Title of Entry: Three Words

Participant: saseom

Pairing Used: seohun

Prompts Used: Quote prompt #3

Judge: layseokris

Title: 7/10

-At first, I am thinking of giving you the lowest points in terms of giving a title. But after a lot of reviews and thorough analyzations, I then realize that the title is just precise and suitable. First, it is precise because the very content/plot of your entry revolves around those three words that Sehun needs to say. It is also suitable for the prompt that you use (If you love me, let me know...right?) I'm so glad that I am also revising my reviews or else.../breaks a sweat

Storyline: 18/20

-Original, do I have to say it out loud? ORIGINAL! Hahah...in terms of originality, of course, you're topping the list. First of all, it's not everyday we read a seohun fic with Sehun as the oppa right? (Or maybe I just read a little amount of seohun fics? XD) Then there's SNSD as the rookies with EXO as the seniors, lol. Very creative /winks Though of course, I spare two points because the story between aspiring idols are already too popular.

Grammar: 24/25

-Almost...almost perfect :) There are mistakes. But I highly doubt if a reader can actually notice those things. Unless your reader is a Grammar Nazi XD

Flow of Story: 30/30

-Perfect because within the ten chapters you provide us, you have given enough (even more I guess) development among the characters. Sehun seems like he only cares for Seohyun. But then Daeun comes into the picture and immediately steals Sehun's attention. And in the end, Sehun comes back for Seohyun.

As for Seohyun, at first I can see that she's insecure. Actually, even when Daeun comes, she still is. And that makes her more guilty whenever she's thinking of her feelings. Like, she's blaming herself for liking Sehun whom she initially treats a brother.

Then there's seohan as a side pairing. Though I don't think Seohyun wavers in her choice between Sehun and Luhan, she shows a distinct aura/feeling when she's with Luhan. Maybe because Luhan is able to console her. Or she needs distraction and whatsoever.

Lastly, I commend you and your hard work for finishing this! Not that I'm basing with the length or what---but I really want to thank you for giving us eleven great chapters all in all! :)

Bonus Points:

-seohun as main (1 Point)

-NON-AU as genre (3 Points)

From glamzchic:

-seohun as main (1 Point)

-seohun as main (Individual Scoring-2 Points)

Total Score from layseokris: 86

Judge: immakpoploverable

Title: 8/10

Storyline: 20/20

Grammar: 24/25

Flow of Story: 30/30

Bonus Points:

-seohun as main (1 Points)

-seohun as main (Individual Scoring-3 Points)

-uses quote prompt #3 (Individual Scoring-2 Points)

From glamzchic:

-seohun as main (1 Point)

-seohun as main (Individual Scoring-2 Points)

Total Score from immakpoploverable: 91