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Enigma ﴾¿﴿ Story Arc: Revelation ﴾?﴿
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“Chess doesn’t drive people mad, it keeps mad people sane.”

– Bill Hartston

This unfortunately got hella long because I was spending half of the story trying to grasp his personality whelp

 

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gemini headquarters

—  2010; 19:20

  As the sound of heels resonated down the corridor, Jaebin raised his head up slowly, in response to the sound, and his eyes flickered up just in time to meet the almost bored, cool gaze of the faery who was making her way towards him.

  “Chess.”   

  “Ah.” As if in surprise, she stopped slightly, then cocked her head to the side. “You remembered. That’s...shocking. At any rate, my apologies for making you wait. Please, this way.”

  Jaebin let a civil smile grace his features, before detaching himself from the wall and followed her. Shoving his hands into the pockets of his dress pants, the man cast an eye around him, taking in his surroundings while his feet followed Chess’ heels - literally. The corridors were a dreary monochrome, some portraits of famous historical people hung on the walls - a few of which he had came across and known, actually - with other kinds of artefacts placed on display, and a black carpet lining the path to take. 

  As if she had heard his thoughts, Chess spoke, cutting through the silence. “Our leaders’ tastes could be...eccentric or questionable. Sometimes a mixture of both. However, be rest assured that our current King did not contribute to the decor. Except for the colour scheme.”

  Jaebin merely hummed in response. While he was interested in viewing what kind of person the...King would be, he certainly wasn't going to make his judgement based on a person's taste in decor (even though it does shows a lot about a person). A thought then suddenly crossed his head, and Jaebin found a smirk spreading through his face. 

  "I wonder if...his decor reflects his mood."

  At that, Chess turned around briefly to look at him, with an expression that could translate to almost boredom. "I beg your pardon?"

  "Perhaps if some colour comes to his face the place might brighten up," Jaebin suggested, giving a shrug. "For example...red. Or green." 

  A raise of her eyebrows. "Certainly you are not proposing to make His Majesty purposely mad for the sake of random amusement?" Chess then directed her gaze forward again, never breaking her stride. "I personally would not recommend it." 

  "Nothing so vulgar, of course," The man reassured her. "Though one would never know unless they try, right?" 

  An exasperated sigh. "Well, I suppose you'll certainly turn his face black with your sense of humour." Just as Jaebin was about to correct her that no that was not what he meant, they arrived at a double set of doors at the end of the corridor, on which she knocked on, before stepping away quietly. "Which, again, I do not recommend. His Majesty, the King." 

  As the doors eased open, it revealed a man sitting behind an enormous desk, on a swivelling chair who was currently busy scribbling away at something. At the mention of his title, the King gave a glance at the two standing at the doorway, before he re-capped his fountain pen, and sat up straighter. 

  "This is Lee Jaebin, the holder of the Rook position," Chess continued with the introductions, waving a careless hand towards the man. "Then, if you would excuse me." Once the formalities were out of the way, she stepped away, before closing the door behind her, leaving the two together in the room.

   Awkward silence. Jaebin could feel the weight of the King's eyes on him, before he cleared his throat slightly. "I heard...you making a humorous attempt on the monochrome nature of this building." 

  "It was rather dreary." The man gave another shrug that day. "It needed lightening up. I decided to do it my own way, through humour. I hope you don't mind?" 

  Another cough. "No, of course not. However, I suggest you keep those thoughts to yourself, Jaebin." A tilt of his head to show slight confusion. "It may...awaken unpleasant curses, you see."

  "You have curses here?" Jaebin's eyes widened, though they shrank back to their normal size as another clearing of throat alerted him to his position. "I mean, my apologies. Sir." 

  "You can call me Sungjong; it doesn't really matter." The King waved a dismissive hand at that. "Now, back on topic. I assume you know of your role?"

  "Not exactly."

  "Let me first tell you that it certainly isn't resident joker of Gemini," Sungjong said dryly, while retrieiving a sheet of paper from his desk. "As holder of the Rook position, you, of course, would answer to me, holder of the King position. As the Rook, you would assume the role of fighter in the group, and along with the Queen - " Here there was a slight cough again. " - you would be the main fighters of Gemini. Any questions?" 

