Chaper 6

Hold Me Tight [An Heirs Spinoff] EDITING
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I wasnt realy focused at all dyring school today. As the day went on I went back and forth deciding to stay away from Choi Young Do and to get closer to him. Eventually I decided that he was bad news and that I needed to stay away from him. Which was difficult because my bodies instincts was to follow him.

When the last bell rang I was dreading having to go to detention. My mind was still racing with all that I had heard from Cha Eun Sung and Yoo Rachel yesterday and how he seemed like a different person last night. I didn't know what to do about Choi Young Do. I said I was going to stay away from him, but I couldn't deny to myself that when it came to him my will was weak. I wasn't confident that I could keep my promise to myself to avoid him. I sighed.

I took a deep breath before entering the classroom where I would be serving the detention. I was the first one there. "Take a seat." The teacher told me. I hadn't seen him before and he didn't introduce himself. I choose a seat towrds the front. That should discourage Choi Young Do from sitting next to me, not that I thought he would. Soon after I sat down and got comfortable Lee Sungyeol came in. He smiled at me as he took a seat a couple away from me.

Finally Choi Young Do came striding in. Whithout hesitation he took the seat right beside me. I saw him glance at Sungyeol and smirk at him. I hated that look of his. Without thought I stuck my foot out and kicked his ankle. He trained his eyes on me. "What?" I mouthed without speaking. Without waiting for an answer I faced forward again. I felt my cell phone vibrate from in the pocket of my uniform jacket. I took it out looking I saw it was a text from my dad. 

Aboji: When will you be back from school?

I had lied to him and mom this morning saying that I was staying after to use the schools library to study not wanting to admit that I had detention. I texted him back saying in about an hour.

Aboji: Good we need to talk

 

I frowned down at the phone. What did he mean we needed to talk. Did he already know about the detention? No. If he did he would have mentioned it in the text not just asking when I would be back. Most likely he wanted me to do something I didnt want to do.  That's what  it usually meant when he said we need to talk. Last time he said that I had to go on multiple dates with some foreign dignitaries son. He was a pompous , the father and the son. I couldn't be happier than when I didn't have to see him anymore. I put the phone back in my pocket. Now this was going to be running through my mind the whole time. I hope what he has to asks isn't as bad as the dates.

The forty five minute detention flew by quickly and suprisingly with no incidents. As soon as it was said that we could go. I was in a rush to get back to the hotel. I wanted to know the news immediately. It was better then stalling and keep wondering what it was. I hitched my backpack higher on my back and stepped out the front

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[October 25] YES! I met my goal! LOL. I will start writting now for the next chapter and maybe before tomorrow is over have it uploaded.

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DreamyGongju
#1
Chapter 37: hay author-nim. i just found this story today and completed it in one go. i love it. the way you portrayed the characters and their feelings are just amazing. i just can't get enough of it. now i will follow sequel of this. thanks for the lovely story <3
TriciaPooh01 #2
Chapter 36: I just finished. Ugh I really wish you could make the sequel!
Koguma
#3
Chapter 36: Omg I love your story! I found it a couple of weeks or month ago but never got further than the first chapter because I never had the time, but since I got sick I had time to spend the day reading your story and I have to say it's one of the few stories that I actually really, really like and didn't drop after a few chapters (I'm sort of picky ahaha...)
So in short: I really like how you built the story, the characters are nicely, even if not perfectly portrayed, and I really started liking most of them (well, except for some not very likeable ones, haha). I really enjoyed reading your story and at the sad parts I even teared up a little (or maybe a little more, but I cry fast and listened to sad songs sooo ^^")
But - in case you'd like an a bit longer and more detailed review of your story (which I personally always enjoy reading, because it helps you more than a simple "omg I love your story please update soon!!" - even though I also love seeing those comments, haha) please follow this link to tumblr, since it was too long for a comment xD http://kogumai.tumblr.com/post/117022456822/review-recommendation-the-heirs-2-the
sue_myungsoo
#4
Chapter 36: Wow! Thank you for the thoughts. I am so excited. I'll be sure to read it!
swathikurup #5
Chapter 36: oh.. authornim.. you made my day. i really love this story. a squel would e great. i always wanted a happy ending for choi young do. and this couple is the right thing that can happen.
sue_myungsoo
#6
Chapter 35: Oh my gosh! You actually got me crying authornim. I felt the same way about how young do's character end up in heirs. Your writing is very good. And i really wish to see sequel to this. I just can't get enough of this couple and how you write them to be. Keep up the good work! You're officially my favourite author now!
kyudirection #7
Chapter 35: i just finished reding it, and it was soooo good! keep up the good work^^
goldenmak1 #8
Chapter 35: i looooooooooved it . i feel i'm u're soul-twin , thinking about the same things i thought about , i mean i felt sorry for woo bin not being loved .
storys #9
Chapter 31: Wow I feel like it ended so fast . From the very beginning it was a great story . Congratulations !
Larosa #10
Chapter 29: Oh ding. You just make me day. I started to read this story when you finished chapter 29, and I thought that you won't complete it. It's such a great story. And you just completed it today, when I saw the update and completed sign, my eyes were like sprinkling. Thank so much, author-nim.