Title of Entry: When I Was Your Man

Participant: fyeahkpop

Pairing Used: seokris 

Judge: layseokris

Title: 8/10

-The title says every single thing about it-what more to say? (Plus, this is Bruno Mars' song and I'm kind of having a last-song-syndrome at that song that time XD) I spare two points for being a little common though :)

Storyline: 16/20

-Hmmm, the issue between former relationships right? I'm just happy that Seohyun's consistent with her decision. She doesn't waver-well probably because she really loves Lay already (and is actually happier). We all know that between seokris and seolay-a lot will choose the first one. You make a difference by sticking with seolay until the end :)

Grammar: 21/25

-There are few mispelled words, few mistakes on the tenses of verb and some slips on subject-verb agreement. Though, as one gets absorbed with your fics, I don't think it's still that noticable. :)

Flow of Story: 22/30

-Yours is actually on a fifty-fifty. I think it's fast and slow at the same time! UGH, I  don't really know how to explain it. Because I do have these feelings that you can actually give more details-but at the same time, I think that it's already the juice of what you have in your mind. IDEK what I'm already talking about.

Bonus Points:

-seokris as main (1 Point)

-uses my OT3 (2 Point)

From glamzchic:

-seokris as main (1 Point)

-seokris as main (3 Points)

Total Score from layseokris: 74

Judge: immakpoploverable

Title: 8/10

Storyline: 17/20

Grammar: 21/25

Flow of Story: 24/30

Bonus Points:

-seokris as main (1 Point)

-seokris as main (Individual Scoring-1 Point)

-angst (3 Points)

From glamzchic:

-seokris as main (1 Point)

-seokris as main (3 Points)

Total Score from immakpoploverable: 79

Scores: 79 Points (Aida) + 74 Points (Anne)

Average: 76.5 + early bonus point (2 Points)

Final Score: 78.5

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