0.07 : : THE KNIGHT

Enigma ﴾¿﴿ Story Arc: Revelation ﴾?﴿
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“It is my style to take my opponent and myself on to unknown grounds. A game of chess is not an examination of knowledge; it is a battle of nerves.”

– David Bronstein

Confession time: I honestly think I did a terrible job at portraying her but please still read this www 

 

the story

author's corner

gemini headquarters

—  2010; 18:45

  “You’re late.”

  “My apologies, but I believe I did not announce a time for this meeting.” 

  Minkyung studied the woman in front of her, lips folded thinly into a smile that vaguely resembled politeness. No matter how much she tried to look into this...organisation she would be joining (ahem, invited to join), and especially the woman who had contacted her, Minkyung had came up to a blank. ‘Gemini’ simply did not exist on search engines. 

   However, she had caught snatches of gossip from her Underworlder clients, and the news were either very positive, or very negative. Which wasn’t exactly helpful. 

  Either way, here she was, in this unfamiliar building (can one even call it a building? They don’t seem to be above ground), wearing a suit because, formal wear, and staring at a faery, who was somewhat politely staring back.

  “You said to arrive at 6:30pm,” Minkyung replied pointedly, crossing her arms.

  “I did not say when I would show up, however,” The other pointed out, and her heel before the girl could reply. “But it does not matter. Follow me to the King, please.”

  Minkyung frowned slightly at the tone of voice adopted. She normally tend to not have any problems with Underworlders, but this woman seemed to be rather sure of herself, and Minkyung found herself not liking that. However, she had noticed the myriad of corridors stretching in front of them, resembling a labyrinth, and deciding that perhaps following the faery woman might be the best choice. 

  As they made their way deeper into the building, Minkyung decided to make a mental note of all the winding corridors, just in case an emergency exit was needed. When they finally stopped in front of a pair of double oak doors, the other turned back and gave her another thin smile, before opening them.

  "His Majesty the King." The faery gave a motion of her arm that indicated towards the man sat on the chair, behind an enormous desk. Minkyung strode forward boldly, looking up at him with a defiant air. "I'm Ahn Minkyung." 

  "Holder of the Knight position," The other then added, seemingly an additional introduction. The aforementioned girl then turned back to the faery, who gave a short bow and retreated away, before closing the doors behind her.

  After they were shut with a click, the man then gave a soft sigh, and leaned forward towards the light. Minkyung scanned the person in front of her, noticing that the King had relatively fair features for a man, light, green-blue eyes that seemed to flicker in the fading sunlight and brown hair growing over the navy fabric of his suit, taking all that in in a brief moment. 

  "The Knight." As her eyes rested on the King, she could feel the weight of his gaze on her as well. Sizing her up. Seeing if she was up to the job. Minkyung allowed a slight spark of challenge dance in her eyes before matching his stare with her own. "Welcome, to Gemini." 

  "Thank you." And awkward silence then followed. The King was the first to break the staring contest between the two, threading his fingers in front of him and leaning back on his chair. 

  "Perhaps a self-introduction is in order. My name is Lee Sungjong, and I would be leading the group also known as 'Gemini'. You are to be the holder of the Knight position, who serves as the second-in-command to King." When there was no response to that either, Sungjong gave another sigh. "Any questions?" 

  "No, thank you." 

  "Very well." The King straightened up slightly. "Chess will lead you to the next meeting place. Please wait there patiently." Pressing a button on his desk, the doors behind Minkyung then flew open to reveal the faery woman who had lead her there - ah, so her name was Chess - standing there. 

  "Oh, and you would be sharing the position with another person, by the way." 

  As Chess led Minkyung away, the last thing Sungjong saw was her burning glare.

  And the silhouette of a potential middle finger.  

    

 
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hzhfobsessed
#1
Chapter 81: GASDHAHAH NOT THE CHOIS ING UPPPPP

i was not actually expecting minhwan to cameo LOL it's so funny and hOLY the siblings meet ;))))))

i gotta wonder whose side mother is on :eyes: because i don't remember if i ever said that in the app LOL

but yeah 's heating UP
jxxkwx
#2
Chapter 80: not me not remembering Alex’s past- oof. I gotta read back his history >< it was a nice gateway to reveal more of CARDS and Gemini’s past, I think it flowed perfectly. I think it’s interesting how they use to be allies and now are enemies.

also, I don’t know if I missed this completely from previous chapters but Helena towards Daehyun? I didn’t know she had such feelings, oof. I kinda like the drama LMAO

ALSO ALSO CARDS LET MY BBY REST ;-; he needs rest- look at his eyes! D;
imjaebeoms
#3
Chapter 79: i understand where you're coming from and I hope that you'll do what you want and go for it! in the end, this is your story - you get to decide what you should do with it :D

ps: pls add me to the list of future buyers of this book once it's published o.o the whole plot is too cool to NOT be an actual book

i too hope that in the future I'll be more active with feedbacks since I get how discouraging it is when you're writing but you get nothing back in return ;-; hope everything works out for you <3 sending headpats and hugs
jxxkwx
#4
Chapter 79: hello, author-nim!

it’s been awhile >< also, I do understand your feelings towards the ocs and your plot. it is up to you, as you’re the author. I’m sorry that you felt that way, and I hope that you’re able to write the future chapters with more positive feelings.

I would also like a copy of the book as well, so I can buy it and support you!

I hope all is well for you, and I will try to be more active. ♡
hzhfobsessed
#5
Chapter 79: that sounds good

i think the problem with applyfics (and why most ppl never finish writing them) is because it's annoying to make sure every character gets equal screentime while still keeping track of the plot

and then you get the ppl who don't keep up, which adds a whole nother layer of bothersome lol

but yeah mini revelation over, you do you!!!! it'll be fine either way (and i demand a copy once you publish ;))
wonpilist
#6
Chapter 79: yeet ig
i've just been: deceased
hzhfobsessed
#7
Chapter 78: ahhhhhhhhh that's a hard choice :(( i'd say go to school 2 since it sounds like a big hotshot (also because if you decide that you don't like your major, you can change and it seems like all the programs will be good!) but school 1 sounds really nice if you're DEAD set on your major. i'd say don't let the living situation influence you too much but actually ik those things can make or break a decision so i will simply not comment on it anymore.

also, 2hyun 4 lyfe ;)
hzhfobsessed
#8
Chapter 77: heeeheheheheheheheeeeee wucasi uwuu

no i'm not okay thank you for asking
hzhfobsessed
#9
Chapter 76: DUN DUN IN DUNNNNNNN

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW??? INTERNAL STRIFE????? BREAKING THE CYCLE OF HISTORY??????? STAY TUNED TO FIND THE OUT!!!!!!!!!!

if you are open to constructive criticism i'd say split up some of the bigger paragraphs; with this small of a font (yes i know i can turn off some sort of view but i'm old and dumb)it makes me eyes hurt to read so much compact text in one big long paragraph ;;;
jxxkwx
#10
Chapter 75: aww daehyun and hyunnie ♡ they’re so cute

I think spreading every now and then is good but you should also limit it >< I hope you rest even more )): I get what you mean by Asian parents comparing you to others ugh I’ve learned to ignore it tbh sigh I hope you feel better! ♡