Chapter 19

Hold Me Tight [An Heirs Spinoff] EDITING
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Choi Young Do

 

It was Tuesday and I was standing in front of Ha Yeon's locker. The girl was able to avoid through school yesterday and I wasn't able to figure out where her and Rachel went. Yoo Rachel, I don't know why she couldn't just help me out. Aishhh. I was getting impatient as I knew homeroom bell would be ringing soon. There was no way she could have come to her locker already, I had been standing here since the gates to school opened, and I was pissed about it. I never got to school this early and now that I did for her, she found a way to evade me again. I spotted Kim Tan walking down the hall towards me. I groaned. I didn't need this right now. He stopped beside me and leaned against a locker. "How you doing?" He asked. I just raised an eyebrow at him. "No seriously. You all healed up?" I chuckled. I knew Ha Yeon had said he came over to check on me when I was out of it but I guess I didn't fully believe it. "Worried about me?" He scoffed. "Never. What you doing just standing here?" I rubbed the back of my neck. No way I would admit that I was here waiting for a girl. He laughed outright. "You missed her. She saw you hear earlier and bolted in the other direction." I stood up straight and looked both ways down the hall. What? How had I missed that? Kim Tan was watching me laughing. "What did you do to her for her to be avoiding you like the plague?" I scowled at him and walked off without answering his question. I walked into homeroom as the teacher was talking. She sighed. "Choi Young Do we've had this talk already. Stop coming in late." I ignored her and walked over to where Ha Yeon sat watching me wide eyed. I grabbed her hand in mine and pulled her up from her seat. "What are you doing? Let go." She said just as the teacher called out. "Choi Young Do!" I dragged her from the room as she yanked on my arm trying to get me to release her. I held firm and led her outside of the school. She glared at me fiearcly. "Why do you always have to cause a scene?" She asked. "I wouldn't have to if you weren't avoiding me." Her face turned red and she gave a forced laugh. "I'm not avoiding you. I don't know what your talking about." She insisted turning her face away from me. "There is no point in lying. Just act normal and stop avoiding me." She turned back to look at me incredulously."How am I supposed to do that? How can I pretend, when I like you and you don't like me? Huh?" She asked her voice breaking. "Why do you keep searching me out and pulling me back in when I'm trying to let go?" I could see her eyes begin to water."Let go of my hand." She said in a low voice. I looked down to see that I did in fact still had her hand gripped in mine. I let go and she stepped back from me. "Choi Young Do,Soo Ha Yeon!" The teacher called out. "Class time isn't for working out you're relationship problems. Get back inside now!" Ha Yeon rushed past me and up the steps diss

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[October 25] YES! I met my goal! LOL. I will start writting now for the next chapter and maybe before tomorrow is over have it uploaded.

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DreamyGongju
#1
Chapter 37: hay author-nim. i just found this story today and completed it in one go. i love it. the way you portrayed the characters and their feelings are just amazing. i just can't get enough of it. now i will follow sequel of this. thanks for the lovely story <3
TriciaPooh01 #2
Chapter 36: I just finished. Ugh I really wish you could make the sequel!
Koguma
#3
Chapter 36: Omg I love your story! I found it a couple of weeks or month ago but never got further than the first chapter because I never had the time, but since I got sick I had time to spend the day reading your story and I have to say it's one of the few stories that I actually really, really like and didn't drop after a few chapters (I'm sort of picky ahaha...)
So in short: I really like how you built the story, the characters are nicely, even if not perfectly portrayed, and I really started liking most of them (well, except for some not very likeable ones, haha). I really enjoyed reading your story and at the sad parts I even teared up a little (or maybe a little more, but I cry fast and listened to sad songs sooo ^^")
But - in case you'd like an a bit longer and more detailed review of your story (which I personally always enjoy reading, because it helps you more than a simple "omg I love your story please update soon!!" - even though I also love seeing those comments, haha) please follow this link to tumblr, since it was too long for a comment xD http://kogumai.tumblr.com/post/117022456822/review-recommendation-the-heirs-2-the
sue_myungsoo
#4
Chapter 36: Wow! Thank you for the thoughts. I am so excited. I'll be sure to read it!
swathikurup #5
Chapter 36: oh.. authornim.. you made my day. i really love this story. a squel would e great. i always wanted a happy ending for choi young do. and this couple is the right thing that can happen.
sue_myungsoo
#6
Chapter 35: Oh my gosh! You actually got me crying authornim. I felt the same way about how young do's character end up in heirs. Your writing is very good. And i really wish to see sequel to this. I just can't get enough of this couple and how you write them to be. Keep up the good work! You're officially my favourite author now!
kyudirection #7
Chapter 35: i just finished reding it, and it was soooo good! keep up the good work^^
goldenmak1 #8
Chapter 35: i looooooooooved it . i feel i'm u're soul-twin , thinking about the same things i thought about , i mean i felt sorry for woo bin not being loved .
storys #9
Chapter 31: Wow I feel like it ended so fast . From the very beginning it was a great story . Congratulations !
Larosa #10
Chapter 29: Oh ding. You just make me day. I started to read this story when you finished chapter 29, and I thought that you won't complete it. It's such a great story. And you just completed it today, when I saw the update and completed sign, my eyes were like sprinkling. Thank so much, author-nim.