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Enigma ﴾¿﴿ Story Arc: Revelation ﴾?﴿
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Introduction of characters starting! Here's my boy Hyunwook :D

“To begin with,” said the Cat, “a dog’s not mad. You grant that?”
“I suppose so,” said Alice.
“Well, then,” the Cat went on, “you see a dog growls when it’s angry, and wags it’s tail when it’s pleased. Now I growl when I’m pleased, and wag my tail when I’m angry. Therefore I’m mad.”
I call it purring, not growling,” said Alice.
“Call it what you like,” said the Cat.

- Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland

the story

author's corner

TSINGHUA UNIVERSITY, CAMPUS 

—  beijing, china; 21.7, 17:30

  "And I say to you; goodbye!" A whirlwind of papers and annoyance that was characteristic of the young man coming through the door announced his arrival, and as Shin Hyunwook banged open the door to his shared room with his roommate, Zhu Zhengting didn't even bat an eye on his perch on his bed. 

  "Who offended you this time?" The brown-haired companion asked, typing away at his laptop while balancing a cup of coffee dangerously on his other hand.

  "Oh, just another professor," Hyunwook tossed his jacket onto his navy bedspread, before ruffling his hair and collapsing onto said bed. "The bastard didn't even teach me; I don't know why he suddenly decides to pick an argument with me. And here I am trying to finish my thesis on time. For god's sake, it's the end of term!" 

  "And that's why people love you so much, Hyunwook," Zhengting replied absent-mindedly, squinting at his screen through his glasses. "Because of your wonderful personality." 

   Hearing that, the offended boy somehow became more offended, and whirled upon his friend, about to spew forth another torrent of words to show his anger, when the third inhabitant of the room jumped into his hands.

  "What's wrong, Persephone?" Instantly, the tension bled out of the boy's shoulders, and he wrapped his arms around the feline, assuming a coaxing tone as he ran his slender fingers through her silvery fur. The cat merely purred, and waved her paws around, which immediately caught his attention.

  "What's that on your paw, hmm?" Hyunwook inspected her paw carefully, and noticed a scroll strapped to it, with hints of red...stuff peeking out.  He detached the scroll slowly, and balancing his pet on his arm, Hyunwook unrolled the parchment to reveal a red rose, which fell to his feet without notice. Then he read the scrawl scribbled onto the coarse paper, before a curse tumbled out of his lips. 

  "Something the matter?" As Zhengting turned around to look at his roommate, the boy was already in another whirlwind, tossing things into a duffel bag, then grabbing his coat and running out the door, promptly shutting it shut behind him. 

  The Chinese boy sighed, and snapped his laptop shut. While he was mostly accustomed to his roommate's constant coming and going habits, Zhengting was still surprised at Hyunwook's ability to vanish into mid-air suddenly and appear in his bed a few days later, and he was especially curious as to why he had to vanish so suddenly. Eyeing the piece of paper still left on the floor and Persephone purring at it, Zhengting stooped and scooped everything up, cat, rose and all, giving the flower a delicate whiff before inspecting the parchment carefully.

  Your presence is immediately demanded at Diamantes.

 
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hzhfobsessed
#1
Chapter 81: GASDHAHAH NOT THE CHOIS ING UPPPPP

i was not actually expecting minhwan to cameo LOL it's so funny and hOLY the siblings meet ;))))))

i gotta wonder whose side mother is on :eyes: because i don't remember if i ever said that in the app LOL

but yeah 's heating UP
jxxkwx
#2
Chapter 80: not me not remembering Alex’s past- oof. I gotta read back his history >< it was a nice gateway to reveal more of CARDS and Gemini’s past, I think it flowed perfectly. I think it’s interesting how they use to be allies and now are enemies.

also, I don’t know if I missed this completely from previous chapters but Helena towards Daehyun? I didn’t know she had such feelings, oof. I kinda like the drama LMAO

ALSO ALSO CARDS LET MY BBY REST ;-; he needs rest- look at his eyes! D;
imjaebeoms
#3
Chapter 79: i understand where you're coming from and I hope that you'll do what you want and go for it! in the end, this is your story - you get to decide what you should do with it :D

ps: pls add me to the list of future buyers of this book once it's published o.o the whole plot is too cool to NOT be an actual book

i too hope that in the future I'll be more active with feedbacks since I get how discouraging it is when you're writing but you get nothing back in return ;-; hope everything works out for you <3 sending headpats and hugs
jxxkwx
#4
Chapter 79: hello, author-nim!

it’s been awhile >< also, I do understand your feelings towards the ocs and your plot. it is up to you, as you’re the author. I’m sorry that you felt that way, and I hope that you’re able to write the future chapters with more positive feelings.

I would also like a copy of the book as well, so I can buy it and support you!

I hope all is well for you, and I will try to be more active. ♡
hzhfobsessed
#5
Chapter 79: that sounds good

i think the problem with applyfics (and why most ppl never finish writing them) is because it's annoying to make sure every character gets equal screentime while still keeping track of the plot

and then you get the ppl who don't keep up, which adds a whole nother layer of bothersome lol

but yeah mini revelation over, you do you!!!! it'll be fine either way (and i demand a copy once you publish ;))
wonpilist
#6
Chapter 79: yeet ig
i've just been: deceased
hzhfobsessed
#7
Chapter 78: ahhhhhhhhh that's a hard choice :(( i'd say go to school 2 since it sounds like a big hotshot (also because if you decide that you don't like your major, you can change and it seems like all the programs will be good!) but school 1 sounds really nice if you're DEAD set on your major. i'd say don't let the living situation influence you too much but actually ik those things can make or break a decision so i will simply not comment on it anymore.

also, 2hyun 4 lyfe ;)
hzhfobsessed
#8
Chapter 77: heeeheheheheheheheeeeee wucasi uwuu

no i'm not okay thank you for asking
hzhfobsessed
#9
Chapter 76: DUN DUN IN DUNNNNNNN

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW??? INTERNAL STRIFE????? BREAKING THE CYCLE OF HISTORY??????? STAY TUNED TO FIND THE OUT!!!!!!!!!!

if you are open to constructive criticism i'd say split up some of the bigger paragraphs; with this small of a font (yes i know i can turn off some sort of view but i'm old and dumb)it makes me eyes hurt to read so much compact text in one big long paragraph ;;;
jxxkwx
#10
Chapter 75: aww daehyun and hyunnie ♡ they’re so cute

I think spreading every now and then is good but you should also limit it >< I hope you rest even more )): I get what you mean by Asian parents comparing you to others ugh I’ve learned to ignore it tbh sigh I hope you feel better! ♡