Chapter 12

Hold Me Tight [An Heirs Spinoff] EDITING
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Cha Eun Sung sat on the couch in my hotel room. Here eyes were still red and puffy from all the crying she had done. I watched her not knowing how to comfort her, not even wanting to comfort her. I still wasn't clear on what happened. But when I saw her in the hallway sobbing I couldn't walk away especially not after she looked at me with a pleading look in her eyes. All I knew that it was some argument that she had with Kim Tan. I sat down beside her on the couch. "What happened?" I asked her.

She sniffled and wiped at her eyes. Then smiled. "Its nothing. It isn't even a big deal. I think I just over reacted." I stared at her. No way it wasn't that big of a deal.

"Cha Eun Sung." I said.

She sighed. "Ok we got into an argument about something. The topic wasn't that big of a deal but somehow it blew up and Kim Tan was so mad and then he just walked away from me." She looked down at her lap her hair hidding her face and said in a soft voice. "He's never walked away from me before."

My heart ached.

She still loves him. I knew she was. I knew that one argument no matter how big wouldn't just end everything between them. But a little part of me was obviously hoping for this dissapointment I felt to be rising.

Cha Eun Sung's phone rung and even before she answered I knew who it would be. She looked at the phone bitting her lip. She glanced at me for a second before pessing the button and putting the phone up to her ear. "Yes." she said. I couldn't hear what was being said on the other line but Cha Eun Sung's eyes started to water up a little again. "Im at Zeus hotel." She paused. "Yes with Young Do." I closed my eyes and leaned back against the couch cousins. She was going to leave.

I tuned out of the rest of the conversation I didn't know that she had hung up until she touched my arm lightly. "Young Do Ah." I opened my eyes and looked at her. "Im going to wait for Kim Tan downstairs." She went to stand up and I grabbed her arm preventing her from standing. "You don't have to wait down their. He knows where you are. He can come up and get you." She looked at me sceptically. I smirked. "I'll be on my best behavior. I promise." I could tell that she didn't believe me. 

Minutes later their was a knock on the door. Ahha Kim Tan had finally arrived. Cha Eun Sung shot up off the couch and raced to the door, beating me. She flung it open and just stood their looking at him. After a second he grabbed her and wrapped her up in a tight hug. Ok that was enough of that. I didn't have to sit here and watch them. I lazily walked over to the door. Kim Tan looked over at me and said.

"Thanks for taking care of my girl." I chuckled. "Take care of your own girl next time. Before she becomes my girl."

Kim Tan tried to lunge at me but Eun Sung was holding onto him still. "Stop it." I laughed aloud. "Well this has been fun but, you can go now." I grasped the door ready to slam it in their faces.

"Thanks Young Do." She said.

I closed the door softly. I leaned back against the door eyes closed and breathed heavily. Then I felt my old famillar friend be

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[October 25] YES! I met my goal! LOL. I will start writting now for the next chapter and maybe before tomorrow is over have it uploaded.

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DreamyGongju
#1
Chapter 37: hay author-nim. i just found this story today and completed it in one go. i love it. the way you portrayed the characters and their feelings are just amazing. i just can't get enough of it. now i will follow sequel of this. thanks for the lovely story <3
TriciaPooh01 #2
Chapter 36: I just finished. Ugh I really wish you could make the sequel!
Koguma
#3
Chapter 36: Omg I love your story! I found it a couple of weeks or month ago but never got further than the first chapter because I never had the time, but since I got sick I had time to spend the day reading your story and I have to say it's one of the few stories that I actually really, really like and didn't drop after a few chapters (I'm sort of picky ahaha...)
So in short: I really like how you built the story, the characters are nicely, even if not perfectly portrayed, and I really started liking most of them (well, except for some not very likeable ones, haha). I really enjoyed reading your story and at the sad parts I even teared up a little (or maybe a little more, but I cry fast and listened to sad songs sooo ^^")
But - in case you'd like an a bit longer and more detailed review of your story (which I personally always enjoy reading, because it helps you more than a simple "omg I love your story please update soon!!" - even though I also love seeing those comments, haha) please follow this link to tumblr, since it was too long for a comment xD http://kogumai.tumblr.com/post/117022456822/review-recommendation-the-heirs-2-the
sue_myungsoo
#4
Chapter 36: Wow! Thank you for the thoughts. I am so excited. I'll be sure to read it!
swathikurup #5
Chapter 36: oh.. authornim.. you made my day. i really love this story. a squel would e great. i always wanted a happy ending for choi young do. and this couple is the right thing that can happen.
sue_myungsoo
#6
Chapter 35: Oh my gosh! You actually got me crying authornim. I felt the same way about how young do's character end up in heirs. Your writing is very good. And i really wish to see sequel to this. I just can't get enough of this couple and how you write them to be. Keep up the good work! You're officially my favourite author now!
kyudirection #7
Chapter 35: i just finished reding it, and it was soooo good! keep up the good work^^
goldenmak1 #8
Chapter 35: i looooooooooved it . i feel i'm u're soul-twin , thinking about the same things i thought about , i mean i felt sorry for woo bin not being loved .
storys #9
Chapter 31: Wow I feel like it ended so fast . From the very beginning it was a great story . Congratulations !
Larosa #10
Chapter 29: Oh ding. You just make me day. I started to read this story when you finished chapter 29, and I thought that you won't complete it. It's such a great story. And you just completed it today, when I saw the update and completed sign, my eyes were like sprinkling. Thank so much, author-nim.