Title of Entry: The Folded Wind

Participant: popgirl345543

Pairing Used: seokris

Prompts Used: Quote Prompt # 11

Judge: layseokris

Title: 10/10

-Up until now, I still can't squeeze the meaning of your title T.T I just infer that it's something along the paper planes they're flying and maybe the twist wherein Seohyun dies. Nevertheless, it's different in a definitely positive way. Do share us your notes on this :)

Storyline: 20/20

-Well, I don't know how many times I've said this but I really treasure stories wherein the girl and boy have been childhood friends then turn into lovers. I also see how the two of them kind of waver in their puberty (which is very true in reality. this period is the part wherein the childhood friends consider growing up and becoming more conscious of the fact that they're becoming adults).

Plus, it's angst. Not angst in way that each and every one has to die just to show the madness going on within the characters *coughs* just like my sadistic fic *coughs* But angst, in a way that even all of the sufferings and obstacles they've been through, they are able to find love that gives Seohyun and Kris courage and strength respectively. After the long wait for your comeback, I feel so blessed reading another work of yours T.T

Grammar: 25/25

-Do I even have to explain myself? HAHA! Oh, even before I forget, I love the individual titles for each chapters <3 What I love the most though is how you can seem to write as if the scenes I am reading is happening in front of me-even better than watching films and whatsoever. T.T 

Flow of Story: 30/30

-No fillers. It flows so smoothly and slowly that I am able to grasp the artistry of your fic.

Seohyun develops into a courageous girl, really becomes brave for her boyfriend. It's not just a simple heroin-ish act. I can see that she's not that daring in nature. Thus, the courage she has when she approaches her boyfriend's father comes from the love she has for Kris. 

Then there's Kris who receives so much strength for having Seohyun beside him. As I can see, if he's without Seohyun, Kris will break down immediately. Maybe he'll suffer depression. Maybe he'll turn like his father; doing the thug life and all. That's why it's really good to see him, in the end, freeing himself from Seohyun's death. Still, Seohyun is the one who gives him strength.

Bonus Points:

-seokris as main (1 Point)

From glamzchic:

-seokris as main (1 Point)

-seokris as main (Individual Scoring-3 Points)

Total Score from layseokris: 90

Judge: immakpoploverable

Title: 10/10

Storyline: 20/20

Grammar: 25/25

Flow of Story: 30/30

Bonus Points:

-song prompt (1 Point)

-seokris as main (1 Point)

-seokris as main (Individual Scoring-1 Point)

-angst as genre (Individual Scoring-3 Points)

From glamzchic:

-seokris as main (1 Point)

-seokris as main (Individual Scoring-3 Points)

Total Score from immakpoploverable: 91