Chapter 23

Hold Me Tight [An Heirs Spinoff] EDITING
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Choi Young Do

 

 

I was at my locker closing the door when congress boy appeared beside me. "I didnt think you were going to come to school today." He said.

It was either come to school where I might be able to get some distraction or stay home where I would only think about one thing and drive myself crazy. I shrugged on my backpack and faced him. "Any news?" I asked. He looked grim shaking his head no.

It had been five days now since Ha Yeon had gone missing. There was no ransom request, the police couldn't find any trace of her and where starting to fear the worst.

Rumors were spreading all over, some say she ran away, that she killed herself, she was pregnant with my kid so I sent her overseas, totally ridiculous rumors.

 

Nara walked down the hallway twords us. She looked like she hadn't slept again. Congress boy imediatly held on to her. "You need to sleep Nara." He told her.

"I know but every time I do I have horrible nightmares about Ha Yeon. People are always hurting her."

I walked away. I didn't want to hear about her dreams.

Every time I thought about someone hurting Ha Yeon, maybe right at this moment, I felt sick to my stomach and wanted to kill someone at the same time.

 

I went outside to the back of the school where the garden was and stood there. I don't think I've ever experienced this much anxiety in my life. The constant worrying and the fear of the unknown was what was getting to me.

 

My phone vibrated in my pocket and I sighed in exasperation. It was probably my mom. She had been calling me and coming over to check on me constantly these last five days. I know it was because she was concerned over my mental stability. I don't know how to react when I'm hurting and resort to self destructive behavior.

I took the phone out and looked at the display. The number was private

 

"Hello." I said.

There was no answer on the line and I was starting to think it was a prank call when someone said. "How does it feel to be helpless?"

 

"What?" I said confused still thinking that this was some type of joke.

 

"How is it feeling helpless? You dont know where your girlfriend is and you have no way of protecting her. So how does it feel Choi Young Do? How does it feel to be helpless?"

 

I tightened my grip on the phone and said angrily. "Hurt her and you're dead!"

 

The voice chuckled. "Your in no position to make threats. I have Soon Ha Yeon, so I have all the power over you now." He laughed again. "I really like this feeling."

 

His voice sounded familiar but I couldn't place it. I had to know him though, and he knew me. Knew that I was close to Ha Yeon so the best way to get to me was to take her. I tried to calm the raging anger I felt and not start yelling and and threatening this person only for them take it out on H

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[October 25] YES! I met my goal! LOL. I will start writting now for the next chapter and maybe before tomorrow is over have it uploaded.

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DreamyGongju
#1
Chapter 37: hay author-nim. i just found this story today and completed it in one go. i love it. the way you portrayed the characters and their feelings are just amazing. i just can't get enough of it. now i will follow sequel of this. thanks for the lovely story <3
TriciaPooh01 #2
Chapter 36: I just finished. Ugh I really wish you could make the sequel!
Koguma
#3
Chapter 36: Omg I love your story! I found it a couple of weeks or month ago but never got further than the first chapter because I never had the time, but since I got sick I had time to spend the day reading your story and I have to say it's one of the few stories that I actually really, really like and didn't drop after a few chapters (I'm sort of picky ahaha...)
So in short: I really like how you built the story, the characters are nicely, even if not perfectly portrayed, and I really started liking most of them (well, except for some not very likeable ones, haha). I really enjoyed reading your story and at the sad parts I even teared up a little (or maybe a little more, but I cry fast and listened to sad songs sooo ^^")
But - in case you'd like an a bit longer and more detailed review of your story (which I personally always enjoy reading, because it helps you more than a simple "omg I love your story please update soon!!" - even though I also love seeing those comments, haha) please follow this link to tumblr, since it was too long for a comment xD http://kogumai.tumblr.com/post/117022456822/review-recommendation-the-heirs-2-the
sue_myungsoo
#4
Chapter 36: Wow! Thank you for the thoughts. I am so excited. I'll be sure to read it!
swathikurup #5
Chapter 36: oh.. authornim.. you made my day. i really love this story. a squel would e great. i always wanted a happy ending for choi young do. and this couple is the right thing that can happen.
sue_myungsoo
#6
Chapter 35: Oh my gosh! You actually got me crying authornim. I felt the same way about how young do's character end up in heirs. Your writing is very good. And i really wish to see sequel to this. I just can't get enough of this couple and how you write them to be. Keep up the good work! You're officially my favourite author now!
kyudirection #7
Chapter 35: i just finished reding it, and it was soooo good! keep up the good work^^
goldenmak1 #8
Chapter 35: i looooooooooved it . i feel i'm u're soul-twin , thinking about the same things i thought about , i mean i felt sorry for woo bin not being loved .
storys #9
Chapter 31: Wow I feel like it ended so fast . From the very beginning it was a great story . Congratulations !
Larosa #10
Chapter 29: Oh ding. You just make me day. I started to read this story when you finished chapter 29, and I thought that you won't complete it. It's such a great story. And you just completed it today, when I saw the update and completed sign, my eyes were like sprinkling. Thank so much, author-nim.