Title of Entry: Awaiting Love

Participant: seoulheiress

Pairing Used: seoyeol

Prompts Used: Quote Prompt #1&7, Picture prompt #5, Song Prompt #10

Judge: layseokris

Title: 7/10

-It seems too common at first. But I then realize how much fitting it can be to the whole plot.

Storyline: 14/20

-After SM releases BDC, full version, I think there's like a massive number of fanfics inspired by it. Though, using a more modern settings in your entry makes a slightly more unique feeling. Hahah! It's always ending sadly-though you clearly emphasize that even if they're not together in the end, they still love each other. Plus, seoyeol as their daughter is someone I do not expect.

Grammar: 21/25

-There are few unnoticable mistakes (and am wondering if that's because you haven't edited it out XD). I'm glad that you use present tense. It's difficult for me tbh. Plus, it keeps me away from consistency XD

Flow of Story: 20/30

-Not really bad. Pretty satisfied with how the entry lasts. Though I still think that you can do better :) For example, include some moments of Chanyeol and Seoyeol-letting us see how they're doing without Seohyun. I do think that in Chapter 1, you can also include like how they are usually so that we can compare it with the day when Seohyun's finally off to marry King Jung's son :)

I see that you also use Seohyun's quote :) Personally, I never know that Seohyun is Chanyeol's first love. I think that's what you lack in regards to the quote prompt that you have incorporated. Though, I do agree with how Chanyeol messes up with his love, Seohyun. Of course, he must know that Seohyun is a mermaid and he's a human and those two won't ever be the same :(

The picture is so suitable for Chapter 2's scene. :)

Lastly, the song BDC is, of course, very fitting to your plot. Though your entry is less angst-y than the song...at least, you're able to do justice on it XD

Kidding aside, fantasy as a genre is very complex. I just hope you are more detailed when it comes to some things that can actually present the story in a fantastical manner. Anyway, I'm also lacking in regards to fantasy but we still have room for improvement right? :) Thanks for being daring!

Bonus Points:

-seoyeol as main (2 points)

-fantasy as genre (3 points)

-quote prompt #7 (3 points)

-picture prompt #5 (2 points)

-song prompt #10 (1 point)

From glamzchic:

-seoyeol as main (2 Points)

-seoyeol as main (Individual Scoring-2 Points)

Total Score from layseokris: 77

Judge: immakpoploverable

Title: 9/10

Storyline: 17/20

Grammar: 23/25

Flow of Story: 23/30

Bonus Points:

-seoyeol as main (2 points)

-uses seoyeol (Individual scoring-3 Points)

-angst as genre (3 points)

-uses quote prompt #1 (3 points)

-uses quote prompt #7 (3 points)

-uses picture prompt #5 (3 points)

-uses song prompt #10 (3 points)

From glamzchic:

-seoyeol as main (2 Points)

-seoyeol as main (Individual Scoring-2 Points)

Total Score from immakpoploverable: 96

Scores: 96 Points (Aida) + 77 Points (Anne)

Average: 86.5 + early bonus point (2 Points)

Final Score: 88.5

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