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Enigma ﴾¿﴿ Story Arc: Revelation ﴾?﴿
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“Half the variations which are calculated in a tournament game turn out to be completely superfluous. Unfortunately, no one knows in advance which half.”

– Jan Timman

Hi y'all! Sorry I was away for a while; I had something on hand. Anyways, here is the bishop! 

 

the story

author's corner

streets of paris

—  2010; 14:30

  Coils of smoke unfurled from a teacup of coffee, which was sitting beside the edge of a plate of French pastries. Slim fingers curled around the handle, about to bring it to the red lips hiding behind an enormous newspaper, before they pause as a certain woman came into view.

  "Madame." A slight folding down of her newspaper allowed the woman to catch a glimpse of the faery standing in front of her, which immediately made her turn it back up. 

  "Madame," The voice came more insistent, eliciting an exasperated sigh from the woman, who, instead of answering, merely went on to the next page of her newspaper. "S'il-vous-plaît - "

  "You can speak English, Chess, I understand it perfectly." Manicured hands folded the paper, before placing it meticulously onto the glass table. The same hands then removed a pair of black shades, revealing startling blue-green eyes that bore into Chess', who returned the stare calmly. "So what are you doing here? I thought this mission wasn't due until - " 

  "The King wants you back, Celeste." 

  At that, Celeste gave another exasperated sigh. "He always seems to want something, Chess. He wants me to go on this mission, and now he wants to call me back. Well, tell him I'm busy, and I don't have time for his whims - " 

  "Gemini is being reformed, Celeste." At that, the woman gave a start, and her expression carefully arranged itself into something more sombre. Chess made her way to the table, and took a seat opposite of her. "The King wants you back for a formal introduction." 

  Celeste raised her eyebrows slightly, then leaned forward, studying the other's eyes properly. They held the stare for a long time, before Chess averted her gaze slightly. Then Celeste sighed, before straightening up and putting her glasses back on. "How many?" 

  "Seven, including you." 

  "And the King?"

  There was a slight pause. "He expresses his condolences and has of yet refused to make any attempts at mending his relationships with...ah, his former allies." 

  Celeste coughed delicately at that, then turned her attention back to the coffee cup. Emptying it in one go, she then took her newspaper, stuffed it into her purse, and stood. "I understand why he wants me back now. That person has no regard whatsoever for diplomatic relations, and he needs me to slap some sense into him." At that, Chess let out a small snort. "Come on, lead the way." 

  "Of course." The faery stood as well. A slight motion of her fingers summoned a dark circle, within it a dark swirling mess resembling a storm, before the details reformed itself into an image of a familiar setting - 

  "The King's study." Celeste cocked her head at that. "Wouldn't my own quarters be better?" 

  "He requests you immediately, apparently. " Slight regret seeped through to her tone, though her face betrayed nothing. "You would likely to have time to wash up later to prepare for the banquet tonight." A look at Chess showed that business was in order again. "After you, please. Almeta." 

  "Yes, of course." The woman straightened herself.

  "Agent Chess." 

  

 
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hzhfobsessed
#1
Chapter 81: GASDHAHAH NOT THE CHOIS ING UPPPPP

i was not actually expecting minhwan to cameo LOL it's so funny and hOLY the siblings meet ;))))))

i gotta wonder whose side mother is on :eyes: because i don't remember if i ever said that in the app LOL

but yeah 's heating UP
jxxkwx
#2
Chapter 80: not me not remembering Alex’s past- oof. I gotta read back his history >< it was a nice gateway to reveal more of CARDS and Gemini’s past, I think it flowed perfectly. I think it’s interesting how they use to be allies and now are enemies.

also, I don’t know if I missed this completely from previous chapters but Helena towards Daehyun? I didn’t know she had such feelings, oof. I kinda like the drama LMAO

ALSO ALSO CARDS LET MY BBY REST ;-; he needs rest- look at his eyes! D;
imjaebeoms
#3
Chapter 79: i understand where you're coming from and I hope that you'll do what you want and go for it! in the end, this is your story - you get to decide what you should do with it :D

ps: pls add me to the list of future buyers of this book once it's published o.o the whole plot is too cool to NOT be an actual book

i too hope that in the future I'll be more active with feedbacks since I get how discouraging it is when you're writing but you get nothing back in return ;-; hope everything works out for you <3 sending headpats and hugs
jxxkwx
#4
Chapter 79: hello, author-nim!

it’s been awhile >< also, I do understand your feelings towards the ocs and your plot. it is up to you, as you’re the author. I’m sorry that you felt that way, and I hope that you’re able to write the future chapters with more positive feelings.

I would also like a copy of the book as well, so I can buy it and support you!

I hope all is well for you, and I will try to be more active. ♡
hzhfobsessed
#5
Chapter 79: that sounds good

i think the problem with applyfics (and why most ppl never finish writing them) is because it's annoying to make sure every character gets equal screentime while still keeping track of the plot

and then you get the ppl who don't keep up, which adds a whole nother layer of bothersome lol

but yeah mini revelation over, you do you!!!! it'll be fine either way (and i demand a copy once you publish ;))
wonpilist
#6
Chapter 79: yeet ig
i've just been: deceased
hzhfobsessed
#7
Chapter 78: ahhhhhhhhh that's a hard choice :(( i'd say go to school 2 since it sounds like a big hotshot (also because if you decide that you don't like your major, you can change and it seems like all the programs will be good!) but school 1 sounds really nice if you're DEAD set on your major. i'd say don't let the living situation influence you too much but actually ik those things can make or break a decision so i will simply not comment on it anymore.

also, 2hyun 4 lyfe ;)
hzhfobsessed
#8
Chapter 77: heeeheheheheheheheeeeee wucasi uwuu

no i'm not okay thank you for asking
hzhfobsessed
#9
Chapter 76: DUN DUN IN DUNNNNNNN

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW??? INTERNAL STRIFE????? BREAKING THE CYCLE OF HISTORY??????? STAY TUNED TO FIND THE OUT!!!!!!!!!!

if you are open to constructive criticism i'd say split up some of the bigger paragraphs; with this small of a font (yes i know i can turn off some sort of view but i'm old and dumb)it makes me eyes hurt to read so much compact text in one big long paragraph ;;;
jxxkwx
#10
Chapter 75: aww daehyun and hyunnie ♡ they’re so cute

I think spreading every now and then is good but you should also limit it >< I hope you rest even more )): I get what you mean by Asian parents comparing you to others ugh I’ve learned to ignore it tbh sigh I hope you feel better! ♡