keep track of everything that was going on, not anymore. She tried to keep her thoughts in order, but as always, forgets. Typical. 

  Nonetheless, Seoah wasn't annoyed. Somehow, she even found herself jumping to her feet when she heard heels echoing down the hallway, and filled with a sort of nervousness that she couldn't explain. That was, until she caught a glimpse of the woman who was there to pick her up.

  "...Seoah?"

  Momentarily in a stupor, she quickly got out of it when she heard her name being called. "Y-yes!" The faery managed to put a smile on her lips as if nothing was wrong, though it did not go unnoticed by the other. "My apologies. You were saying?" 

  The agent seemed slightly concerned, tilting her head to the side. "I was saying, please place your weapon in my possession for now. It would do no one good if you are to walk fully armed to the King's study." 

  "Oh, of course!" Still flustered, Seoah reached around, fingers fumbling at the sheath strapped to her thigh, somehow unable to get the damn dagger out until the other suddenly stepped in the line of her sight. "Perhaps...some help?" 

  "No, no, please - don't worry about it." A slight tweak with her fingers managed to get the clasp free, and Seoah handed the entire sheath over. "Here you go...?"

  "Chess." The faery took the weapon from her, before doing some kind of obscure spell with her fingers that caused it to vanish. "Rest assured; it is safely kept. Now, please, follow me." 

  As the other started making her way down the seemingly never-ending corridor, Seoah found herself slowly collecting her thoughts, her former flustered self and nervousness vanishing, though still suspended in some sort of disbelief. How could she have forgotten her face...? 

  Consumed with her thoughts, Seoah didn't notice Chess stopping, and walked straight into her in front of the King's study. Flustered for the second time, she stepped back, apology on the tip of her tongue when the other spoke first.

  "Are you quite alright, Agent Gossamer? If you're sick, perhaps - " 

  "No, really, I'm fine!" She insisted, then realizing her impulsiveness. "I'm sorry; it must be nerves." Seoah lied, gritting her teeth through a smile. 

  Chess studied her, then gave a small sigh of disbelief. "I doubt it; my background check revealed you are constantly in the company of the Seelie court. It would be quite a loss of face if you could not conduct yourself properly in Court." There was a slight pause. "I've been in Court once myself. It was quite intimidating, I must admit, but appearances had to be kept, of course." 

  At that, Seoah's eyes widened slightly, then held herself back. "Y-you have? What were you doing there?"

  A suspicious glance was passed over her face. "Official Gemini business, of course. Why else would I be there?" At the other girl's expression, she softened slightly, and cleared . "At any rate, you don't have to be so afraid of the King. He can be kind if he wants to, and he usually is to new recruits. Compose yourself, please, Agent Gossamer." 

  The sentence seemed to waken Seoah to some kind of realization. The jitterness slowly disappeared from her fingers, and she stood up straighter, rearranging her features to that of calmness. 

  "Yes, of course, Agent Chess." 

  

 
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hzhfobsessed
#1
Chapter 81: GASDHAHAH NOT THE CHOIS ING UPPPPP

i was not actually expecting minhwan to cameo LOL it's so funny and hOLY the siblings meet ;))))))

i gotta wonder whose side mother is on :eyes: because i don't remember if i ever said that in the app LOL

but yeah 's heating UP
jxxkwx
#2
Chapter 80: not me not remembering Alex’s past- oof. I gotta read back his history >< it was a nice gateway to reveal more of CARDS and Gemini’s past, I think it flowed perfectly. I think it’s interesting how they use to be allies and now are enemies.

also, I don’t know if I missed this completely from previous chapters but Helena towards Daehyun? I didn’t know she had such feelings, oof. I kinda like the drama LMAO

ALSO ALSO CARDS LET MY BBY REST ;-; he needs rest- look at his eyes! D;
imjaebeoms
#3
Chapter 79: i understand where you're coming from and I hope that you'll do what you want and go for it! in the end, this is your story - you get to decide what you should do with it :D

ps: pls add me to the list of future buyers of this book once it's published o.o the whole plot is too cool to NOT be an actual book

i too hope that in the future I'll be more active with feedbacks since I get how discouraging it is when you're writing but you get nothing back in return ;-; hope everything works out for you <3 sending headpats and hugs
jxxkwx
#4
Chapter 79: hello, author-nim!

it’s been awhile >< also, I do understand your feelings towards the ocs and your plot. it is up to you, as you’re the author. I’m sorry that you felt that way, and I hope that you’re able to write the future chapters with more positive feelings.

I would also like a copy of the book as well, so I can buy it and support you!

I hope all is well for you, and I will try to be more active. ♡
hzhfobsessed
#5
Chapter 79: that sounds good

i think the problem with applyfics (and why most ppl never finish writing them) is because it's annoying to make sure every character gets equal screentime while still keeping track of the plot

and then you get the ppl who don't keep up, which adds a whole nother layer of bothersome lol

but yeah mini revelation over, you do you!!!! it'll be fine either way (and i demand a copy once you publish ;))
wonpilist
#6
Chapter 79: yeet ig
i've just been: deceased
hzhfobsessed
#7
Chapter 78: ahhhhhhhhh that's a hard choice :(( i'd say go to school 2 since it sounds like a big hotshot (also because if you decide that you don't like your major, you can change and it seems like all the programs will be good!) but school 1 sounds really nice if you're DEAD set on your major. i'd say don't let the living situation influence you too much but actually ik those things can make or break a decision so i will simply not comment on it anymore.

also, 2hyun 4 lyfe ;)
hzhfobsessed
#8
Chapter 77: heeeheheheheheheheeeeee wucasi uwuu

no i'm not okay thank you for asking
hzhfobsessed
#9
Chapter 76: DUN DUN IN DUNNNNNNN

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW??? INTERNAL STRIFE????? BREAKING THE CYCLE OF HISTORY??????? STAY TUNED TO FIND THE OUT!!!!!!!!!!

if you are open to constructive criticism i'd say split up some of the bigger paragraphs; with this small of a font (yes i know i can turn off some sort of view but i'm old and dumb)it makes me eyes hurt to read so much compact text in one big long paragraph ;;;
jxxkwx
#10
Chapter 75: aww daehyun and hyunnie ♡ they’re so cute

I think spreading every now and then is good but you should also limit it >< I hope you rest even more )): I get what you mean by Asian parents comparing you to others ugh I’ve learned to ignore it tbh sigh I hope you feel better! ♡