Teaser #3

Enigma ﴾¿﴿ Story Arc: Revelation ﴾?﴿
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Hi I don't know what I'm doing and what this teaser is; but it's probably the clash of wills and decisions between Gemini and Wonderland? Or at least its beginning? Whatever it is, here it is :')

Also reminder that deadline is coming soon! I'll probably extend it since there's not enough applicants :( but please apply! Love y'all <3

(Also yes this is another episode of Carroll's Big EnergyTM)

the story

author's corner

at the edge of the fey woods 

— unknown time 

The full moon high up in the darkened night sky, its beams gently illuminating the land below. Flowers sprang beneath the feet, and a slight breeze lifted dark locks in gentle dance. In the distance, a pool of water sparkled under the bright circle in the sky.

In other words, the perfect night for a meeting with the Fey.

Carroll doesn't often bother to walk, but when it was decided that the action was necessary, often the entire ensemble was employed; the hat, the gloves, the boots, and of course, the cane. It would simply be unseeming to not present oneself at one's best when meeting a monarch. And the monarch of the enemy, no less.

As these thoughts ran through the Head of CARDS' mind, it was noticed that a ring of miniature toadstools had sprung, by magic, it appeared, under the soles of the black leather boots. A conventional but useful way to summon the Fey. Or at least, when there was still Nature to conduct her magic. The ring of fungi made Carroll smile a little, a smirk tugging at the corner of the lips before the black leather boots straightened to allow their owner to stare up to the dark and brooding figure that had just arrived, seemingly materialized out of nowhere.

"Your Majesty," Carroll instantly knelt on the still-illuminated grass, mentally grieving at the silk trousers that would have been stained by now. "How nice of you to have come and honoured a lowly being such as me with...a meeting."

"Save your nonsense," The Unseelie King rumbled, in a voice that resembled rolling thunder. The black flames that made the hem of his cloak started flickering, dancing in intense tango, alerting Carroll to the fact that His Majesty was getting agitated. "We both know the reason for my arrival."

"Indeed," Carroll straightened up again, mentally rejoicing at the silk pants, though it instantly shifted when the rather large stain was noticed. "Now, perhaps, if we may - "

There was a sudden rumble again; lightning flashed in the distance and thunder rolled across the seemingly peaceful woodland as the Unseelie King striked his staff on the ground, effectively silencing Carroll's words. 

"What would be the meaning of this, exactly?" Within the folds of his cloak, the King produced a scroll of parchment that Carroll thought resembled a declaration of war that was written previously. Or rather, it was an invitation. The Elders have had the choice to reject. But no matter. Confrontation with an issue usually meant forced agreement, and that, frankly, was what Carroll was looking for and wanted.

And got.

"I'm not quite sure as to what you mean, Your Majesty."

Another rumble in the distance. Another smirk tugged at the lips, but the Head of CARDS forced it down. Appearances must be kept. 

"Why are you deciding to topple the balance of peace kept until now? There is no reason for such. No Underworlder had committed any Forbidden Crime or broke the Unspeakable Law. Unless..." The Unseelie King broke off, not daring to say the inevitable truth that would have came along some time or another. Black flames flickered at the corners of his eyes, or what would have passed for eyes, tiny pockets of fading stars faintly shining in black holes, narrowed in contempt and disgust while Carroll's smile grew bigger. The staff was striked on the ground again, and the Unseelie King growled in disgust.

"Indeed. We are proceeding into the territory of the 'unless'. It is true. I have decided to do the inevitable - " 

"Very well." Seeming to not bear another moment of Carroll continuing on, the Unseelie King cut in and broke his words. "Since you have made the decision to hunt our species and force it into extinction, we will do what we must to save our race. No longer would we hide in submission, mortal. You will recieve the full extent of our wrath." With that, he glowered at the other once more, and striked his staff one last time; without waiting for a reply, he disappeared into the cool night air, seemingly vanishing into nothingness.

