0.13 : : MARCH HARE

Enigma ﴾¿﴿ Story Arc: Revelation ﴾?﴿
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“Have some wine,” the March Hare said in an encouraging tone.
Alice looked all round the table, but there was nothing on it but tea. “I don’t see any wine,” she remarked.
“There isn’t any,” said the March Hare.
“Then it wasn’t very civil of you to offer it,” said Alice angrily.
“It wasn’t very civil of you to sit down without being invited,” said the March Hare.”

– Alice's Adventures in Wonderland

Another late night work goodnight y'all

 

the story

author's corner

corazones headquarters

—  toronto, canada; 22.7.2017, 14:00

  Up. Down. Up. Down. 

  The boy's eyes followed the action of the old gray baseball flying up to the ceiling and landing on his open palm again, trying to think of nothing and to clear his thoughts, nearly succeeding too, when his bedroom door promptly burst open, a familiar figure tumbling in.

  "Adrian!" Immediately all concentration was gone, and he could feel the jitterness back on the tip of his fingers again. Scrambling up from his den of blankets, the boy faced his companion leaning against the doorway, who was catching his breath. "The Branch Head...he says he needs to see you."

  "St. Patricky the Annoyed?" There was an exasperated sigh from Jaehyun, who was still winded from his run. "Why?"

  A shrug. "Don't know. He just said it's urgent and sent me." Anxiety flickered across his eyes, which did not go unseen by Adrian's sharp eyes. "Hey man, you probably should come. He didn't seem to be in a good mood when he called me in."

  "Be right there." Grabbing his signature bomber jacket from his pile of tossed away clothes in the middle of his room, Adrian shrugged it on as he ran past Jaehyun, who followed closely on his heels and they made their way towards the Branch Head's office, anxious about the message they were about to hear.

  

  "Sir - " 

  "You know, there is a door for a reason, Mr Kim." 

  They were currently in the Branch Head's office, having just burst into the room in a frenzy, startling their Branch Head, a stern-faced man named Patrick, so badly that he spilled half of his cup of coffee on his lap. Despite his assistant's magic helping the clearing up, the dark expression on his face did not disappear, and appeared even more evident as he started lecturing the two standing in front of his desk with guilty expressions.

  Giving an irritated sigh, the man leaned back on his chair when there was no response. Adrian had a sense of them standing like troublemakers back in school, and felt his fist clench unconsciously. "Mr Choi, would you leave us please? I need to talk to Mr Kim. Privately."

  Adrian could feel, rather than see, Jaehyun sending an anxious glance towards him, before he his heel and obediently closed the door behind him as he left. Steeling himself for a verbal onslaught, Adrian looked up to meet Patrick's eyes, who was, instead of having fire like he usually did, staring curiously at him.

  "Do you know why I ask you here today, Mr Kim?" Dumbfounded, Adrian merely responded to that with a blank stare, earning him another sigh. "To be honest, I did not expect this." A few moments of rummaging in his desk brought some documents onto the glass surface. "Straight As in your combat tests. Your instructor even recommended a promotion to general, based purely on your fighting skills." A look of approval. "Our new star, eh?"

  Adrian swallowed, suddenly unsure of himself. "I - yes, sir."

  "Hmm." Another round of scrutinizing. "Well, at any rate, I'm sure those achievements aren't groundless. Otherwise the Head of CARDS himself wouldn't have asked for you, would he?"

  The Branch Head said that so nonchalantly Adrian wasn't sure if he had heard correctly or not. "He what...sir?"

 "The Head of CARDS, Carroll himself, had requested for an audience for you. Personally. Preferably as soon as possible." Patrick gave the sheef of papers on his desk another glance. "Off you go then, you wouldn't want to keep anyone, especially the boss, waiting." 

  "Yes. Of course, sir."

  "Oh, and Mr Kim?" As Adrian prepared to leave, hand hovering on top of the doorknob, he turned back to see the slightest trace of a smile appearing on the Branch Head's face.

  "Congratulations."

 
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hzhfobsessed
#1
Chapter 81: GASDHAHAH NOT THE CHOIS ING UPPPPP

i was not actually expecting minhwan to cameo LOL it's so funny and hOLY the siblings meet ;))))))

i gotta wonder whose side mother is on :eyes: because i don't remember if i ever said that in the app LOL

but yeah 's heating UP
jxxkwx
#2
Chapter 80: not me not remembering Alex’s past- oof. I gotta read back his history >< it was a nice gateway to reveal more of CARDS and Gemini’s past, I think it flowed perfectly. I think it’s interesting how they use to be allies and now are enemies.

also, I don’t know if I missed this completely from previous chapters but Helena towards Daehyun? I didn’t know she had such feelings, oof. I kinda like the drama LMAO

ALSO ALSO CARDS LET MY BBY REST ;-; he needs rest- look at his eyes! D;
imjaebeoms
#3
Chapter 79: i understand where you're coming from and I hope that you'll do what you want and go for it! in the end, this is your story - you get to decide what you should do with it :D

ps: pls add me to the list of future buyers of this book once it's published o.o the whole plot is too cool to NOT be an actual book

i too hope that in the future I'll be more active with feedbacks since I get how discouraging it is when you're writing but you get nothing back in return ;-; hope everything works out for you <3 sending headpats and hugs
jxxkwx
#4
Chapter 79: hello, author-nim!

it’s been awhile >< also, I do understand your feelings towards the ocs and your plot. it is up to you, as you’re the author. I’m sorry that you felt that way, and I hope that you’re able to write the future chapters with more positive feelings.

I would also like a copy of the book as well, so I can buy it and support you!

I hope all is well for you, and I will try to be more active. ♡
hzhfobsessed
#5
Chapter 79: that sounds good

i think the problem with applyfics (and why most ppl never finish writing them) is because it's annoying to make sure every character gets equal screentime while still keeping track of the plot

and then you get the ppl who don't keep up, which adds a whole nother layer of bothersome lol

but yeah mini revelation over, you do you!!!! it'll be fine either way (and i demand a copy once you publish ;))
wonpilist
#6
Chapter 79: yeet ig
i've just been: deceased
hzhfobsessed
#7
Chapter 78: ahhhhhhhhh that's a hard choice :(( i'd say go to school 2 since it sounds like a big hotshot (also because if you decide that you don't like your major, you can change and it seems like all the programs will be good!) but school 1 sounds really nice if you're DEAD set on your major. i'd say don't let the living situation influence you too much but actually ik those things can make or break a decision so i will simply not comment on it anymore.

also, 2hyun 4 lyfe ;)
hzhfobsessed
#8
Chapter 77: heeeheheheheheheheeeeee wucasi uwuu

no i'm not okay thank you for asking
hzhfobsessed
#9
Chapter 76: DUN DUN IN DUNNNNNNN

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW??? INTERNAL STRIFE????? BREAKING THE CYCLE OF HISTORY??????? STAY TUNED TO FIND THE OUT!!!!!!!!!!

if you are open to constructive criticism i'd say split up some of the bigger paragraphs; with this small of a font (yes i know i can turn off some sort of view but i'm old and dumb)it makes me eyes hurt to read so much compact text in one big long paragraph ;;;
jxxkwx
#10
Chapter 75: aww daehyun and hyunnie ♡ they’re so cute

I think spreading every now and then is good but you should also limit it >< I hope you rest even more )): I get what you mean by Asian parents comparing you to others ugh I’ve learned to ignore it tbh sigh I hope you feel better! ♡