The Past

Change of Heart
17 years ago

“Umma! Appa!” shouted a 3 year old. She ran over to them with her arms wide opened. Her dad caught here and lifted her up in the air. Her mother laughed and smiled brightly. It was the perfect little family.

7 years ago

“Yah where are you?!?” asked her father. “I just got out of practice? Why Appa?” His daughter replied. “You’re mother is in the hospital!”

“Honey please be strong…” Father whispered silently to himself. His daughter rushed into the waiting room where her Appa waited. The doctor came out and told them the news. “She didn’t make it..”

5 years ago

The daughter came home to see glass shattered everywhere. Beer bottles laid empty in a pile, her father drunk as hell. “Appa that’s enough!” she exclaimed as she snatched the bottle of alcohol away from him. “GIVE IT BACK!” he yelled in rage. Her father smacked her across the face. She fell on the ground as her dad beat her down.

Now- _____’s POV

I stood in the exact spot where I used to get abused. I walked into the bathroom and stared at the mirror. The charming girl I used to be vanished in thin air.





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pleaseman #1
Chapter 10: i still not done but it so good
marshmallow_head
#2
So CUTE! Poor Jjongie. Hope he finds someone soon :D
I loved it! Such a GREAT ending! Especially the very last scentence of the story, BESIDES 'THEEE ENDDD!!!'. I LOVE IT!
WinterRose
#3
Awesome! :) Min Ho won in the end, but poor Jong Hyun ;( Great job and you write very well. :D
Alzina #4
i really loved reading this story...i read it one go...<br />
I love Minho...but i still feel sorry jongie!!<br />
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good job ^__^
carmelabiancx #5
omg i cried T.T haha i was really happy and feel sorry for jongie oppa :) but i like this :)
bluecheese #6
I cried. ;_________; <br />
SJASKLJFKHS THIS WAS THE BEST THING EVER. ^^ I really love this, I think i was a silent reader. of SHIZZ I'M SORRY. :[ I'm such a bad person, I'm always a silent reader. gahh, I really loved this though. :D
yuki92 #7
awww. sweet ending=DD
Burning91Rose
#8
TT^TT it was such a beautiful ending<br />
I acutally had tears coming out when i saw it say completed<br />
Yes you need to update your big bang one