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Enigma ﴾¿﴿ Story Arc: Revelation ﴾?﴿
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“For in the idea of chess and the development of the chess mind we have a picture of the intellectual struggle of mankind.”

– Richard Réti

“Begin at the beginning," the King said, very gravely, "and go on till you come to the end: then stop.” 

- Lewis Carroll, 'Alice in Wonderland'

the story

author's corner

gemini headquarters; king's study 

—  2010; 18:00 

  Slim fingers tugged at the lapels of a fine navy-coloured suit, tucking a silk hankerchief in the pocket,  straightening his bowtie under his jacket, as well as the other parts of his suit. As he turned to look at himself in the mirror, the King finally gave a sigh of resignation, coming to a resolution.

   The bowtie was not working.

   Initially, he had thought to keep things simple. Casual. Friendly, even. But of course, a piece of his clothing refused to cooperate with this simple notion. And so, Sungjong found himself reaching for a tie in his drawer even before thinking of it.

  Why did he put ties in his study drawer, again? Ah yes. Emergencies. 

  "I believe you are looking for this, Your Majesty?" A familiar voice had broke through his thoughts, making him nearly jump out of his skin. With another sigh (he has a very strong suspicion that the evening would not go as planned. How...typical), Sungjong turned to face the faery, whose face did not betray the slightest of emotions as she handed over a thin box, inside of which rested a tie that matched his suit perfectly.

  Ah. 

  "It was with the garments you had brought along," Chess explained. Indeed, he had selected and packed the clothes carefully that morning, but of course, Sungjong have had a slip of mind and managed to completely forget about the tie. As he lifted the silk material out of the box, he could see at the corner of his eyes the last traces of sunset as the celestial body disappeared down the horizon. 

  "You should've knocked." The King began removing the bowtie, tugging it away from his collar and replacing it with the navy silk. He had been trained in the art of maintaining one's appearances, at any time, any hour of the day, and did not show the slightest change in expression when his assistant had appeared in his room. However, he could hear his voice betray irritation as his fingers moved deftly, weaving the material in and out until he deemed it presentable. Then Sungjong slowly turned to look at the faery, whose face was still unreadable.

  "The door was open." 

  "And you assumed it meant an invitation to come in?" 

  "I was merely following faery customs." 

  "Well, change, then. Learn some human and elf ones. I would've thought you have had complete mastery over them, seeing as you have served so many." 

  Chess ignored the remark, and merely retrieved a scroll from mid-air, handing it silently to the King, who raised an eyebrow, but nonetheless recieved it. "Arrangements for the evening, sir."

  Sungjong scanned the parchment, mentally checking down boxes for things that should be done, ensuring that everything was in place. Three chairs, split equally down the long table with him at the head of it. Silverware. Dessert. Flowers -

  "Why roses?"

  "I thought it would be a suitable companion to the decor tonight," Chess replied, with the air of one trying to educate a child. "Seeing as you have decided to drape white curtains on cream walls, and silverware on snow linen. A white lily would perhaps have been too forlorn. Therefore, the rose." 

  In response, Sungjong merely nodded. He would have opted for a grunt, but manners had taught him otherwise. Noting everything was suitably prepared, he handed the parchment back to Chess, who took it without a word, but then said, "Our guests would soon be arriving." 

  "Good. Show them in. The proper way," He added as an afterthought, being reminded of her nightly visits through portal travel. In response, she smiled thinly, and walked through the large double doors leading to his study, shutting them after her.

  After her heels finally disappeared from his hearing, Sungjong ran a hand down the length of his desk, before slowly settling himself on his chair behind it, crossing his legs and making himself comfortable.  

  And prepared himself for the onslaught to come. 

 
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hzhfobsessed
#1
Chapter 81: GASDHAHAH NOT THE CHOIS ING UPPPPP

i was not actually expecting minhwan to cameo LOL it's so funny and hOLY the siblings meet ;))))))

i gotta wonder whose side mother is on :eyes: because i don't remember if i ever said that in the app LOL

but yeah 's heating UP
jxxkwx
#2
Chapter 80: not me not remembering Alex’s past- oof. I gotta read back his history >< it was a nice gateway to reveal more of CARDS and Gemini’s past, I think it flowed perfectly. I think it’s interesting how they use to be allies and now are enemies.

also, I don’t know if I missed this completely from previous chapters but Helena towards Daehyun? I didn’t know she had such feelings, oof. I kinda like the drama LMAO

ALSO ALSO CARDS LET MY BBY REST ;-; he needs rest- look at his eyes! D;
imjaebeoms
#3
Chapter 79: i understand where you're coming from and I hope that you'll do what you want and go for it! in the end, this is your story - you get to decide what you should do with it :D

ps: pls add me to the list of future buyers of this book once it's published o.o the whole plot is too cool to NOT be an actual book

i too hope that in the future I'll be more active with feedbacks since I get how discouraging it is when you're writing but you get nothing back in return ;-; hope everything works out for you <3 sending headpats and hugs
jxxkwx
#4
Chapter 79: hello, author-nim!

it’s been awhile >< also, I do understand your feelings towards the ocs and your plot. it is up to you, as you’re the author. I’m sorry that you felt that way, and I hope that you’re able to write the future chapters with more positive feelings.

I would also like a copy of the book as well, so I can buy it and support you!

I hope all is well for you, and I will try to be more active. ♡
hzhfobsessed
#5
Chapter 79: that sounds good

i think the problem with applyfics (and why most ppl never finish writing them) is because it's annoying to make sure every character gets equal screentime while still keeping track of the plot

and then you get the ppl who don't keep up, which adds a whole nother layer of bothersome lol

but yeah mini revelation over, you do you!!!! it'll be fine either way (and i demand a copy once you publish ;))
wonpilist
#6
Chapter 79: yeet ig
i've just been: deceased
hzhfobsessed
#7
Chapter 78: ahhhhhhhhh that's a hard choice :(( i'd say go to school 2 since it sounds like a big hotshot (also because if you decide that you don't like your major, you can change and it seems like all the programs will be good!) but school 1 sounds really nice if you're DEAD set on your major. i'd say don't let the living situation influence you too much but actually ik those things can make or break a decision so i will simply not comment on it anymore.

also, 2hyun 4 lyfe ;)
hzhfobsessed
#8
Chapter 77: heeeheheheheheheheeeeee wucasi uwuu

no i'm not okay thank you for asking
hzhfobsessed
#9
Chapter 76: DUN DUN IN DUNNNNNNN

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW??? INTERNAL STRIFE????? BREAKING THE CYCLE OF HISTORY??????? STAY TUNED TO FIND THE OUT!!!!!!!!!!

if you are open to constructive criticism i'd say split up some of the bigger paragraphs; with this small of a font (yes i know i can turn off some sort of view but i'm old and dumb)it makes me eyes hurt to read so much compact text in one big long paragraph ;;;
jxxkwx
#10
Chapter 75: aww daehyun and hyunnie ♡ they’re so cute

I think spreading every now and then is good but you should also limit it >< I hope you rest even more )): I get what you mean by Asian parents comparing you to others ugh I’ve learned to ignore it tbh sigh I hope you feel better! ♡