[review] by chirping penguin

Bad Girl
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A/N : copy pasted from my blog

 

REVIEW | BAD GIRL

                                                                                                                                                                              BY CHIRPING PENGUIN   

 

Title (# 2/5) Personally, i think the title is quite common and should be use in a fanfic.




Originality (# 15/20) This is my first time to read this kind of fanfic maybe? But i think maybe you should add something more that your have never seen it in any fanfic.

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SuhoLoverDebo
#1
Chapter 58: I loved it.. I am glad they all end up with their respected partners.. And all are happy.. So Sehun and Hyeji? Hmmm....interesting.. More interesting if we add Kai too.. ;)
Thanks for this beautiful story...
tonnettie
#2
Chapter 52: I got confused what era did this happen. Lol. But nice story.
Missmaya #3
great <3
Lolypop123 #4
Chapter 58: Love it ^3^♥
murnilan_98 #5
Chapter 52: Daebak....perfect...i bet you story is the best after all..perfect ending...
Insight_stv
#6
Chapter 52: I enjoyed reading your story author-nim! :) thank you for sharing it with us :)
Insight_stv
#7
Gonna start reading :)
-2Mirae-
14 streak #8
Chapter 58: The story was amazing! I got so hooked that I finished reading in one setting, however, I got confused every time you change POV. It would take me a while to figure out who was the first person talking. Anyway... I felt that the story was a little bit rushed, since you didn't write what happened to hyunsik and how hyeji knows sehun and kai. Overall, I had an amazing time reading this!
ChoRaeHee
#9
Chapter 52: Your story is beautiful. But i think if you want to changing pov, you can use a mark so us will not confused when reading it.