Title of Entry: At least

Participant: Hyunie_Maknae

Pairing Used: seohun 

Prompts Used: Song Prompt #6 and Lyric Prompt #3

Judge: layseokris

Title: 6/10

I'm sorry but I know that you can think of a better title. First, it doesn't really give an outlook of your fic. Nor does it symbolize the highlights of it. The phrase "at least" denotes various meanings and I do personally think that it's not good enough as a title :(

Storyline: 14/20

-I don't know if I just read too much angst or what, but the plot is actually popular here. The guy will ditch the girl for another girl. And the girl that he ditches is also the one that suffered a lot, just for him. Then she's going to meet a guy that will actually make the difference.

Grammar: 24/25

-Subject-verb agreement-check. Consistency in the usage of verbs (past tense)-check. This is actually your best feature. The choice of words is simple (understandable for everyone) and appropriate. If you use correct punctuations-specifically the quotation marks-I might have given a perfect twenty-five in terms of your grammar! :) Still, I do praise you for that!

Flow of Story: 20/30

-Honestly, your entry is also fast-paced. I never get the chance to enjoy it wholly because everything goes, like in a flash :( In a fic, the narration and the description (which both fall in this category) is very important. These things are actually the things that give readers the feeling or the scenarios that can enhance your story in their imagination. It's more than just telling or sharing a story. Plus, since it's in the internet, body languages and facial expression must be converted into words that the readers can grasp in simple reading. :)

As for the lyric prompt that you use, I really love it. Well, Sehun, who's definitely a lot better than Yonghwa, makes a greater and even better difference when he decides to stay with Seohyun. :)

Bonus Points:

-seohun as main (1 Point)

-lyric prompt #7 (1 Point)

From glamzchic:

-seohun as main (1 Point)

-seohun as main (Individual Scoring-2 Points)

Total Score from layseokris: 69

Judge: immakpoploverable

Title: 5/10

Storyline: 14/20

Grammar: 24/25

Flow of Story: 23/30

Bonus Points:

-seohun as main (1 point)

-seohun as main (3 points)(individual scoring)

-song prompt #6 (3 points)

-lyric prompt #3 (3 points)

-angst (3 Points)

From glamzchic:

-seohun as main (1 Point)

-seohun as main (Individual Scoring-2 Points)

Total Score from immakpoploverable: 82

Scores: 82 Points (Aida) + 69 Points (Anne)

Average: 75.5 + early bonus point (2 Points)

Final Score: 77.5

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