Title of Entry: Answers.

Participant: MasterTrollSama

Pairing Used: seokris

Prompts Used: Picture Prompt #1

Judge: layseokris

Title: 10/10

-At first, I am thinking that the title is too simple for my liking, lol. But after a lot of reviews, I then realize how better it is than what I've been thinking about before. In the foreword, you leave a piece of Seohyun's confused mind. And the whole plot actually runs around Seohyun's confusion, her questions that need answers-which is then answered eventually as the story ends. 

Storyline: 18/20

-It's not like everyday we can read a fic that has action+angst+violence (whatever it is) as the genre and that features lay + seohyun + kris. And I personally think that you're the kind of author who deceives the readers-in a very good and comical way. You gives your readers these and those details without them realizing that a great, wicked twist is ahead of them. Even with your previous and current works, I do think that though you're mainly just trolling-you're able to catch the attention of the readers because they know too well that you still have something else.

Grammar: 25/25

-Simply perfect. Plus, I want to commend your terms since they do help a lot for the readers to actually feel thrilled, love and angered; all at the same time.

Flow of Story: 30/30

-It's oneshot but everything flows perfectly. Usually, some fails to present these and those details. Yet you manage to write with a perfect progression. You don't just tell that Seohyun and Lay is cheating on Kris. Instead, you imply the reason why they are doing that from the first part of the story-where Kris avoids making any interactions with his wife. You don't simply just tell that Lay's just using Seohyun because he's deranged or what. You imply that he's envious of his brother during Kris and his friend's conversation-and even some few viewpoints from Lay himself. Lastly, the questions and confusions Seohyun have at your foreword are all resolved by the end. Though not directly, pretty sure everyone gets what you want to say. :)

Bonus Points:

-seokris as main (1 Point)

-uses my OT3 (2 Points)

From glamzchic:

-seokris as main (1 Point)

-seokris as main (Individual Socring-3 Points)

Total Score from layseokris: 90

Judge: immakpoploverable

Title: 8/10

Storyline: 19/20

Grammar: 25/25

Flow of Story: 30/30

Bonus Points:

-seokris as main (1 Point)

-seokris as main (Individual Scoring-1 Point)

-uses picture prompt 1 (Individual Scoring-1 Point)

-angst as genre (Individual Point-3 Points)

From glamzchic:

-seokris as main (1 Point)

-seokris as main (Individual Socring-3 Points)

Total Score from immakpoploverable: 92