" - which is to declare a war because I had no choice," Carroll finished the sentence, then sighed. "Those old fools; never one for patience. Since when have I said to make the decision of..." At that the Head of CARDS paused, then continued mockingly; " 'hunting their species and force it into extinction'? I'm merely doing what I thought to be inevitable for us; for my people." Carroll heaved another sigh and placed a hand on the hip, looking for any trace of the Unseelie King, of which there would obviously be none. "But of course, you would not see it that way. Oh well. Suppose I actually do what you say, Your Majesty..." The smile then re-appeared, and grew even larger.

"But then it would be more fun that way, wouldn't it?"

 
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hzhfobsessed
#1
Chapter 81: GASDHAHAH NOT THE CHOIS ING UPPPPP

i was not actually expecting minhwan to cameo LOL it's so funny and hOLY the siblings meet ;))))))

i gotta wonder whose side mother is on :eyes: because i don't remember if i ever said that in the app LOL

but yeah 's heating UP
jxxkwx
#2
Chapter 80: not me not remembering Alex’s past- oof. I gotta read back his history >< it was a nice gateway to reveal more of CARDS and Gemini’s past, I think it flowed perfectly. I think it’s interesting how they use to be allies and now are enemies.

also, I don’t know if I missed this completely from previous chapters but Helena towards Daehyun? I didn’t know she had such feelings, oof. I kinda like the drama LMAO

ALSO ALSO CARDS LET MY BBY REST ;-; he needs rest- look at his eyes! D;
imjaebeoms
#3
Chapter 79: i understand where you're coming from and I hope that you'll do what you want and go for it! in the end, this is your story - you get to decide what you should do with it :D

ps: pls add me to the list of future buyers of this book once it's published o.o the whole plot is too cool to NOT be an actual book

i too hope that in the future I'll be more active with feedbacks since I get how discouraging it is when you're writing but you get nothing back in return ;-; hope everything works out for you <3 sending headpats and hugs
jxxkwx
#4
Chapter 79: hello, author-nim!

it’s been awhile >< also, I do understand your feelings towards the ocs and your plot. it is up to you, as you’re the author. I’m sorry that you felt that way, and I hope that you’re able to write the future chapters with more positive feelings.

I would also like a copy of the book as well, so I can buy it and support you!

I hope all is well for you, and I will try to be more active. ♡
hzhfobsessed
#5
Chapter 79: that sounds good

i think the problem with applyfics (and why most ppl never finish writing them) is because it's annoying to make sure every character gets equal screentime while still keeping track of the plot

and then you get the ppl who don't keep up, which adds a whole nother layer of bothersome lol

but yeah mini revelation over, you do you!!!! it'll be fine either way (and i demand a copy once you publish ;))
wonpilist
#6
Chapter 79: yeet ig
i've just been: deceased
hzhfobsessed
#7
Chapter 78: ahhhhhhhhh that's a hard choice :(( i'd say go to school 2 since it sounds like a big hotshot (also because if you decide that you don't like your major, you can change and it seems like all the programs will be good!) but school 1 sounds really nice if you're DEAD set on your major. i'd say don't let the living situation influence you too much but actually ik those things can make or break a decision so i will simply not comment on it anymore.

also, 2hyun 4 lyfe ;)
hzhfobsessed
#8
Chapter 77: heeeheheheheheheheeeeee wucasi uwuu

no i'm not okay thank you for asking
hzhfobsessed
#9
Chapter 76: DUN DUN IN DUNNNNNNN

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW??? INTERNAL STRIFE????? BREAKING THE CYCLE OF HISTORY??????? STAY TUNED TO FIND THE OUT!!!!!!!!!!

if you are open to constructive criticism i'd say split up some of the bigger paragraphs; with this small of a font (yes i know i can turn off some sort of view but i'm old and dumb)it makes me eyes hurt to read so much compact text in one big long paragraph ;;;
jxxkwx
#10
Chapter 75: aww daehyun and hyunnie ♡ they’re so cute

I think spreading every now and then is good but you should also limit it >< I hope you rest even more )): I get what you mean by Asian parents comparing you to others ugh I’ve learned to ignore it tbh sigh I hope you feel better! ♡