Title of Entry: Entwined Souls

Participant: bratsplash18

Pairing Used: seohan

Judge: layseokris

Title: 8/10

-Not really one of the most unique titles you can come up with. Still, it's perfect for your fic :) And the title itself gives us a preview on what your story will end up like. Lastly, knowing you, this personally gives me the idea that it's about them-seohyun and luhan! Hahaha!

Storyline: 17/20

-First, it's an angst for seohan. Second, as you have said, it's inspired from EXO's debut song; Mama. Lastly, it's really daring if you to let Seohyun sacrifice herself at the end. Unique indeed :)

Grammar: 24/25

-Just an inconsistency for the tenses but nah, that's very unnoticable as the readers indulge their selves in your fic XD

Flow of Story: 28/30

-It isn't really too fast-paced. However, there are really just things that, I think, you must've elaborated more, hihi. Like for example, a little bit for EXO and Seohyun's first meet. I do think, though, that it's something very original and different. 

Bonus Points:

-seohan as main (1 Point)

-fantasy as genre (3 Points)

From glamzchic:

-seohan as main (1 Point)

-seohan as main (Individual Scoring-3 Points)

Total Score from layseokris: 85

Judge: immakpoploverable

Title: 9/10

Storyline: 19/20

Grammar: 24/25

Flow of Story: 27/30

Bonus Points:

-seohan as main (1 Point)

-seohan as main (Individual scoring- 1 Point)

-angst as genre (3 Points)

From glamzchic:

-seohan as main (1 Point)

-seohan as main (Individual Scoring-3 Points)

Total Score from immakpoploverable: 88