Chapter 2

Hold Me Tight [An Heirs Spinoff] EDITING
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When I got back from school I spent a lot of time milling around in the hotel lobby hoping that I would run into a certain someone. 

It didn't happen. 

After two hours I got tired of sitting there pretending that I was reading when really my eyes were trained on the door. And truthfully I was starting to feel like a stalker. My parents were both gone, busy,  today having been their first days back at work in korea. It was even more stressfull for dad because he was planning his campaign, soon the president would announce her recommendation of my dad for prime minister. Both had called and told me to order room service for dinner because they would be back late.

I sighed. It was time to pack it in.

Stake outs weren't as fun and exciting as they made them seem on cop shows. I took my book and went to the elevator. I was waiting behind an older couple for the elevator to reach the ground floor when someone's annoying gigling behind me made me curious. I glanced behind me quickly and I was met with the sight of Choi Yong Do with a girl, who looked older then him by the way,grasping on to his arm. I was speechless. Who the heck was this girl? An older sister?

No.

Nara had said he was an only child. His mom? No that couldn't be it either. Even though she looked older than him she didn't look old enough to be his mom. And the way she was plastered to him was definitely no motherly.

"Still stalking me?" He asked.

It was then that I realized that I was still starring at them. I was so embarrassed, but I refused to show it. "Uhhh hardly. I'm just going up to my room." He smirked. "School's been out for hours now. You still have your uniform on and your just now going to your room?" The girl he was with eyed me up and down.

"I just got here." I lied. "I was with someone after school." There take that! I turned around fully intending to ignore them. Once the elevator doors opened we all got on. I was at the back of the elevator near the older couple while Choi Young Do and the , I know not nice especially since I don't know her but I can't help it,  was at the front. She wrapped her arms around his waist. "Where gonna go in the hot tub right." she said in an annoying whiny voice. Choi Yong Do didn't say anything. She leaned closer towards his ear. I guesse this was supposed to be a wisper but the whole elevator heard. "I don't have a swim suit but we can figure something out." I shuddered in disgust. Ok I was right. She's definitely a . I gritted my teeth in an effort to prevent myself from saying something I shouldn't.

Dad always warned me about that. He said I was too outspoken, that I needed to learn sometimes it was better to remain silent and observe. The older woman shook her head in dissaproval at Choi Young Do and his companion, so I wasn't the only one appaled. The older couples floor came leaving me alone with them. I was silently fuming. I couldn't wait for my floor to arrive. I tapped my feet on the floor rapidly and it was making a satisfiyingly annoying sound.

Eventually bag turned and said. "Can you stop that?" She asked. I smiled at her. Then continued tapping my feet. She glowered at me and turned back forward. "You should really be more selective of who you let stay in your hotel." She said to Young Do. I tapped my foot louder. It was either that or punch her. "Can't you do something about her. You do own this place?" Young Do sighed and turned around to face me. I gave him an angelic smile as I continued with the tapping. He just smirked at me. I expected him to say something but he just watched me ey

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[October 25] YES! I met my goal! LOL. I will start writting now for the next chapter and maybe before tomorrow is over have it uploaded.

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DreamyGongju
#1
Chapter 37: hay author-nim. i just found this story today and completed it in one go. i love it. the way you portrayed the characters and their feelings are just amazing. i just can't get enough of it. now i will follow sequel of this. thanks for the lovely story <3
TriciaPooh01 #2
Chapter 36: I just finished. Ugh I really wish you could make the sequel!
Koguma
#3
Chapter 36: Omg I love your story! I found it a couple of weeks or month ago but never got further than the first chapter because I never had the time, but since I got sick I had time to spend the day reading your story and I have to say it's one of the few stories that I actually really, really like and didn't drop after a few chapters (I'm sort of picky ahaha...)
So in short: I really like how you built the story, the characters are nicely, even if not perfectly portrayed, and I really started liking most of them (well, except for some not very likeable ones, haha). I really enjoyed reading your story and at the sad parts I even teared up a little (or maybe a little more, but I cry fast and listened to sad songs sooo ^^")
But - in case you'd like an a bit longer and more detailed review of your story (which I personally always enjoy reading, because it helps you more than a simple "omg I love your story please update soon!!" - even though I also love seeing those comments, haha) please follow this link to tumblr, since it was too long for a comment xD http://kogumai.tumblr.com/post/117022456822/review-recommendation-the-heirs-2-the
sue_myungsoo
#4
Chapter 36: Wow! Thank you for the thoughts. I am so excited. I'll be sure to read it!
swathikurup #5
Chapter 36: oh.. authornim.. you made my day. i really love this story. a squel would e great. i always wanted a happy ending for choi young do. and this couple is the right thing that can happen.
sue_myungsoo
#6
Chapter 35: Oh my gosh! You actually got me crying authornim. I felt the same way about how young do's character end up in heirs. Your writing is very good. And i really wish to see sequel to this. I just can't get enough of this couple and how you write them to be. Keep up the good work! You're officially my favourite author now!
kyudirection #7
Chapter 35: i just finished reding it, and it was soooo good! keep up the good work^^
goldenmak1 #8
Chapter 35: i looooooooooved it . i feel i'm u're soul-twin , thinking about the same things i thought about , i mean i felt sorry for woo bin not being loved .
storys #9
Chapter 31: Wow I feel like it ended so fast . From the very beginning it was a great story . Congratulations !
Larosa #10
Chapter 29: Oh ding. You just make me day. I started to read this story when you finished chapter 29, and I thought that you won't complete it. It's such a great story. And you just completed it today, when I saw the update and completed sign, my eyes were like sprinkling. Thank so much, author-nim.