Chapter 9

Hold Me Tight [An Heirs Spinoff] EDITING
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We rode along for atlest 20 minutes I was relaxed willing to go anywhere this boy wanted to take me. We pulld up outside a cute little flower shop. Young do cut the engine.

I scooted back so he could get off the bike.

"What are we doing here?" I asked as I pulled the helmet off my head.

Then he reached out and smoothed some of the hair off of my face tucking it behind my ear. I in a deep breath holding it in not daring to breath and interupt this moment. He left his hand there cupping my cheek. He was looking at me with that same look again, like he was trying to figure something out. Like I was some great mystery he was puzzled over. "Young Doah." a woman called out.

The spell was broken.

He took his hand away and turned towards the woman who had came out of the flower shop. "Come in. It looks like its going to rain. Bring your friend." she turned to go back in the shop. I looked up at the sky. She was right. It had gotten darker as big dark clouds began to cover up the sun in the sky. I got off the bike and headed for the shop with Young Do by my side. I looked around and it was pretty and simple inside. It smelled heavenly. As I approached the table the woman was sitting at she smiled at me warmly. I smiled back. "Hi. Im Soo Ha Yeon." I said while bowing politely.

"I am Choi Young Do's mom."

I was shocked. I looked from her to Young Do. Why had he brought me here to see his mom? I swalowed in my suddenly dry throught. "Its nice to meet you." I said nervously. Why the heck was I nervous?

"Sit down please."

I quickly sat in the seat across from her. Young Do slouched down into the seat beside me.

"When I told you to come back later I didn't know your were going to bring a friend." she said smiling curiously at her son. He shrugged. "I didn't know I was going to bring her either." I kicked his foot under the table. "Yeah especially since you said you were taking me home not here." I looked over at his mom and quickly said. "Not that I didn't want to come here. It was just...unexpected."

She laughed. "Its ok. I understand. My son usually just does whatever he wants." I laughed. "That's true." He snorted.

"Says the girl who continued to follow me around even when I didn't want you to." I kicked his foot harder under the table. He grimaced. "Shut up." I muttered.

"I wasn't following him. He's joking."

I didn't want his mom to think I was stalking him, even though I was. And I don't want her to think im obsessed with him, even though I think I am.

She just laughed. "You two are cute. Are you his girlfriend?"

I felt my whole face flame up. I couldn't answer her question.

"No mom. Were...." he trailed

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[October 25] YES! I met my goal! LOL. I will start writting now for the next chapter and maybe before tomorrow is over have it uploaded.

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DreamyGongju
#1
Chapter 37: hay author-nim. i just found this story today and completed it in one go. i love it. the way you portrayed the characters and their feelings are just amazing. i just can't get enough of it. now i will follow sequel of this. thanks for the lovely story <3
TriciaPooh01 #2
Chapter 36: I just finished. Ugh I really wish you could make the sequel!
Koguma
#3
Chapter 36: Omg I love your story! I found it a couple of weeks or month ago but never got further than the first chapter because I never had the time, but since I got sick I had time to spend the day reading your story and I have to say it's one of the few stories that I actually really, really like and didn't drop after a few chapters (I'm sort of picky ahaha...)
So in short: I really like how you built the story, the characters are nicely, even if not perfectly portrayed, and I really started liking most of them (well, except for some not very likeable ones, haha). I really enjoyed reading your story and at the sad parts I even teared up a little (or maybe a little more, but I cry fast and listened to sad songs sooo ^^")
But - in case you'd like an a bit longer and more detailed review of your story (which I personally always enjoy reading, because it helps you more than a simple "omg I love your story please update soon!!" - even though I also love seeing those comments, haha) please follow this link to tumblr, since it was too long for a comment xD http://kogumai.tumblr.com/post/117022456822/review-recommendation-the-heirs-2-the
sue_myungsoo
#4
Chapter 36: Wow! Thank you for the thoughts. I am so excited. I'll be sure to read it!
swathikurup #5
Chapter 36: oh.. authornim.. you made my day. i really love this story. a squel would e great. i always wanted a happy ending for choi young do. and this couple is the right thing that can happen.
sue_myungsoo
#6
Chapter 35: Oh my gosh! You actually got me crying authornim. I felt the same way about how young do's character end up in heirs. Your writing is very good. And i really wish to see sequel to this. I just can't get enough of this couple and how you write them to be. Keep up the good work! You're officially my favourite author now!
kyudirection #7
Chapter 35: i just finished reding it, and it was soooo good! keep up the good work^^
goldenmak1 #8
Chapter 35: i looooooooooved it . i feel i'm u're soul-twin , thinking about the same things i thought about , i mean i felt sorry for woo bin not being loved .
storys #9
Chapter 31: Wow I feel like it ended so fast . From the very beginning it was a great story . Congratulations !
Larosa #10
Chapter 29: Oh ding. You just make me day. I started to read this story when you finished chapter 29, and I thought that you won't complete it. It's such a great story. And you just completed it today, when I saw the update and completed sign, my eyes were like sprinkling. Thank so much, author-nim.