Chapter 20

Hold Me Tight [An Heirs Spinoff] EDITING
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Choi Young Do

 

I was feeling a strange anxiety and restlessness so right after school I went to see my mom.

I walked into the shop and saw her standing behind the counter ringing up a customer. She smiled brightly at me once she noticed me and I smiled back. I went and took a seat at the table and waited for her to be over.

One image was stuck in my head.

The image of the pain that was on Ha Yeon's face today.

She looked so... Broken.

I sighed. I should have just given her space. She would have been back to following me around within a couple of days. But the simple truth was, i was afraid that she would realize she didn't need me in her life.

Since Ha Yeon literally ran into me my life hasn't been so unbearable.

She was always there beside me with that big smile.

Always talking drowning out the doubts and loneliness I always felt. I pushed so hard and forced the issue because I didn't want to lose her, now I think that's exactly what's happening.

I'm loosing her.

 

 

 

Lee SungYeol

 

I was playing my favorite computer game when all of a sudden I could hear my room door opening. Mom and dad were both gone and they always knocked before entering anyways. It could only be one other person. I sighed and without turning around said. "Yah Nara how many times do I have to tell you not to just walk in my house."

She came up beside me and ruffled my hair.

I turned around and watched her lay back on my bed and close her eyes. "You do know this isnt your house right? Why don't you go home and sleep?"

She didn't open her eyes. "No ones home."

I sighed turning back to the game. Her parents were never home, always off in a different counrry with no care about how their daughter was feeling. I knew that she hated being home alone. She cou

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[October 25] YES! I met my goal! LOL. I will start writting now for the next chapter and maybe before tomorrow is over have it uploaded.

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DreamyGongju
#1
Chapter 37: hay author-nim. i just found this story today and completed it in one go. i love it. the way you portrayed the characters and their feelings are just amazing. i just can't get enough of it. now i will follow sequel of this. thanks for the lovely story <3
TriciaPooh01 #2
Chapter 36: I just finished. Ugh I really wish you could make the sequel!
Koguma
#3
Chapter 36: Omg I love your story! I found it a couple of weeks or month ago but never got further than the first chapter because I never had the time, but since I got sick I had time to spend the day reading your story and I have to say it's one of the few stories that I actually really, really like and didn't drop after a few chapters (I'm sort of picky ahaha...)
So in short: I really like how you built the story, the characters are nicely, even if not perfectly portrayed, and I really started liking most of them (well, except for some not very likeable ones, haha). I really enjoyed reading your story and at the sad parts I even teared up a little (or maybe a little more, but I cry fast and listened to sad songs sooo ^^")
But - in case you'd like an a bit longer and more detailed review of your story (which I personally always enjoy reading, because it helps you more than a simple "omg I love your story please update soon!!" - even though I also love seeing those comments, haha) please follow this link to tumblr, since it was too long for a comment xD http://kogumai.tumblr.com/post/117022456822/review-recommendation-the-heirs-2-the
sue_myungsoo
#4
Chapter 36: Wow! Thank you for the thoughts. I am so excited. I'll be sure to read it!
swathikurup #5
Chapter 36: oh.. authornim.. you made my day. i really love this story. a squel would e great. i always wanted a happy ending for choi young do. and this couple is the right thing that can happen.
sue_myungsoo
#6
Chapter 35: Oh my gosh! You actually got me crying authornim. I felt the same way about how young do's character end up in heirs. Your writing is very good. And i really wish to see sequel to this. I just can't get enough of this couple and how you write them to be. Keep up the good work! You're officially my favourite author now!
kyudirection #7
Chapter 35: i just finished reding it, and it was soooo good! keep up the good work^^
goldenmak1 #8
Chapter 35: i looooooooooved it . i feel i'm u're soul-twin , thinking about the same things i thought about , i mean i felt sorry for woo bin not being loved .
storys #9
Chapter 31: Wow I feel like it ended so fast . From the very beginning it was a great story . Congratulations !
Larosa #10
Chapter 29: Oh ding. You just make me day. I started to read this story when you finished chapter 29, and I thought that you won't complete it. It's such a great story. And you just completed it today, when I saw the update and completed sign, my eyes were like sprinkling. Thank so much, author-nim.