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Enigma ﴾¿﴿ Story Arc: Revelation ﴾?﴿
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“I can't go back to yesterday because I was a different person then." 

Alice, Alice in Wonderland

 

also I’m sorry if this is terrible it’s like 2am here and I’m sleep-deprived www

 

the story

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—  turkey; 19.7.2017, 19:15

  "You called...sir?" 

  "Ah." At the voice, the figure behind the desk spun around and smiled. "Very good. You're on time. Early, even."

  Yongguk said nothing at the remark, and merely stood silently in front of the superior. Earlier that day, he had recieved a sealed parchment scroll with a rose, de-thorned, red as if freshly plucked, placed on his desk - a stark contrast to the white and black theme of his room. Seeing the summons, he had hurried back as quickly as possible - being a leader meant setting a good example, and he was determined to give an excellent first impression - and as a result, arrived in front of Carroll's desk just fifteen minutes before the scheduled meeting time.

  "Though," Carroll continued, voice cutting through the man's thoughts. "It is not polite to arrive early. Naturally," And here a wave of the hand was used to prove the points mentioned. "Being late is inexcusable. But being early does not have its advantages either."

  "I apologize," Yongguk responded politely. "It was - "

  "I did not say it was wrong of you." Through the shadows, the man could see the silhouette of a hand being raised to stop him mid-sentence. "But bear it in mind next time so that you would adhere better to my wishes. Understood?"

  "Yes, sir."

  "Very good." A pause, then the sound of a cork popping, before liquid flowed into glass, the slight sizzling of the beverage not escaping Yongguk's ears. Champagne, he thought. "Oh, take a seat, don't be shy. I assume you drink?"

  "With all due respect, I'm a bartender, sir." Crossing the room in two strides, the man managed to slide onto the cushioned surface of the chair opposite of his superior's, and sat, before his fingers closed around the slim stem of the flute that was just being slid across the desk towards him.

  "Of course. How silly of me. My apologies, young man. But nonetheless, a congratulations is in order." Another well-timed pause. "You should be proud of yourself, my dear. Not many would have the honour of leading Wonderland - my hand-picked elites. And so. Mr Bang, welcome to Wonderland, the first of many and the one to lead." A reflection of light from the chandelier caught the rim of the champagne glass as Carroll raised it to toast Yongguk, who mimicked the actions and raised his own in salute as well. A clear cling echoed through the dark room, before the two drank, thus silence ensuring.

  "And now, a question." A slight sound indicated that Carroll had placed the champagne flute onto the surface of his desk, before folding fingers together. "As a leader, what must you do, in this moment?"

  Yongguk reflected on the question for a moment. While he was undoubtedly trained as a player, this was something else entirely; to lead a team, to make decisions on behalf of six other individuals whom he has yet to meet, was something that no amount of training would prepare him for. And so he decided to rely on his instincts.

  "I would ensure that all of my teammates had recieved the summons from you, sir, and that they are shortly on their way to Headquarters in order to assemble as a team. And perhaps to recieve briefing, or instructions from you, sir."

  A small round of applause before Carroll spoke, Yongguk pratically hearing a slightly impressed smile on the head of CARDS' tone. "As expected, my judgement did not fail me. Indeed, you are correct. And that's why, I would like to invite you to observe on the tracking of your teammates to this base, Mr Bang. Behold."

  Carroll must have had pressed a button somewhere, because the opposite wall fell away to reveal an enormous screen with the world map printed on it, red dots blinking and pinpointed on different spots of it. Yongguk counted six.

  "And now, let us watch as your teammates slowly make their way here, to us." 

 
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hzhfobsessed
#1
Chapter 81: GASDHAHAH NOT THE CHOIS ING UPPPPP

i was not actually expecting minhwan to cameo LOL it's so funny and hOLY the siblings meet ;))))))

i gotta wonder whose side mother is on :eyes: because i don't remember if i ever said that in the app LOL

but yeah 's heating UP
jxxkwx
#2
Chapter 80: not me not remembering Alex’s past- oof. I gotta read back his history >< it was a nice gateway to reveal more of CARDS and Gemini’s past, I think it flowed perfectly. I think it’s interesting how they use to be allies and now are enemies.

also, I don’t know if I missed this completely from previous chapters but Helena towards Daehyun? I didn’t know she had such feelings, oof. I kinda like the drama LMAO

ALSO ALSO CARDS LET MY BBY REST ;-; he needs rest- look at his eyes! D;
imjaebeoms
#3
Chapter 79: i understand where you're coming from and I hope that you'll do what you want and go for it! in the end, this is your story - you get to decide what you should do with it :D

ps: pls add me to the list of future buyers of this book once it's published o.o the whole plot is too cool to NOT be an actual book

i too hope that in the future I'll be more active with feedbacks since I get how discouraging it is when you're writing but you get nothing back in return ;-; hope everything works out for you <3 sending headpats and hugs
jxxkwx
#4
Chapter 79: hello, author-nim!

it’s been awhile >< also, I do understand your feelings towards the ocs and your plot. it is up to you, as you’re the author. I’m sorry that you felt that way, and I hope that you’re able to write the future chapters with more positive feelings.

I would also like a copy of the book as well, so I can buy it and support you!

I hope all is well for you, and I will try to be more active. ♡
hzhfobsessed
#5
Chapter 79: that sounds good

i think the problem with applyfics (and why most ppl never finish writing them) is because it's annoying to make sure every character gets equal screentime while still keeping track of the plot

and then you get the ppl who don't keep up, which adds a whole nother layer of bothersome lol

but yeah mini revelation over, you do you!!!! it'll be fine either way (and i demand a copy once you publish ;))
wonpilist
#6
Chapter 79: yeet ig
i've just been: deceased
hzhfobsessed
#7
Chapter 78: ahhhhhhhhh that's a hard choice :(( i'd say go to school 2 since it sounds like a big hotshot (also because if you decide that you don't like your major, you can change and it seems like all the programs will be good!) but school 1 sounds really nice if you're DEAD set on your major. i'd say don't let the living situation influence you too much but actually ik those things can make or break a decision so i will simply not comment on it anymore.

also, 2hyun 4 lyfe ;)
hzhfobsessed
#8
Chapter 77: heeeheheheheheheheeeeee wucasi uwuu

no i'm not okay thank you for asking
hzhfobsessed
#9
Chapter 76: DUN DUN IN DUNNNNNNN

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW??? INTERNAL STRIFE????? BREAKING THE CYCLE OF HISTORY??????? STAY TUNED TO FIND THE OUT!!!!!!!!!!

if you are open to constructive criticism i'd say split up some of the bigger paragraphs; with this small of a font (yes i know i can turn off some sort of view but i'm old and dumb)it makes me eyes hurt to read so much compact text in one big long paragraph ;;;
jxxkwx
#10
Chapter 75: aww daehyun and hyunnie ♡ they’re so cute

I think spreading every now and then is good but you should also limit it >< I hope you rest even more )): I get what you mean by Asian parents comparing you to others ugh I’ve learned to ignore it tbh sigh I hope you feel better! ♡