Chapter 10

Hold Me Tight [An Heirs Spinoff] EDITING
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The next thing I knew hours had passed and Young Do's mom said that we should be getting home in case my family was worried.

My parents.

More then worried they would be mad, and disappointed.

Having so much fun here I forgot all about the lunch I was supposed to be having with mom, Mrs. Choi and her son Taekyung. Even though I hated to disappoint my parents I couldn't regret not showing up. That lunch would have been completely different than the laid back and enjoyable atmosphere here.

Before we were ready to leave Young Do went to the bathroom leaving me alone with his mother. She looked at me smiling with a loving look on her face. I could do nothing but smile back. "Young Do is closed off. He doesn't show what he is feeling easily. That's because his father has always been to tough on him." she stopped for a moment seeming to choose her words carefully. "But I've never seen him the way he was today. The way he looks at you. I don't even think he realizes how often he turned to watch and how long he stared."

I swallowed hard. Did he really? I didn't notice. But maybe I was too distracted with talking to his mom. However i dont want to get my hopes up.

"Just give him time. It won't be easy. He has too much of his father in him. But don't give up. I think you would be good for him."

I smiled. Not knowing what to say. Or even if an answer was nessecary.

"Lets go." Young Do said having came back from the bathroom. "Your dad probably has the presidents bodyguards out looking for you."

I rolled my eyes and pushed him. "Oh your so funny."

His mom followed us outside to his motorbike. "Drive carefully. The roads will be really slippery after all the rain."

"I know mom." He sad hugging her. Once she let go of her son she hugged me tight too. "I hope I will see you again Soo Ha Yeon."

"Me too." I replied earnestly.

 

As we rode back to zeus hotel all the anxiety and worry I was trying to keep at bay was rising. I knew that I was going to be in so much trouble. I didn't dare check my phone for the many missed calls texts and voice mails I knew would be pilled up. My phone was on silent the whole time I was with Young Do and I hadn't thought to check it. We came to a stop outside the hotel doors and I slowly got off. I however didn't make a move to enter into the hotel. Young Do got off the bike handing the keys to the valet and walked off towards the door. When he noticed I wasn't following he turned. "Aren't you coming?"

"Yeah. Just a minute."

I stood there taking deep breaths. I wasn't ready to face them. I was always perfect to them. There one and only child who was always obedient. Who could do no wrong. I didn't know how they would react to my unconscious act of rebellion. And how I would react to their dissapintment with me.

"Are you really scared of how your parents are going to react? You haven't even been gone long."

I nodded. "But its not just that. I was supposed to go with mom to this lunch today. I was supposed to meet some congressm

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[October 25] YES! I met my goal! LOL. I will start writting now for the next chapter and maybe before tomorrow is over have it uploaded.

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DreamyGongju
#1
Chapter 37: hay author-nim. i just found this story today and completed it in one go. i love it. the way you portrayed the characters and their feelings are just amazing. i just can't get enough of it. now i will follow sequel of this. thanks for the lovely story <3
TriciaPooh01 #2
Chapter 36: I just finished. Ugh I really wish you could make the sequel!
Koguma
#3
Chapter 36: Omg I love your story! I found it a couple of weeks or month ago but never got further than the first chapter because I never had the time, but since I got sick I had time to spend the day reading your story and I have to say it's one of the few stories that I actually really, really like and didn't drop after a few chapters (I'm sort of picky ahaha...)
So in short: I really like how you built the story, the characters are nicely, even if not perfectly portrayed, and I really started liking most of them (well, except for some not very likeable ones, haha). I really enjoyed reading your story and at the sad parts I even teared up a little (or maybe a little more, but I cry fast and listened to sad songs sooo ^^")
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sue_myungsoo
#4
Chapter 36: Wow! Thank you for the thoughts. I am so excited. I'll be sure to read it!
swathikurup #5
Chapter 36: oh.. authornim.. you made my day. i really love this story. a squel would e great. i always wanted a happy ending for choi young do. and this couple is the right thing that can happen.
sue_myungsoo
#6
Chapter 35: Oh my gosh! You actually got me crying authornim. I felt the same way about how young do's character end up in heirs. Your writing is very good. And i really wish to see sequel to this. I just can't get enough of this couple and how you write them to be. Keep up the good work! You're officially my favourite author now!
kyudirection #7
Chapter 35: i just finished reding it, and it was soooo good! keep up the good work^^
goldenmak1 #8
Chapter 35: i looooooooooved it . i feel i'm u're soul-twin , thinking about the same things i thought about , i mean i felt sorry for woo bin not being loved .
storys #9
Chapter 31: Wow I feel like it ended so fast . From the very beginning it was a great story . Congratulations !
Larosa #10
Chapter 29: Oh ding. You just make me day. I started to read this story when you finished chapter 29, and I thought that you won't complete it. It's such a great story. And you just completed it today, when I saw the update and completed sign, my eyes were like sprinkling. Thank so much, author-nim.