  Jaebin shook his head slightly. "Good. Now Agent Chess would arrive shortly to bring you to the next meeting point. Please wait patiently." As if on cue, the faery then materialized outside the door, preparing to lead him on. Just as he was about to step out of the room, Jaebin stopped slightly, before turning back to the King.

  "You know, I have a book on interior design. Maybe if you red that - " Slight emphasis was placed on the word. " - perhaps the place would become more bluetiful." 

  After the doors swung shut, there was an exsaperated sigh that erupted from the King, before he buried his head into his hands.

 And started regretting his life choices. 

 
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hzhfobsessed
#1
Chapter 81: GASDHAHAH NOT THE CHOIS ING UPPPPP

i was not actually expecting minhwan to cameo LOL it's so funny and hOLY the siblings meet ;))))))

i gotta wonder whose side mother is on :eyes: because i don't remember if i ever said that in the app LOL

but yeah 's heating UP
jxxkwx
#2
Chapter 80: not me not remembering Alex’s past- oof. I gotta read back his history >< it was a nice gateway to reveal more of CARDS and Gemini’s past, I think it flowed perfectly. I think it’s interesting how they use to be allies and now are enemies.

also, I don’t know if I missed this completely from previous chapters but Helena towards Daehyun? I didn’t know she had such feelings, oof. I kinda like the drama LMAO

ALSO ALSO CARDS LET MY BBY REST ;-; he needs rest- look at his eyes! D;
imjaebeoms
#3
Chapter 79: i understand where you're coming from and I hope that you'll do what you want and go for it! in the end, this is your story - you get to decide what you should do with it :D

ps: pls add me to the list of future buyers of this book once it's published o.o the whole plot is too cool to NOT be an actual book

i too hope that in the future I'll be more active with feedbacks since I get how discouraging it is when you're writing but you get nothing back in return ;-; hope everything works out for you <3 sending headpats and hugs
jxxkwx
#4
Chapter 79: hello, author-nim!

it’s been awhile >< also, I do understand your feelings towards the ocs and your plot. it is up to you, as you’re the author. I’m sorry that you felt that way, and I hope that you’re able to write the future chapters with more positive feelings.

I would also like a copy of the book as well, so I can buy it and support you!

I hope all is well for you, and I will try to be more active. ♡
hzhfobsessed
#5
Chapter 79: that sounds good

i think the problem with applyfics (and why most ppl never finish writing them) is because it's annoying to make sure every character gets equal screentime while still keeping track of the plot

and then you get the ppl who don't keep up, which adds a whole nother layer of bothersome lol

but yeah mini revelation over, you do you!!!! it'll be fine either way (and i demand a copy once you publish ;))
wonpilist
#6
Chapter 79: yeet ig
i've just been: deceased
hzhfobsessed
#7
Chapter 78: ahhhhhhhhh that's a hard choice :(( i'd say go to school 2 since it sounds like a big hotshot (also because if you decide that you don't like your major, you can change and it seems like all the programs will be good!) but school 1 sounds really nice if you're DEAD set on your major. i'd say don't let the living situation influence you too much but actually ik those things can make or break a decision so i will simply not comment on it anymore.

also, 2hyun 4 lyfe ;)
hzhfobsessed
#8
Chapter 77: heeeheheheheheheheeeeee wucasi uwuu

no i'm not okay thank you for asking
hzhfobsessed
#9
Chapter 76: DUN DUN IN DUNNNNNNN

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW??? INTERNAL STRIFE????? BREAKING THE CYCLE OF HISTORY??????? STAY TUNED TO FIND THE OUT!!!!!!!!!!

if you are open to constructive criticism i'd say split up some of the bigger paragraphs; with this small of a font (yes i know i can turn off some sort of view but i'm old and dumb)it makes me eyes hurt to read so much compact text in one big long paragraph ;;;
jxxkwx
#10
Chapter 75: aww daehyun and hyunnie ♡ they’re so cute

I think spreading every now and then is good but you should also limit it >< I hope you rest even more )): I get what you mean by Asian parents comparing you to others ugh I’ve learned to ignore it tbh sigh I hope you feel better! ♡