Chapter 24

Hold Me Tight [An Heirs Spinoff] EDITING
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Soo Ha Yeon

 

I was sitting beside the door waiting for whoever that guy was to enter again. I didn't have time to wait around. I had to chance an escape. Otherwise I didn't know how long I would be here or how long before he hurt me.

 

I could hear the rustle of the door being unlocked and I stood up back against the wall. I was on the other side of the door so that when he entered he wouldn't see me. He walled in and stopped looking around wildly when he didn't see me on the bed. I lunged forward and pushed him out of my way and entered into the hallway. I ran left without thought. I didn't have time to debate on which was the best way to go. I could hear his footsteps pounding behind me. My heartbeat speed up with fear and adrenaline. I forced myself to pick up the pace as I came to a staircase. I ran down them jumping three stairs at a time. I was almost to the last couple of stairs when a force from behind me knocked me over. I threw my hands out in front of me in an instinctive attempt to break my fall.

 

I tumbled down the remaining stairs. My face smashed into the ground and my right wrist exploded in pain like it was on fire. Still I forced myself to get up. I could see the front door right there in front of me. I had to escape. I had too.

 

I stumbled for the door , but cried in dispair as my hair was yanked from behind and I came to a stop. I was swung around by my hair.

"You!" I said looking at him for the first time.

He smiled wickedly at me and smacked me in the face. "That's wasn't smart Ha Yeon."

 

I flinched at the blow. My face was already bruised from being hit with the shovel and then falling down the stairs. He grabbed my right wrist and I cried out in pain. "Ahhh let go." I called out. All that did was make him squezze my wrist tighter and I thought I might pass out.

 

"Shut up and come on."

 

He dragged me back up the stairs and I followed willingly just wanting him let go of me because the pain was unbearable.

 

Once back at the room he pushed me inside and slammed the door.

 

I laid down on the bed and cried from pain and helplessness.

 

 

 

Choi Young Do

 

Safely at my house where I knew no one was watching me and I wouldn't be overheard I called Sukchan.

 

"Oh Young Do! I haven't talked to you in a while."

 

"I need your help." I said imediatly.

 

"What is it?"

 

"I need you to track a private call that I received."

 

"I'll be right over with my stuff." He said hanging up.

 

I looked up to see congress boy looking around at the empty bottle of suju I still had on the table from last night. I couldn't sleep so I needed some help.

 

"Sit." I told him. Annoyed with watching him standing there studying everything around critically.

 

He sat down. "What did he say?"

 

"That he's on his way."

 

I closed my eyes and leaned my head back against the couch. I was exhausted, mentally. All I could think about was some bastard hurting Hayeon and it being all because of me. That was the worst thing, that if she hadn't of befriended me this would have never happened to her.

 

My phone in my pocket rang and I thought it was Sukchan here already. But when I looked down it was the private number again. I took a deep breath before answering.

"What?"

 

"How was your suffering?" He asked.

 

"What do you want me to do?" I countered with.

 

"That was a legitamet question. I want an answer. How was your suffering?"

 

I gritted my teeth and responded how he wanted me too. "Painful."

 

He laughed. "Thats not a staisfactory answer. It didn't sound sincere. Do you really care about her? Maybe I should..."

 

I interrupted him. "Its ing horrible. I'm going crazy. My mind is in a mental breakdown. My heart feels like its been shredded and all I can think about is getting her back. I've suffered. I am su

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[October 25] YES! I met my goal! LOL. I will start writting now for the next chapter and maybe before tomorrow is over have it uploaded.

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DreamyGongju
#1
Chapter 37: hay author-nim. i just found this story today and completed it in one go. i love it. the way you portrayed the characters and their feelings are just amazing. i just can't get enough of it. now i will follow sequel of this. thanks for the lovely story <3
TriciaPooh01 #2
Chapter 36: I just finished. Ugh I really wish you could make the sequel!
Koguma
#3
Chapter 36: Omg I love your story! I found it a couple of weeks or month ago but never got further than the first chapter because I never had the time, but since I got sick I had time to spend the day reading your story and I have to say it's one of the few stories that I actually really, really like and didn't drop after a few chapters (I'm sort of picky ahaha...)
So in short: I really like how you built the story, the characters are nicely, even if not perfectly portrayed, and I really started liking most of them (well, except for some not very likeable ones, haha). I really enjoyed reading your story and at the sad parts I even teared up a little (or maybe a little more, but I cry fast and listened to sad songs sooo ^^")
But - in case you'd like an a bit longer and more detailed review of your story (which I personally always enjoy reading, because it helps you more than a simple "omg I love your story please update soon!!" - even though I also love seeing those comments, haha) please follow this link to tumblr, since it was too long for a comment xD http://kogumai.tumblr.com/post/117022456822/review-recommendation-the-heirs-2-the
sue_myungsoo
#4
Chapter 36: Wow! Thank you for the thoughts. I am so excited. I'll be sure to read it!
swathikurup #5
Chapter 36: oh.. authornim.. you made my day. i really love this story. a squel would e great. i always wanted a happy ending for choi young do. and this couple is the right thing that can happen.
sue_myungsoo
#6
Chapter 35: Oh my gosh! You actually got me crying authornim. I felt the same way about how young do's character end up in heirs. Your writing is very good. And i really wish to see sequel to this. I just can't get enough of this couple and how you write them to be. Keep up the good work! You're officially my favourite author now!
kyudirection #7
Chapter 35: i just finished reding it, and it was soooo good! keep up the good work^^
goldenmak1 #8
Chapter 35: i looooooooooved it . i feel i'm u're soul-twin , thinking about the same things i thought about , i mean i felt sorry for woo bin not being loved .
storys #9
Chapter 31: Wow I feel like it ended so fast . From the very beginning it was a great story . Congratulations !
Larosa #10
Chapter 29: Oh ding. You just make me day. I started to read this story when you finished chapter 29, and I thought that you won't complete it. It's such a great story. And you just completed it today, when I saw the update and completed sign, my eyes were like sprinkling. Thank so much, author-nim.