Title of Entry: White and Black

Participant: jatinobombre

Pairing Used: seotao

Prompts Used: Picture Prompt #1

Judge: layseokris 

Title: 7/10

-I really think that this title is already usual among fics. But after so much time of thinking, I then start to appreciate its essence. If I'm to interpret it, the title "white and black" shows contrast. That goes the same for Seohyun in contrast to her supposed-to-be grand ballet performance. And Tao's actions in their relationship is pretty much the greatest factor for such "contrast".  

Storyline: 15/20

-Well, also, Seohyun being the unstable ballerina is typical. It's great, for me, because I've always been deprived if this genre. Any fic, as long as the conflict mainly happens in the character's mind, interests me so much. But of course, it's again only for me.  

Grammar: 25/25

-Even in your another fic (seohun, I think), your English grammar is the most commendable thing about you. :) Appropriate terms, consistent usage of past tense.

Flow of Story: 18/30

-What's very disappointing though is your lack of development on your characters. It's very short :( I mean, the significance of Seohyun's insecurity towards her boyfriend, the details as for how the conflict starts, and a decent preface for their past and stable relationship...

Bonus Points:

-seotao as main (3 Points)

-seotao as main (Individual scoring-1 Point)

-psychological thriller (3 Points)

From glamzchic:

-seotao as main (3 Points)

-seotao as main (Individual Scoring-2 Points)

Total Score from layseokris: 77

Judge: immakpoploverable

Title: 7/10

Storyline: 16/20

Grammar: 25/25

Flow of Story: 27/30

Bonus Points:

-seotao as main (1 Points)

-seotao as main (Individual Scoring-2 Points)

-uses picture prompt #1 (1 Point)

-angst as genre (3 Points)

From glamzchic:

-seotao as main (3 Points)

-seotao as main (Individual Scoring-2 Points)

Total Score from immakpoploverable: 87