Chapter 17

Hold Me Tight [An Heirs Spinoff] EDITING
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Lee Sung Yeol

 

I looked over at Ha Yeon as she sat at the table eating the jjangmyeon noodles we had ordered. I really hated seeing her in that bastards clothes. When I saw them come out of that elevator looking like a couple that had just spent a night together I was so mad. She is too good for the likes of him. I don't know why she's always following him around and being concerned about him. She's always watching him. I'm not even sure if she's aware that she does it. Every time at school she is always looking around trying to spot him, she so good at searching him out but she doesn't see me right beside her.

"Thanks so much Sungyeol. I don't know why Nara isn't answering."

I nodded. I was mad at Nara too. If she was going to take Ha Yeon to a club she should make sure that she goes home with her. How the he'll did she end up leaving with Choi Young Do?

 

 

Soo Ha Yeon

 

Me and Sungyeol were in his room watching movies and laughing when the door opened. "Yah! Didn't you hear me knocking?" Nara asked as she came in and plopped down on the bed beside me. I took a pillow and smacked her in the face with it. "Didn't you see me calling you a billion times?" I scolded. "Sorry sorry. I was sleep. Hangover you know." she sat up and looked at me than gasped. "Enough about me. What happened with Young Do last night?" I smacked her with the pillow again. "What!?" She yelled. "How could you just let me go with him?" she shrugged. "I thought you guys were having some kind of lovers argument." She said. I looked at her confused. Really a lovers argument. We would have to be lovers for that to happen. Which we aren't and apparently never will be. I was still thinking about what he said to me this morning as I sat in his bed.

 

 

"Don't you remember?" Nara asked. I shook my head. "Young Do was there with some girl and she was all over him and then you started drinking so much. Then you started making out with this guy. And I mean really making out." My mouth opened in shock. "You were on top of him and he was hiking your skirt up the whole club could see your . And really Ha Yeon hello kitty?" I looked over at Sungyeol who also looked shocked. Oh god I was mortified.

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[October 25] YES! I met my goal! LOL. I will start writting now for the next chapter and maybe before tomorrow is over have it uploaded.

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DreamyGongju
#1
Chapter 37: hay author-nim. i just found this story today and completed it in one go. i love it. the way you portrayed the characters and their feelings are just amazing. i just can't get enough of it. now i will follow sequel of this. thanks for the lovely story <3
TriciaPooh01 #2
Chapter 36: I just finished. Ugh I really wish you could make the sequel!
Koguma
#3
Chapter 36: Omg I love your story! I found it a couple of weeks or month ago but never got further than the first chapter because I never had the time, but since I got sick I had time to spend the day reading your story and I have to say it's one of the few stories that I actually really, really like and didn't drop after a few chapters (I'm sort of picky ahaha...)
So in short: I really like how you built the story, the characters are nicely, even if not perfectly portrayed, and I really started liking most of them (well, except for some not very likeable ones, haha). I really enjoyed reading your story and at the sad parts I even teared up a little (or maybe a little more, but I cry fast and listened to sad songs sooo ^^")
But - in case you'd like an a bit longer and more detailed review of your story (which I personally always enjoy reading, because it helps you more than a simple "omg I love your story please update soon!!" - even though I also love seeing those comments, haha) please follow this link to tumblr, since it was too long for a comment xD http://kogumai.tumblr.com/post/117022456822/review-recommendation-the-heirs-2-the
sue_myungsoo
#4
Chapter 36: Wow! Thank you for the thoughts. I am so excited. I'll be sure to read it!
swathikurup #5
Chapter 36: oh.. authornim.. you made my day. i really love this story. a squel would e great. i always wanted a happy ending for choi young do. and this couple is the right thing that can happen.
sue_myungsoo
#6
Chapter 35: Oh my gosh! You actually got me crying authornim. I felt the same way about how young do's character end up in heirs. Your writing is very good. And i really wish to see sequel to this. I just can't get enough of this couple and how you write them to be. Keep up the good work! You're officially my favourite author now!
kyudirection #7
Chapter 35: i just finished reding it, and it was soooo good! keep up the good work^^
goldenmak1 #8
Chapter 35: i looooooooooved it . i feel i'm u're soul-twin , thinking about the same things i thought about , i mean i felt sorry for woo bin not being loved .
storys #9
Chapter 31: Wow I feel like it ended so fast . From the very beginning it was a great story . Congratulations !
Larosa #10
Chapter 29: Oh ding. You just make me day. I started to read this story when you finished chapter 29, and I thought that you won't complete it. It's such a great story. And you just completed it today, when I saw the update and completed sign, my eyes were like sprinkling. Thank so much, author-nim.