Chapter 21

Hold Me Tight [An Heirs Spinoff] EDITING
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Choi Young Do

 

I walked up the steps to the school and opened the doors. As I walked down the empty hallways I was tempted to just forget being here today. I wasn't in the mood to have to sit through all my classes. I got to my homeroom and paused before opening the door. I don't know why I was so nervous. I reached out again intending to open the door and just go in. When the sound of running footsteps made me turn to see what was happening. Soo Ha Yeon's friend Nara was running down the hallway towards me. Out of breath she spoke in a rush. "Is Ha Yeon with you? Did she stay with you?" I was confused, I was sure Ha Yeon wasn't even speaking to me so why would this girl think she would be with me? I shook my head. She gasped and her eyes began to water. "Ha Yeonah." She whispered. I was beginning to get worried now. "What's going on?" I looked over her shoulder to see Congress boy running over to where we stood. "Is she with him?" Nara Shook her head. "No. I have to call her parents." She turned to leave and I grabbed her arm. "What's going on I said? Whats happening to Soo Ha Yeon?" That's when she broke down and started crying. Congress boy hugged her tight trying to sooth her. "Ha Yeon's parents called me this morning asking for Nara's number to see if Ha Yeon spent the night with her. She hasn't been seen since school yesterday."

I took a step back in shock and bumped into the door. Then I leaned against it needing the support. "She's missing?"

"I thought she was with you and didn't want anyone to know that's why she wasnt answering her parents calls." Nara wailed. My mind was in total chaos. I couldn't process what was hapenning. Ha Yeon was missing. My Ha Yeon. Did she run away? Did she do something stupid? Was this because of me? If anything happened to her... It would be all my fault. Nara's phone begin to ring and she anxiously looked down at it. "Its not her." She said. She then answered. "I'm sorry Mr Soo. No our other friend hasn't seen her either." She then listened some more to what Ha Yeon's father was saying before answering back. "I understand. OK. Bye."

"What did he say?" Me and Congress boy asked at the same time.

"They're going to the police. They think it must be a kidnapping." She nearly fell to the floor but Congress boy was still holding onto her. "Oh God. I hope she's OK."

My mind was spinning. Someone took Ha Yeon.

We stood there. None of us knowing what to do, the only sounds the occasional sobs from Nara.

 

Eventually we ended up in the library. I stared off into space. I didn't like the places my mind was going to. I kept thinking of Ha Yeon in the past tense. I missed her smile. Her annoying voice. She would be OK though. She had to be. Theres no way that a person like her would leave the world this way.

"Sungyeol where were you? Its not like you to skip class." Chansung said. Him and Kim Tan where standing beside the table we sat at. Then, "Are you OK?" As he saw the tear streaks on Nara's face. "No I'm not OK! Ha Yeon is missing!" She shouted loudly drawing the attention of every one in the library. "Nara." Congress boy admonished her. "What!? Everyone will know soon. Her parents are going to the police station right now. Her dad is the freakin Prime minister. Its going to be all over the news."

Kim Tan looked over at me. "Are you OK?"

Frustrated with everything and everybody I needed to be alone. I stood and started to walk away. "Yah where are you going? Do you even care?" Shouted Nara.

I didn't know how she thought us just sitting around together would accomplish anything. I just needed to be alone. We exchanged numbers, if they learned anything new one of them would call me.

Out in the hallway I felt a little better. But not by much. I still felt like I couldn't breath. "Choi Young Do." Kim Tan said. I closed my eyes. Why is he following me? I just needed to be alone. "Are you OK?" He put his hand on my shoulder and all of my rage just exploded. I screamed loudly and pushed him away from me. "Go." I told him.

"No."

"Go!" I shouted even louder. Instead of listening he stepped forward again, closer to me. "You need.." I cut him off by shoving him again. "Don't follow me. I need to be alone."

He laughed. "Do you think I'm stupid? If I leave you alone when youre like this all that's going to happen is you getting into trouble."

I began pacing back and forth. had to much energy inside that was desperate to burst out in any way. "I'm gonna go home. I'm just gonna ride my bike home." I said defeated. I wasn't in the mood to fight him right now. I felt exhausted. I was going from extreme anger, to sadness, to worry. I was spinning all over t

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[October 25] YES! I met my goal! LOL. I will start writting now for the next chapter and maybe before tomorrow is over have it uploaded.

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DreamyGongju
#1
Chapter 37: hay author-nim. i just found this story today and completed it in one go. i love it. the way you portrayed the characters and their feelings are just amazing. i just can't get enough of it. now i will follow sequel of this. thanks for the lovely story <3
TriciaPooh01 #2
Chapter 36: I just finished. Ugh I really wish you could make the sequel!
Koguma
#3
Chapter 36: Omg I love your story! I found it a couple of weeks or month ago but never got further than the first chapter because I never had the time, but since I got sick I had time to spend the day reading your story and I have to say it's one of the few stories that I actually really, really like and didn't drop after a few chapters (I'm sort of picky ahaha...)
So in short: I really like how you built the story, the characters are nicely, even if not perfectly portrayed, and I really started liking most of them (well, except for some not very likeable ones, haha). I really enjoyed reading your story and at the sad parts I even teared up a little (or maybe a little more, but I cry fast and listened to sad songs sooo ^^")
But - in case you'd like an a bit longer and more detailed review of your story (which I personally always enjoy reading, because it helps you more than a simple "omg I love your story please update soon!!" - even though I also love seeing those comments, haha) please follow this link to tumblr, since it was too long for a comment xD http://kogumai.tumblr.com/post/117022456822/review-recommendation-the-heirs-2-the
sue_myungsoo
#4
Chapter 36: Wow! Thank you for the thoughts. I am so excited. I'll be sure to read it!
swathikurup #5
Chapter 36: oh.. authornim.. you made my day. i really love this story. a squel would e great. i always wanted a happy ending for choi young do. and this couple is the right thing that can happen.
sue_myungsoo
#6
Chapter 35: Oh my gosh! You actually got me crying authornim. I felt the same way about how young do's character end up in heirs. Your writing is very good. And i really wish to see sequel to this. I just can't get enough of this couple and how you write them to be. Keep up the good work! You're officially my favourite author now!
kyudirection #7
Chapter 35: i just finished reding it, and it was soooo good! keep up the good work^^
goldenmak1 #8
Chapter 35: i looooooooooved it . i feel i'm u're soul-twin , thinking about the same things i thought about , i mean i felt sorry for woo bin not being loved .
storys #9
Chapter 31: Wow I feel like it ended so fast . From the very beginning it was a great story . Congratulations !
Larosa #10
Chapter 29: Oh ding. You just make me day. I started to read this story when you finished chapter 29, and I thought that you won't complete it. It's such a great story. And you just completed it today, when I saw the update and completed sign, my eyes were like sprinkling. Thank so much, author-nim.