PRELUDE : : Chess

Enigma ﴾¿﴿ Story Arc: Revelation ﴾?﴿
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Another prologue from Gemini's perspective! 

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gemini headquarters

—  2010; 2:30a.m.

  It was a time when everyone should be asleep. At least, that was what the humans say. Underworlders never bother to follow the humans' rules.

  They had no reason to.

  But nonetheless, when one had been working for almost a week without sleep or rest, one might consider to abide by the rules that one lived by in the daytime. And so, the King was seriously contemplating returning to his quarters for a well-deserved nap after having brushed his nose against the surface of his desk for nearly two hours, when a portal opened in the middle of his study.

  The King sighed and rubbed his thumb against his temples, trying to ease the tension and the fatigue seeping in. It didn't work.

  "Greetings, Your Majesty." A familiar figure landed out of the dark swirling mess onto a kneeling position on the carpet gracefully. Reminding himself to maintain a dignified demeanor, the King observed the female cooly.

  "Good thing you didn't say 'good day'," The man reclining on the chair behind a massive desk finally decided to detach himself from the leather and to lean forward. "It would have had such an immense influence on our cheery and lovely mood here." 

  Chess gave a soft sigh before standing up, willing patience. She met the King's cool gaze with an equal one of her own, and approached his desk. "I have carried out your orders - "

  "I issued you orders? That's news. When was that again?" 

  " - which you did not give me, but I had percieved so on the assumption that you did not stop me from carrying it out," The faery finished, handing a manila folder that she had seemingly produced from thin air to the man. He stared at her, as if weighing whether it was worth his time and attention, before taking it and flipping it open.

  "Profiles of our new recruits?" 

  "Yes sir." 

  "Interesting," The King took the papers and flipped through them, scrutinizing each of them in turn. "And there are - "

  "- six of them," Chess concluded, and for the first time she noticed a shift in emotions on the King's face. 

  "Six," The man repeated. "Barely half of the original number." As he reached the last page, the slightest of frowns shadowed his face and he looked up to the girl. "Where's the last one?" 

  "The last recruit had...disappeared under curious circumstances. I had tried to reach out to all of their connections and relationships, have-been places, everywhere. Their existence was deleted. Erased from every corner of the world possible. It was as if this individual had vanished from the very face of the earth itself." 

  "All the more reason that we must recruit them, then," The King replied, tossing the manila folder back onto his desk. "You may lead the others here if they have consented to you plucking them from the fabric of reality."

  "And the curious individual?"

  "Pursue them."

  "I take that as an order, then, Your Majesty?" A smirk curled at the corner of Chess' lips, which did not pass unseen under the King's watchful eyes, and the tiniest of frowns pass through his lips. 

  "You may percieve it however you wish. Now begone." 

  As the faery disappeared back through the portal she had came through, the King of Gemini picked up the manila folder and looked at the blank papers again, scrutinizing it once more.

  "Curious indeed." 

 
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hzhfobsessed
#1
Chapter 81: GASDHAHAH NOT THE CHOIS ING UPPPPP

i was not actually expecting minhwan to cameo LOL it's so funny and hOLY the siblings meet ;))))))

i gotta wonder whose side mother is on :eyes: because i don't remember if i ever said that in the app LOL

but yeah 's heating UP
jxxkwx
#2
Chapter 80: not me not remembering Alex’s past- oof. I gotta read back his history >< it was a nice gateway to reveal more of CARDS and Gemini’s past, I think it flowed perfectly. I think it’s interesting how they use to be allies and now are enemies.

also, I don’t know if I missed this completely from previous chapters but Helena towards Daehyun? I didn’t know she had such feelings, oof. I kinda like the drama LMAO

ALSO ALSO CARDS LET MY BBY REST ;-; he needs rest- look at his eyes! D;
imjaebeoms
#3
Chapter 79: i understand where you're coming from and I hope that you'll do what you want and go for it! in the end, this is your story - you get to decide what you should do with it :D

ps: pls add me to the list of future buyers of this book once it's published o.o the whole plot is too cool to NOT be an actual book

i too hope that in the future I'll be more active with feedbacks since I get how discouraging it is when you're writing but you get nothing back in return ;-; hope everything works out for you <3 sending headpats and hugs
jxxkwx
#4
Chapter 79: hello, author-nim!

it’s been awhile >< also, I do understand your feelings towards the ocs and your plot. it is up to you, as you’re the author. I’m sorry that you felt that way, and I hope that you’re able to write the future chapters with more positive feelings.

I would also like a copy of the book as well, so I can buy it and support you!

I hope all is well for you, and I will try to be more active. ♡
hzhfobsessed
#5
Chapter 79: that sounds good

i think the problem with applyfics (and why most ppl never finish writing them) is because it's annoying to make sure every character gets equal screentime while still keeping track of the plot

and then you get the ppl who don't keep up, which adds a whole nother layer of bothersome lol

but yeah mini revelation over, you do you!!!! it'll be fine either way (and i demand a copy once you publish ;))
wonpilist
#6
Chapter 79: yeet ig
i've just been: deceased
hzhfobsessed
#7
Chapter 78: ahhhhhhhhh that's a hard choice :(( i'd say go to school 2 since it sounds like a big hotshot (also because if you decide that you don't like your major, you can change and it seems like all the programs will be good!) but school 1 sounds really nice if you're DEAD set on your major. i'd say don't let the living situation influence you too much but actually ik those things can make or break a decision so i will simply not comment on it anymore.

also, 2hyun 4 lyfe ;)
hzhfobsessed
#8
Chapter 77: heeeheheheheheheheeeeee wucasi uwuu

no i'm not okay thank you for asking
hzhfobsessed
#9
Chapter 76: DUN DUN IN DUNNNNNNN

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW??? INTERNAL STRIFE????? BREAKING THE CYCLE OF HISTORY??????? STAY TUNED TO FIND THE OUT!!!!!!!!!!

if you are open to constructive criticism i'd say split up some of the bigger paragraphs; with this small of a font (yes i know i can turn off some sort of view but i'm old and dumb)it makes me eyes hurt to read so much compact text in one big long paragraph ;;;
jxxkwx
#10
Chapter 75: aww daehyun and hyunnie ♡ they’re so cute

I think spreading every now and then is good but you should also limit it >< I hope you rest even more )): I get what you mean by Asian parents comparing you to others ugh I’ve learned to ignore it tbh sigh I hope you feel better! ♡