Title of Entry: Invisible Monsters

Participant: AutumnHearts

Pairing Used: seohan

Prompt Used: Quote Prompt #13

Judge: layseokris

Title: 10/10

-Unique title is unique. It epitomizes the of your fic. It highlights Seohyun's untold story. It's just, fuh-reaking attractive-catches my attention immediately. And of course, in your description, I actually get a hint that Seohyun has that invinsible monster within her.

Storyline: 18/20

-Well, I think it's a common thing that between a han-seo-kris fic, seohan always prevails /laughs bitterly. Setting that small rant aside, this is actually refreshing and surprising from a seokris-ff writer. And honestly, I'll also choose her friendship with Luhan over her romantic feelings towards Kris. I think that, that also, makes a huge different from the usual friendship vs romance story. Everybody chooses romance and it's pretty sad because the real significance of the uncorrupted and unyielding ties are kind of tarnished. HAHAHAHA! Enough! I'm getting really absorbed, am I? I am not even able to point out how I love the settings you use! Sort of like medieval times? Like in western history where such kind of crafts and magical stuffs become so popular.

Grammar: 25/25

-Who am I kidding with? You're flawless XP And present tense is not something just for anyone to pull of oh-so-scrupulously.

Flow of Story: 28/30

-I am so close in giving you full remarks for the flow of your fic. I am just a tad deprived? Yeah, just a little because I'm still kind of thirsty for what actually happens before. Like, how does she meet Kris? How's the change? Sort of a preface-your prologue in the foreword is probably the main cause for my selfish need-for-more feelings. The rest is of course beautifully written. The uprising part wherein Luhan still reminds Seohyun about Kris worth of her protection. The wherein Kris decides Seohyun and Luhan both to be captured dead or alive. The falling action wherein Seohyun unleashes the monster within her. And the conclusion-best conclusion one can ever have- to finally choose Luhan over Kris. Almost perfect!

And even before I can forget it, the quote is very proper to the whole thing. The first part clearly shows Seohyun's unrequited love towards the towering man. (I hope you have elaborated more of it though T.T)

Bonus Points:

-seohan as main (1 Point)

-fantasy as genre (3 Points)

-quote prompt #13 (3 Points)

From glamzchic:

-seohan as main (1 Point)

-seohan as main (Individual Scoring-3 Points)

Total Score from layseokris: 92

Judge: immakpoploverable

Title: 10/10

Storyline: 20/20

Grammar: 25/25

Flow of Story: 29/30

Bonus Points:

-seohan as main (1 Point )

-seohan as main (Individual scoring-1 Point)

-angst as genre (3 Points)

From glamzchic:

-seohan as main (1 Point)

-seohan as main (Individual Scoring-3 Points)

Total Score from immakpoploverable: 93