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Enigma ﴾¿﴿ Story Arc: Revelation ﴾?﴿
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““Chess is a war over the board. The object is to crush the opponent’s mind.”

– Bobby Fischer

 

“Off with their heads!” The Queen said.


― Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland

Also yes hi this is ty I'm not sure what I've done?? 

the story

author's corner

gemini headquarters 

—  2010; 18:20

  Jineul had no idea what he was doing there, or why he was here. More accurately, he had a brief idea of what this place was, and an inkling formed on what the faery woman behind him - apparently, her name was 'Chess' or something or another - had told him. But so far, he still hadn't had a glimpse of the whole picture.

  Which made him annoyed. 

  He could also feel the weight of her gaze on his outfit - a dark grey shirt with a plaid pleated skirt, the end of his black belt trailing down to his exposed thighs, and a black leather jacket, completed with knee-high combat boots - and to that end, her judgement.

  if he cared.

   "Excuse me, please." Her voice stopped the train of murderous thought in his head, and Jineul came to a halt silently as Chess resumed her place in front. She turned to look back at him, and said, "We will be heading to the King's study now. The corridors are quite confusing, so please follow me. It would also help if you could...ah, place that in our weaponry room." 

  At the mention of that, Jineul reached and unhooked his battleaxe from his back - his Antiopa. Looking at it, he ran his fingers across her gigantic blades, before looking back up to his guide with emotionless eyes. "I can take care of her myself." 

  "I'm afraid it's not an option," The faery woman replied, polite enough, but with a sharp glint in her eyes. "It would do no one good for you to wield a weapon in such close quarters with the King." 

  "If he's so powerful, I don't think she can kill him that easily." With relative ease, Jineul swung the battleaxe to his back, anchoring it in place again. With a sigh, the King's assistant continued on, her heels clicking through the halls again, until she stopped in front of a pair of large oak doors.

  "Go through these doors, and you'll be in the presence of His Majesty. Try to treat him with respect, as he would be leading you and your team in the future. Oh," She added, as her knuckles tapped on the wooden surface. "And try not to decapitate him." 

  The doors swung open to reveal a massive room, covered with bookshelves on every wall save for the one they were facing. Instead of a bookshelf, there was a desk in place, behind which sat a man who seemed to be on the verge of falling asleep.

  "Finally," He spoke, a clear voice cutting through the air. "And here I thought you had at long last lost your way."

  The faery woman gave another sigh. It was obvious that she dealt with this on a daily basis, and apparently the suitable response was to ignore him and carry on. "Shin Jineul, this is His Majesty the King, Lee Sungjong. He is the leader of this organization, and would be leading you and your teammates, formed in a group also known as 'Gemini'." 

  Jineul gave a mute nod to acknowledge this, and with necessary introductions out of the way, Chess spun on her heel and disappeared down the hall, leaving the two in the room with obvious tension in the air.

  The man known as the 'King' gave a sigh of his own, then leaned forward on his folded hands, staring and observing the younger. Jineul could feel the weight of his gaze on him, scrutinizing him, trying to see him through and whether or not he was a threat, an asset, a weakness. Unconsciously, he could feel himself clenching his fists, almost as if through a defensive instinct. 

  Time slowly went by. Jineul could practically hear the seconds ticking by as the older man continued to weigh him through observation, until he finally leaned back on his seat, crossing his legs, seemingly to give his judgement. "So," The King, at long last, spoke. "You are to be the Queen. My Queen."

  Another mute nod gave acknowledgement of that fact. Jineul didn't like the use of the personal pronoun, but he could deal with that later. With Antiopa, of course.

  The man seemed to have something else on his mind, his hesitant nature betraying the fact that he obviously had more to say. However, nothing could prepare him for what was to come, nor, indeed, did Jineul anticipate the next words coming out of his mouth.

  "You're very pretty."

  Jineul preened. 

  

 
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hzhfobsessed
#1
Chapter 81: GASDHAHAH NOT THE CHOIS ING UPPPPP

i was not actually expecting minhwan to cameo LOL it's so funny and hOLY the siblings meet ;))))))

i gotta wonder whose side mother is on :eyes: because i don't remember if i ever said that in the app LOL

but yeah 's heating UP
jxxkwx
#2
Chapter 80: not me not remembering Alex’s past- oof. I gotta read back his history >< it was a nice gateway to reveal more of CARDS and Gemini’s past, I think it flowed perfectly. I think it’s interesting how they use to be allies and now are enemies.

also, I don’t know if I missed this completely from previous chapters but Helena towards Daehyun? I didn’t know she had such feelings, oof. I kinda like the drama LMAO

ALSO ALSO CARDS LET MY BBY REST ;-; he needs rest- look at his eyes! D;
imjaebeoms
#3
Chapter 79: i understand where you're coming from and I hope that you'll do what you want and go for it! in the end, this is your story - you get to decide what you should do with it :D

ps: pls add me to the list of future buyers of this book once it's published o.o the whole plot is too cool to NOT be an actual book

i too hope that in the future I'll be more active with feedbacks since I get how discouraging it is when you're writing but you get nothing back in return ;-; hope everything works out for you <3 sending headpats and hugs
jxxkwx
#4
Chapter 79: hello, author-nim!

it’s been awhile >< also, I do understand your feelings towards the ocs and your plot. it is up to you, as you’re the author. I’m sorry that you felt that way, and I hope that you’re able to write the future chapters with more positive feelings.

I would also like a copy of the book as well, so I can buy it and support you!

I hope all is well for you, and I will try to be more active. ♡
hzhfobsessed
#5
Chapter 79: that sounds good

i think the problem with applyfics (and why most ppl never finish writing them) is because it's annoying to make sure every character gets equal screentime while still keeping track of the plot

and then you get the ppl who don't keep up, which adds a whole nother layer of bothersome lol

but yeah mini revelation over, you do you!!!! it'll be fine either way (and i demand a copy once you publish ;))
wonpilist
#6
Chapter 79: yeet ig
i've just been: deceased
hzhfobsessed
#7
Chapter 78: ahhhhhhhhh that's a hard choice :(( i'd say go to school 2 since it sounds like a big hotshot (also because if you decide that you don't like your major, you can change and it seems like all the programs will be good!) but school 1 sounds really nice if you're DEAD set on your major. i'd say don't let the living situation influence you too much but actually ik those things can make or break a decision so i will simply not comment on it anymore.

also, 2hyun 4 lyfe ;)
hzhfobsessed
#8
Chapter 77: heeeheheheheheheheeeeee wucasi uwuu

no i'm not okay thank you for asking
hzhfobsessed
#9
Chapter 76: DUN DUN IN DUNNNNNNN

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW??? INTERNAL STRIFE????? BREAKING THE CYCLE OF HISTORY??????? STAY TUNED TO FIND THE OUT!!!!!!!!!!

if you are open to constructive criticism i'd say split up some of the bigger paragraphs; with this small of a font (yes i know i can turn off some sort of view but i'm old and dumb)it makes me eyes hurt to read so much compact text in one big long paragraph ;;;
jxxkwx
#10
Chapter 75: aww daehyun and hyunnie ♡ they’re so cute

I think spreading every now and then is good but you should also limit it >< I hope you rest even more )): I get what you mean by Asian parents comparing you to others ugh I’ve learned to ignore it tbh sigh I hope you feel better! ♡