Title of Entry: Grief

Participant: ace_baby

Pairing Used: seoyeol

Prompts Used: Quote Prompt #12 and Song Prompt #10 

Judge: layseokris 

Title: 6/10

-I guess...I'm not alone in creating not-so-creative titles, HAHAHAH! But yeah, on a serious mode, *coughs* sometimes, some authors are able to pull off one-word titles really well. There are just some fo them who  perfectly wraps they fics with even just one word as a title. However, yeah...it comes a bit bland :((

Storyline: 15/20

-I honestly think that even this score looks a bit low, it's still fair enough for you. First thing, the storyline itself is already a bit common. I mean, most of the love stories between angels and demons are like this. The good sheep commits a sin as to the black sheep is actually able to show the good side. HOWEVER, it's not like I can always read an angel and demon love story with Seohyun and Chanyeol as the characters, right? So, all in all, I still want to commend you for being daring :) Let's face it, we all just need to improve. I myself find fantasy as a very broad and complicated genre so..yeah, again, you're not alone! Hahaha! 

Grammar: 21/25

-The only problem, as I've seen, is the incorrect tenses of your verbs. That's, of course, not really that noticeable to your average readers. I'm just really basing this grading system on a standard system so yeah...I have to point that out. A bit inconsistent with the tenses also, like from the use of past tenses to present tenses. Although, there's no problem with your subject-verb agreement :) That's a very good thing because most of the other participants, are very weak on that part.

Flow of Story: 24/30

-Again, since it's a fantasy, the story tends to get rushed or something...especially when it's within few chapters only. Plus, I personally prefer more details and narration for this genre because there are too many elements to be described. The essence of fantasy-themed fics lies within the appropriate choice of words and clear modifiers. It's not just a mere stroy-telling in which we can simply present exchange of words.

Bonus Points:

-seoyeol as main (2 Points)

-uses Quote Prompt #12 (3 Points)

-uses Song Prompt #10 (1 Point)

-fantasy as genre (3 Points)

From glamzchic:

-seoyeol as main (2 Points)

-seoyeol as main (Individual Scoring-2 Points) 

Total Score from layseokris: 79

Judge: immakpoploverable

Title: 7/10

Storyline: 14/20

Grammar: 22/25

Flow of Story: 26/30

Bonus Points:

-seoyeol as main (2 Points)

-seoyeol as main (Individual Scoring-3 Points)

-uses song prompt #10 (Individual Scoring-3 Points)

From glamzchic:

-seoyeol as main (2 Points)

-seoyeol as main (Individual Scoring-2 Points) 

Total Score from immakpoploverable: 81

Scores: 81 Points (Aida) + 79 Points (Anne)

Final Score: 80

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