Chapter 15

Hold Me Tight [An Heirs Spinoff] EDITING
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By saturday afternoon Nara had worn me down about going clubbing with her. I agreeded because mostly I nedded something to distract me from my constat thoughts of Choi Young Do.

I was currently packing a bag in preperation for spending the night at Nara's house.

"Who is this girl again?" Mom asked as I came down the stairs from my room and into the dinning room.

I rolled my eyes. "She's a friend from school." I told her.

"Do we know her parents?" Dad asked.

I shrugged. "Maybe. Her mom's a super model and her dad's a actor."

"Entertainers." Mom said flatly.

Oh here we go. I wasnt in the mood for my parents holy tha  thou elitist bull.

"Nara is my best friend so please dont say anything bad about her parents. Im going to her house. I will see you guys tomorrow."

 

At Nara's house she insisted that I undergo a makeover. She said I couldn't go clubbing looking like a primary school student. She was such a drama queen, my fashion senese wasnt that outdated.

In the end I turned out looking like your avaerage club girl. I eas wearing a black mini skirt halter top and heels. I absolutely hated heels. But I wore them to make Nara happy. She said it would ruin her masterpiece if I didnt.

I actually had on makeup when usually I didnt even bother. My hair was curled and teased into what Nara called 'y tousled waves'. It just looked like bed head to me.

We arrived at a club in the itaewon district and I was nervous. I jad never been clubbing before. Nara walked straight up to the bouncer bypassing the long line. I quickly followed her.

"Hay Nara." He said. "You brought a new friend! Minah and Yura are already inside."

He opened the door for Nara and me and we went inside. "I can't wait for you to meet the girls!" She shouted over the loud music. I just nodded not wanting to have to yell to be heard.

I followed Nara through the packed bodies on the dance floor to a booth in the back that had two girls and four guys.

Nara screamed. "Girls!"

The two girls jumped up and and enfolded Nara into a hug.

"Girls this is my friend Soo Ha Yeon."

The girls smiled and bowed slightly. "And this is Mina and Yura. They graduated last year."

Ahhh seniors. I bowed politely. "Nice to meet you both."

"Ok with introsuctions done. Who are these cute boys?" Nara asked turning to the booth to look at them some more. "We just found them." Yura said. "One for each of us." Mina chimmed in.

They were acting like these guys were puppies that they found on the street.

I was stuck having to make conversation with a boy named Kyuhyun. I was just in the middle of having to remove his hand from my thigh for the

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[October 25] YES! I met my goal! LOL. I will start writting now for the next chapter and maybe before tomorrow is over have it uploaded.

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DreamyGongju
#1
Chapter 37: hay author-nim. i just found this story today and completed it in one go. i love it. the way you portrayed the characters and their feelings are just amazing. i just can't get enough of it. now i will follow sequel of this. thanks for the lovely story <3
TriciaPooh01 #2
Chapter 36: I just finished. Ugh I really wish you could make the sequel!
Koguma
#3
Chapter 36: Omg I love your story! I found it a couple of weeks or month ago but never got further than the first chapter because I never had the time, but since I got sick I had time to spend the day reading your story and I have to say it's one of the few stories that I actually really, really like and didn't drop after a few chapters (I'm sort of picky ahaha...)
So in short: I really like how you built the story, the characters are nicely, even if not perfectly portrayed, and I really started liking most of them (well, except for some not very likeable ones, haha). I really enjoyed reading your story and at the sad parts I even teared up a little (or maybe a little more, but I cry fast and listened to sad songs sooo ^^")
But - in case you'd like an a bit longer and more detailed review of your story (which I personally always enjoy reading, because it helps you more than a simple "omg I love your story please update soon!!" - even though I also love seeing those comments, haha) please follow this link to tumblr, since it was too long for a comment xD http://kogumai.tumblr.com/post/117022456822/review-recommendation-the-heirs-2-the
sue_myungsoo
#4
Chapter 36: Wow! Thank you for the thoughts. I am so excited. I'll be sure to read it!
swathikurup #5
Chapter 36: oh.. authornim.. you made my day. i really love this story. a squel would e great. i always wanted a happy ending for choi young do. and this couple is the right thing that can happen.
sue_myungsoo
#6
Chapter 35: Oh my gosh! You actually got me crying authornim. I felt the same way about how young do's character end up in heirs. Your writing is very good. And i really wish to see sequel to this. I just can't get enough of this couple and how you write them to be. Keep up the good work! You're officially my favourite author now!
kyudirection #7
Chapter 35: i just finished reding it, and it was soooo good! keep up the good work^^
goldenmak1 #8
Chapter 35: i looooooooooved it . i feel i'm u're soul-twin , thinking about the same things i thought about , i mean i felt sorry for woo bin not being loved .
storys #9
Chapter 31: Wow I feel like it ended so fast . From the very beginning it was a great story . Congratulations !
Larosa #10
Chapter 29: Oh ding. You just make me day. I started to read this story when you finished chapter 29, and I thought that you won't complete it. It's such a great story. And you just completed it today, when I saw the update and completed sign, my eyes were like sprinkling. Thank so much, author-nim.